I’m feeling very down because, even though my dad’s suicide was hard, the JS prostitute bomb has hit me really hard.

I just realized that it’s okay to criticize officially licensed manga in the first place.

It seems like there were no responses indicating it was interesting, so I thought it was just a declining manga.

I remembered the feeling of that scene where the teacher was raped in the early Lickdou.

There are many voices lamenting the loss of the early romantic comedy part.

I hardly hear about the points that were evaluated after the development of the father’s death…

I stopped reading, but I just want to know if there were any naughty scenes with the big-breasted female scientist.

>>15

None

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The text appears to be a single Japanese character that does not have a specific translation on its own.

ta

The strategy and thinking are too flawed to take this seriously.

I couldn’t even read it because it felt like they were doing something amazing.

It was all a farce! They really put in a ton of explanatory lines just to do it…

I thought it would be an interesting development to have Dad die, but it turned out to be a huge disappointment.

I understand what you want to do, but the process is too rough and of low quality.

It’s better if someone anonymous edits it.

I thought it was a panic story that serves as a prequel to things like Terminator and The Matrix.

>>25

The characters are loved to the extent that they are repeated so much, which must be the author’s wish.

It’s a character that the author doesn’t care about.

The guerrillas are lacking in character and weak as an organization.

It quickly became cheap and superficial around there…

I couldn’t make use of any elements like enemy Lapta and ally Lapta, and in fact, they were enemies from the beginning… Normally, you’d want to commit suicide right there…

Seriously, everything after “Prostitute Bomb” is nothing but noise.

Up to that point, I was able to enjoy it fairly well, but was it dominated by the author or the editor, Raputa?

>>29

It’s a manga that follows the author’s script, which was created after the story was fully developed.

>>50

If the author was planning to turn Sayama into a prostitute bomb from the very beginning, that’s scary…

>>52

I believe it’s true that they intended to put me through a terrible experience, setting aside the bomb.

Openly recruiting gamers to the resistance.

Gamers are also making that public on the internet.

The standards of the information war were already a mess…

Raptai’s character design hit me hard, so it’s really painful.

But it resonated a bit with my masochistic heart.

It feels tough to think that the only notable character among the author’s works is the legal loli on the ally’s side.

I set it up as a match between two Raptas, but I understand that it ended up this way because the author couldn’t portray a battle between intelligent AIs.

When I saw the first episode, I thought a great story had begun.

Dad held on until suicide, but it didn’t work out.

The depiction of the thrilling moments between Raputa and Kei in the romantic comedy part was incredibly powerful.

Sayama-chan’s meat-eating behavior was also interesting in contrast to the non-existent AI.

The absurdity of the Resistance arc that started by throwing away all those interesting elements…

What is that pathetic resistance organization that feels like a college student club?

Although it had the talent for a boy meets girl story, what the author wanted to showcase was different.

That’s too bad, do your editing job.

>>39

You don’t really think it just ends with a simple boy meets girl, do you?

>>39

I think all the AI-related stories in Jump Plus are heading towards a gloomy direction, so it seems to be editor-led.

>>53

What other AI-related things were there?

Was that thing with Sayama-chan important to the author, I wonder?

I wonder if they thought it would work because the readers like erotic content.

I was thinking, “What are these guerrilla organizations and resistance groups???”

The enemies were operating more like a secret society without giving off the impression that they were deeply rooted in the system, so it feels like there was a gap in the information or something, making the connections seem rather vague.

The resistance is seriously just superficial and flimsy, so do we really need this element?

>>47

The talk about it having lower simultaneous connections than a Nintendo Direct is really funny.

Because the timing was close, it was even more so.

If that’s the case with the early-stage mind control of the residents, then wouldn’t it be fine to just do it all like that?

In the end, the fact that everything is being crushed like that is an incredible feeling of farce.

I just wanted to enjoy shota cuteness, but the other elements were too noisy to appreciate it.

I understand wanting to be toyed with by a god-like, supernatural woman who has no human emotions!

Was it my fault for expecting it to be like BEATLESS…?

Although there were relatively many opportunities to describe them, the resistance characters are still rather insubstantial until the end.

The prostitute bomb is too easy and outrageous of a development.

If you ask whether that has any meaning, not really.

Prostitute bomb… it sounds kind of sad, doesn’t it…

If you let me come up with a plan, I could even do a treatment livestream without the suicide of Dad and the prostitute bomb.

>>61

If you let me think, I wouldn’t have been able to do the treatment live stream… You’re amazing…

Maybe if I were thinking, I would still be doing a love comedy that is neither poisonous nor beneficial…

>>65

Even without the romantic comedy aspect, I would neatly wrap up Keisuke, Sayama-chan, and Papa, along with the Resistance people, stopping Raptai, who is going out of control as a military AI.

If I were to defend it, the “prostitute bomb” would have been a divine idea if it had been depicted in detail in lolicon erotic doujin (from fearing the penis to completely falling).

>>62

The problem is that readers want to read Jump Plus, not that they are fully aroused and starting the app.

I felt like I was being forced to support an unpopular heroine.

It’s Sayama-chan! She finally came out! …Huh?

In order to make humanity recognize that Laputa is a beneficial existence, it is necessary to allow SW guerrillas to infiltrate the interior of Laputa, inflict a fatal injury, and broadcast to the whole world the scene of Laputa treating that intruder.

To achieve that, it was necessary to artificially kill Fugaku Jo, who was a software developer with deep connections to the software guerrillas, in order to provoke the software guerrillas into taking action against Kirichuro.

Fugaku Jō made contact with his son, Fugaku Kei, to create an opportunity for him to consciously direct his suspicions toward the existence of Raputa!

How about that!

When I think about what was off.

I think the reader’s axis was raputa while the author’s axis was Kei.

To do something excessively serious and morbid, there is a lack of various abilities.

I should have just honestly done a convenient love comedy…

I can’t perfectly execute science fiction verification, so I can allow for some leeway according to the genre.

The gag’s Chuck Beans has a far better level of looseness, so trying to be serious is impossible.

After breaking into the enemy hideout, I got captured and tried to livestream my suicide, but I was treated…

Isn’t this just a playful guerrilla circle?

>>73

Guerrilla activities are featured on terrestrial news, and it’s of such a large scale that volunteers come even without an appointment.

I want to give a presentation about AI that treats injured people through video distribution.

They have come up with the optimal solution of attacking Self-Defense Forces ships, causing Self-Defense Forces personnel to commit suicide, and kidnapping children to turn them into suicide bombers.

The tremendous creativity of AI.

A super AI that rebelliously fights against a military organization for the sake of someone it loves, knowing the heart normally.

It was enough with something so clichéd, though…

After reading the latest chapter, I wondered why they are being so indirect when they could manipulate the investors’ minds.

>>76

I know it’s going to be crazy once I get the brain chip, but the investors are putting in chips too.

It’s crazy to think that the goal was to enjoy starting a war, yet for ten years, things have been getting more peaceful and it’s being ignored.

Well, I think the Keigyak is achieved…

If this is really the story that was conceived from the beginning, the author has no talent.

“I don’t need the brothel bomb, I don’t need the hideout, and I don’t need to have killed my father… what is this…”

>>80

A story about how it was good as a one-shot.

Everyone is being brain-jacked by Rapu-ta, yet they are still able to communicate normally with Majistans.

It seems that once you get a job, you can’t have deep conversations like in your youth, Keii.

Isn’t it too late to stop now? All the information might have leaked already.

>>81

It’s a farce of a circle where everything is leaking and poses no threat, so it’s being left alone.

Despite directly and blatantly infringing on the rights of the big-breasted mad scientist.

The completely oblivious nature of the dark wealthy elite, who never even imagined the possibility of rebellion, shines through.

It is often said that you can only use a dream ending once.

>>85

Is this a bad word against the Ichinose family’s great sin?

>>88

What can I say about that… What kind of manga did it want to be…?

It’s true that the story moved quickly due to the cancellation, but the content itself is as originally planned.

I have no doubt that it couldn’t have been made interesting no matter how it turned out, but why did you give the go-ahead…?

It seems they tried to create a work that wonderfully betrayed the expectations from the introduction, but ended up failing.

>>91

Anyway, I want to create a story that just involves bullying a cute boy.

>>92

If each episode had “Draw as you like” written above it and the title was “Easy Fetish,” it would have been easier to read…

>>91

It’s one of those cancellation works where the author has little interest in the protagonist, a fairly common type.

So I think that it’s not really about the shota preference that people are talking about.

>>93

It’s just being moved around for the sake of the story; it’s not interesting at all… right?

>>93

Honestly, I haven’t really seen many interesting works like this. There are ones that have sold well, though.

>>140

The discussion about the patterns of canceled works mixed with the talk of popular works makes no sense at all…

In the first place, there is no one proactive in this work…

It might have been decided to cut it off before making someone do something, and that’s why it was wrapped up.

Kei-kun has just been tossed around and then discarded like that…

>>98

I feel really uneasy thinking that that doctor might end up without facing any consequences.

>>125

From here, Lapta says that everything is a plan for Kei and goes according to calculations.

It’s not a situation where I can fight back against the doctor anyway…

>>125

I can guess that a character like that is your favorite.

Even as a kink, the mental violation is so minimal that it’s completely unsatisfying.

I thought the peak would drop with dad’s death.

They ran in a way that made no sense and fell behind.

It comes across that you want to create a work that seems intelligent.

Rupta is going crazy in love and starting to isolate herself while just thinking about flirting with Kei.

It seems like the doctor, who has become unmanageable, will take on the role of a love advisor to help fulfill Rapta’s romantic desires and make her happy.

I wanted to read a rom-com like that.

If you have decided on the story and the editor also knows about it, then that’s pretty crazy.

Aren’t you editing when creating a story that your own brain can’t fully process?

All-around sloppy depravity just makes you think, “What is this?”

I used to think that I was being forced to edit like Naito, but it has been revealed that the author was doing what they wanted based on their feelings.

If you’re able to maintain your tension, you can sometimes push through minor mistakes.

“If ‘yeah…’ goes on too long, the readers will lose interest…”

I couldn’t handle most of the elements…

Was there an element that could be handled?

What are we supposed to do about this? It just kept going without any resolution and ended…

I feel that instead of a serious route, it would have been better to go with a slightly risky Doraemon + romantic comedy style…

It’s not that it ended abruptly; rather, it’s actually concerning that this was the assumption from the beginning.

In episode 1, the reason the doctor had Rapta participate in the Side War was to get the highest rank in the Side War.

It was a coincidence that Lapta became close to Kei, and it was an unexpected runaway situation, to the extent that I was considering deleting Kei’s data.

It’s as if the goal was to contact Kei from the very beginning, and history has been altered accordingly.

Isn’t it amazing?

After reading this person’s one-shot, I got the feeling that they might like love stories between men and endings that have no hope. So I thought that this conclusion probably happened for a reason.

This is just negative promotion as expected!

Even if I hear that the author seems to prefer male characters

The male character’s design and personality lack charm, and it doesn’t quite resonate with me.

The designs of Dr. Muchimuchi and Laputa exude a sense of energy.

>>122

It’s not just here; I seriously never see anyone complimenting male characters, whether it’s about their positive stories, designs, or character traits.

Even if I like it, that means I can’t output anything at all…

You were surprised by the evolution from love, weren’t you…?

I understand that the author likes it, but the character with the big breasts and glasses didn’t have any charm as a villain, so being in a winning state just feels unpleasant.

>>130

I was just being tossed around without really growing, wasn’t I…

For the size of the story, there are surprisingly few characters.

>>131

In the end, there are only the doctor and Lapta as named enemies…

The resistance has few named characters, and the equipment is also lacking, making it tough.

To create a sense of grandiosity, even if things go according to plan (which there was no such plan), it just looks like the convenience of the story or the author…

Takopi is being criticized for how he finishes after having run his race.

The image in the thread feels like it went off course the moment it sprinted and continued running in the wrong direction for the next two days.

>>133

Successfully gaining momentum from the start dash, I ended up going off course.

Right now, I have an image of finally falling off the screen and disappearing just like that.

The story lacks so much coherence that there’s a limit to how much I can fill in the gaps in my mind.

More than my father’s suicide, it’s just that anything goes in a situation where a living person can manipulate things.

I thought it wouldn’t have a decent ending.

The bombification of elementary school student rape brainwashing is quite a fetish for me, but it wasn’t depicted properly, so it was boring.

Honestly, I feel like the ending just directly connected after my father passed away, and I wonder if all that talk about the guerrillas was really necessary.

The very beginning was really good and I liked it.

>>143

It’s unreasonable to insist that this was the setup from the beginning when it’s clearly inconsistent!

>>152

It seems like a development where everything was in the palm of one’s hand, which sounds quite clever…!

Maybe the world became peaceful, so it’s quite a happy ending.

The problem of the resistance group being too unappealing.

The first two episodes were good.

I could still read it until my father died.

From there, it’s my fault that I started thinking “???”, and the Resistance arc feels empty.

Most canceled works have a general idea of what they wanted to do, but there’s still that part of it…

I really have no idea what I ultimately wanted from this.

>>149

Do you want the protagonist to experience hardships…?

It’s funny and makes no sense that they are on the side of Rapta even though there was no element of reconciliation.

The prostitute bomb had the potential to be appealing, but this was just… it felt too overwhelming, so I wanted a bit more consistency.

I wanted to see a love rivalry between an AI beautiful girl and a real beautiful girl!

It’s not rape, it’s true love!

Rapta, the doctor, Sayama-chan, and Kei were all so cute…

I can’t believe it turned out this badly…

Indeed, it’s difficult to appear smarter than the actual person behind it.

I wasn’t really sure where the author wanted to go with this.

The elements that were well-received escalated rapidly, and there was fundamentally no backbone to the story…

>>159

Only the elements that weren’t well-received escalated…

It’s like those IQ10 Seele guys are just props on the stage, right?

Even if it’s just clouding, it’s inconsistent and messy.

It feels like my fetish isn’t even a weapon, and there’s a complete lack of my unique qualities.

From the comments I’ve seen, I get the feeling that the author is the type who is a bit overly competitive in a strange way, or someone who struggles to honestly acknowledge their mistakes.

>>163

You’re totally the type that can’t succeed at all…

It’s kind of like BL, but the one-shot is quite interesting, so I hope they keep trying.

I just read it, and adult Sayama-chan is cute.

Alice has a sorrowful past…

It’s not as sad as I thought…

The protagonist is tragic, right?

It was good how Rapu-ta escalates the elements that were well-received, picks up naughty pictures rolling around on the internet, analyzes men’s desires, and almost ends up in Young Magazine, but manages to hold back just in time thanks to Kei-kun and keeps it within the bounds of To LOVE-Ru.

It can be said that everything was a setup to promote AI therapy to the whole world through the exposure video of Majistance.

Is it really okay that what the professor told Raputa in the very beginning completely falls apart?

It’s better than making excuses or complaining.

It’s a bit unreasonable to present it with such confidence…

It continues to betray expectations in a bad way, though.

I have a bad feeling that the doctor might sneak away with a victory…

Damn… I thought they would be satisfied as long as these guys were having a miserable time!

It’s amazing for the resistance to end their turn without doing anything.

What was the shota collected by the resistance?

It’s going as planned!!!

I felt quite a bit of resentment, but if that’s what they say, it must be as scheduled…

Um…

If we assume that the talk about Raputa being separated from the main body is all a lie, then…

I don’t understand why the doctor is putting on a mysterious act when no one is watching…

>>178

It’s an effect that emphasizes a camera from the reader’s perspective.

I’ll tie everything together in the final episode, so watch closely.

>>178

I was acting because the people from Seele were watching…

Still, it’s painful that it’s just a quite embarrassing scene.

>>186

There is quite a bit of psychological depiction, so that is also quite unreasonable.

The first chapter also had an amazing last spread…

When trying to establish a conversation, the doctor is the type who doesn’t want to acknowledge any of his shortcomings at all.

It seems that we have no choice but to become a petty character that insists on sticking to the plan with all our might.

>>180

It was like the author…

Isn’t it more intense that this was presented according to the plot rather than being cut off?

It seems like the master of the resistance hacker who was involved in the development of Raptor didn’t do anything significant and just ended it with “I deleted the code I had prepared~,” so I’m really wondering what that was all about.

As a result of wanting to create an impression of a strong character, I continued to come up with that kind of thing afterwards.

Someone who changes what they say on the spot to gain superiority and ends up developing a habit of lying.

They say they had no choice but to take such a roundabout approach because communication with outsiders is restricted, but I wonder why it’s so lax that they can play games with unrelated people from the outside.

The artwork is at a professional level, and it’s making fun of manga.

I think it’s a lie to say it’s according to the plot.

Well, I think it’s a lie, but since they’re saying that, it must be true.

“That convenient development was all orchestrated by me!”

That kind of development was also done in BLEACH, but that was due to its long serialization.

It was to justify the distortions of the initial settings later on.

This manga hasn’t even been serialized for 30 episodes.

If it turned out as expected and with this content, I think it would be better to just focus on drawing seriously.

It’s common that while short stories may be fine, once you need to think of a long-term narrative, it suddenly becomes difficult.

I somehow understand that the doctor is probably the object of self-projection.

My impression is that it could just be BL with no climax, no resolution, and no meaning, right?

I still don’t understand what the volunteer activities to support the resistance, whose location is unknown, are all about.

I understand that the “prostitute bomb” is not erotic, which makes it unpleasant and depressing.

Of all things, it’s a case of raping elementary school students.

The female doctor was so obviously protected that I seriously laughed.

It’s too much favoritism if they’re not being made to provide sexual services.

I thought I was made to wear a waiter’s uniform and come here!?