Is the author on drugs or something? This work has such extreme ups and downs.

It feels like the story has been building up on its own in the last few episodes, while I’m being left behind.

What genre of manga is this supposed to be?

When Senpai noticed that the brainwashing was not well-received by the readers.

I like how you suddenly threw out the settings.

It feels like the full-nude teacher came from a different manga.

>>6

Your eyes are so beautiful they look like those of a resident of THE city.

I was thinking that this development was a result of negative feedback, but since this is from the beginning of episode 1, I’m surprised it was planned this way from the start…?

>>8

It was probably necessary to somehow bring this scene here for collection.

The development is too sudden, and it just feels like this…

Isn’t the excessive protectiveness of seniors and teachers supposed to be there to protect us in times like these?

>>9

First of all, I’m not being protected by either my senior or my teacher, Ninja.

What the hell are you?!

>>15

I would like them to at least do a full-frontal naked dogeza.

Looking back, I think the ninjas showed up too early, and it makes me wonder if they should have just done more everyday episodes instead.

I wonder what the relationship between my senior and my teacher is…

In the first place, the reason why the teacher has gone crazy is due to the brainwashing senpai, so what is this about?

If the development involved a ninja who really likes the heroine giving their senpai a bit of a lesson, it would have made sense.

Even though I was dozing off during the meeting scene, I felt a dark obsession.

It looks rough as if it was forcibly collected due to cancellation.

It’s a manga that seems to be surviving on the reserves built up in the early stages and its setting, but those reserves aren’t particularly large, which gives it a somewhat indescribable feeling.

>>16

Isn’t there a lot of manga in Jump that try to get by just on their early savings…?

When I read past one-shots, I felt they didn’t have much depth, but I thought it was good that there was something that clicked with me this time in the beginning.

The cute deformed gasp was surprisingly quick, and while it seemed like it had a structure, it was actually thin.

Isn’t it like we have no choice but to pretend everything before the ninja didn’t happen and redraw it?

At first, it really felt good, so I think it’s a real shame, but it’s probably impossible now.

Even if it’s a sudden turn due to cancellation, it usually feels like at least three volumes come out, so isn’t it still too early?

>>20

It should be within the range of volume 3, so if it’s the final volume, it’s not that fast…

I don’t need ninjas or bloodlines…

>>21

It says “Bloodline romantic comedy!”

Why won’t you let me read what I want to read?

If you try, you can do it.

My senior’s abilities are too strong…

It seems like the cancellation enthusiast is all fired up.

Maybe it’s already over.

It was just a manga that I wanted to see the early days of Chibi Hachitsuse.

It seems like the author’s favorite part was the biggest mistake.

The naked teacher suddenly says to step on the accelerator too much…

No, it’s not about cars…

Whether or not it’s been canceled, it seems like it’s about to end since the foreshadowing has been resolved.

It’s not labeled as a short-term thing, so this sense of urgency seems like it’s going to be canceled, doesn’t it?

My senior is too evil and doesn’t receive any punishment throughout the story…

>>32

I couldn’t keep up when it came to getting closer to my senior.

I can’t understand the protagonist’s thought process.

Ninja Senpai Teacher

I can’t believe they made such a sequence of bad moves in such a short period of time.

I felt like I could still manage to some extent up to ninjas, but after that, it’s a bit tough.

>>34

The reason why the ninja still viewed Sanada as an enemy and the fact that they tentatively reconciled has been depicted, so I can understand that.

The order of trying to get the two of them back together and apologizing for what I did is wrong.

>>42

Why would a character who wants to see their opponent’s despair sincerely apologize?

>>55

If there were stories about reassessing what I’ve done, I wouldn’t feel any discomfort with what I’m doing now.

It seems that in Jump manga, there’s always some weird character that appears right before the ending to try to go viral…

It’s all about seeking buzz through vulgarity and perversion.

The influence of Takopon and Chainsaw Man is amazing.

I feel that my skills are still not enough to handle complex settings.

The short-term ending of Jump Plus isn’t that immediate, so it probably won’t end just yet, right?

If we continue any longer, it seems like it will become even more serious.

What did you want to do by temporarily instilling genuine emotions seriously?

I was thinking about what to do with the problem of confessing to the teacher, and then I somehow ended up as a full-frontal pervert.

Are you thinking properly and writing your story?

I switched my expectations for a romantic comedy to Siren.

You switched to a ship that doesn’t seem to have much of a difference.

Before judging whether something is good or bad, the brain is refusing to understand the way the story is presented.

>>45

The connections are so unclear that you wonder if you skipped a few chapters, right?

It feels like I was supposed to be reading it, but suddenly I’m being made to read an unfamiliar manga.

My abilities are no longer anything but a hindrance to romantic comedy.

There are too many developments that turn into battles halfway through!

I’m worried that the art is getting rougher as the chapters progress.

The story development is close to that of an absurd gag manga…

https://shonenjumpplus.com/episode/17106567263431750359

The way you break away is amazing.

What kind of judgment is it to make Brainwashing Senpai and the teacher regulars?

Are you seriously not going to think about the story when suddenly someone has mind control abilities or a teacher suddenly gets completely naked?

I can only think the teacher has gone crazy, or are they brainwashed?

I can’t look at the comments section because it’s scary.

>>57

It’s right to not look at the comments section on Jump Plus because it just makes you feel unpleasant.

>>57

I’m full of confusion about why it ended up like this instead of just being hit…

I’m not saying you should beat up your senpai or invoke divine punishment or anything like that.

It’s fine to break off the relationship and keep your distance.

Rather, I hope the theory that there are multiple authors is true.

Special abilities cannot be handled just because of bloodline, after all.

How much ability do you have?

I couldn’t help but think about what kind of strength you would need to launch someone like that in mid-air.

The teacher who became a completely naked runaway driver as a stage device is so pitiful…

If seniors had beaten him up when he first appeared as one of the villains, it would have made sense.

There are many works that seemed interesting at first…

I underestimated hypnotic abilities and NTR.

“It was about as sweet as saying ‘That’s a joke, isn’t it? LOL!'”

I wonder if the protagonist will become paraplegic after that fall.

Ninjas are way too useless.

It seems like I’m gathering authors who have the talent to go viral by posting a few pages on Twitter.

To endure a serialization, the author lacks experience and the editor seems to lack the ability to support that recently.

>>71

As a result of prioritizing buzz, it feels like the overall flow has become nonsensical, leading to a breakdown and a slowdown.

It feels like people who haven’t reached the serialization level are just given a concept and then told to do their best, leaving them floundering.

Isn’t it excessive to suddenly treat someone who clearly explains that they have a bad connection as a pervert? Your ability to read manga is way too low.

Because it’s a world where there is genuine no-risk complete hypnosis…

>>81

I feel like it’s cute, but in the end, it’s still a raccoon.

I think that at least regarding sincerity, Buzz’s skill is better than it was before.

It’s hard to determine whether it’s about abilities or a romantic comedy.

If this continues, the senior who is the root cause of the attempted murder will probably stop acting like a part of the group, wouldn’t they?

Isn’t the existence of a ninja, who is not very useful and gets in the way of a mutual unrequited love relationship, a bad connection in itself?

All the characters that come out are unpleasant, and the storyline is unpleasant as well; it’s honestly impressive in a way.

I really like episode 1.

>>89

Episode 1 has a somewhat unique setting, and it definitely has its charm as a romantic comedy.

Since the additional characters appeared, things have been getting weirder and weirder…

>>91

This additional character is too early, isn’t it?

>>89

I wish they had just continued doing something like episode 1…

They say it’s a buzz, but it’s not buzzing at all.

You’re just reading it from that perspective, aren’t you?

Just because you’re aiming for a buzz doesn’t mean it’ll definitely go viral, you idiot.

To be honest, saying that I can hear the voice of my heart was just a jumble and didn’t lead to anything interesting.

I think it was fundamentally unavoidable.

The first volume was released at the beginning of February, and the first week’s sales must have already been tallied, so depending on the numbers, it wouldn’t be surprising if it got organized.

>>95

It hasn’t been observed in the top 500 for the week, so it’s quite tough…

I wish I had done a more down-to-earth school romance comedy.

With two side characters that have bad personalities, it’s already pushing it, but the perverted teacher is just way too much noise.

The similar vibe of my peers, Asura, has been nicely adjusted and has become interesting.

>>97

I feel like it’s not really a correction in the true sense, but even if it ends up being a neck-choking rape, I’ll make sure they get what they deserve and send them to hell.

>>98

If I use the key, I can send that guy to hell… but then I thought it would be nice for a delinquent to stop themselves from stealing…

I appreciate that you’ve avoided directly going into the negatives of letting someone steal and use something easily, instead addressing it indirectly.

If that happens, I’ll laugh next week when it turns out as I said.

The fact that Cambrian Pasture is doing a romance comedy without particularly going off the rails in that setting is quietly amazing.

Could it be that stopping reading when the ninja appeared was the right choice?

>>101

The one I cut when my senior left is the correct one.

Asura stopped reading after the dog died, but did they manage to break away from the heart-wrenching dark genre?!

>>105

It remains unchanged.

Asura is from a manga about sending bad guys to hell.

How the protagonist makes judgments of good and evil.

It seems like it’s going to be a manga that watches over what happens to the broken protagonist.

I don’t need any ability users other than the protagonist.

In a romantic comedy, the actions of the brainwashing senpai is definitely something you shouldn’t do to the heroine…

This manga has been progressing without that sense of balance all along.

The teacher is advocating for weight reduction, but…

The settings and characters are overloaded…

Make your hair lighter too.

Has Sanada never read the feeling of wanting to lighten up from the weight reduction teacher until now?

It’s surprising that even the nameless group of enthusiasts for abnormal brainwashing high-leg commanets isn’t into it; where is the demand for that brainwashing senior then?

>>114

It’s understandable that the part about how to present the story after hitting the readers with a surprise attack is strange in brainwashing.

I thought it was a villain, but even when hit with a new trick from the lightweight teacher who arbitrarily pointed a brainwashing gun at me, I’m just thinking, what is this?

I really think it’s hopeless that this manga was the most interesting before the ninja appeared.

The first appearance of the ninja was quite well-received because readers thought that ninjas were the type of characters who would complain about things but eventually fall in love with the protagonist.

I feel like Tatsuya Egawa used to draw manga with this kind of vibe.

If it’s a veteran that’s one thing, but if a newcomer tries to introduce a character with a weird setting, shouldn’t the editor step in to stop them?

I don’t dislike the character of the ninja itself.

However, the flaw is that when this guy stands out, the main heroine ends up being left out because of the secrets.

I ended up laughing on the last page.

The perverted teacher was also triggered by the brainwashing senpai, so in the end, I guess I have to have Asura-kun stab me with the key…

The bad live feeling has been continuing for a long time.

I wanted a more grounded romantic comedy.

The new character is almost a miss!

The guy who oversleeps thinks romantic comedies and lovey-dovey moments are really great.

If the serious developments had been handled well in order, things would have been different.