
It’s more like character popularity or romantic comedy popularity…
Once the battle starts, I will fall again.
>>2Based on the pacing of the latest episode, it seems like it won’t take up that much time anymore.
Instead, Sid is finished.
Yandere big-breasted chubby girl.
Do you dislike it?
You’re not suited for battle…
>>6Weird mob! Weird language sense! Cute girl!
…A rom-com might suit you better, right?
>>10It’s probably a mistake in language sense that sounds like I’ve heard it somewhere before.
>>6That’s wrong.
It’s too focused on romantic comedy.
The one who gave me a passionate kiss was this father-in-law (planned).
In terms of timing, I think Fujino-chan’s confession to Gakurou during the shining episode is probably a turning point.
I haven’t really seen a serialized work that fluctuates this much… No, maybe there are others recovering in a J-shape that I just don’t know about.
>>9Kagurabachi made a dramatic V-shaped recovery after wandering at the bottom in the early stages.
The big issue with battle episodes is not the tempo, but the unclear fighting and unsatisfying resolution.
>>11I’m reading without really understanding what I can and cannot do.
>>11From what I can see this week, that has improved quite a bit.
Anonymous keeps saying it’s already over, but it doesn’t end at all.
>>12Not only the wedding ring of death but also the requiem…
After all the hype about Ongoing being an extremely dangerous presence, going to Ongoing’s house and declaring that I will get his daughter pregnant, and then Ongoing suddenly interrupting the date is just too funny and unfair.
It’s terrible that, if it were more of a romantic comedy, it could be at the top, but with the continuation of battle developments, it will definitely end up at the bottom.
Isn’t this guy a Devilukean?
One reason why anonymous Jump manga reviews cannot be trusted.
>>20It’s good that it feels like a classic legend light novel, and the romantic comedy depictions are good, but the battle descriptions are a bit lacking; this isn’t contradictory.
>>20Is the evaluation of the Nue clearly divided between battle time and romantic comedy time?!
>>20During the battle development, it was getting criticized a lot here too.
This week’s battle was good too.
It’s made easier to see with a white background, and it’s clear what is being done.
It wrapped up neatly in the first episode and captured the quirky charm of the nue.
When battling, the strengths of the silly conversations fade away, and I’m constantly bleeding from my nose, so it doesn’t look cool visually…
It probably won’t end yet since an anime adaptation is coming soon.
I want you to keep this kind of vibe going.
Last week, this guy was more like a drinking snack, what the hell is going on?
It can’t be helped. Back when I was wandering in last place, I wrote things like “final stage.”
This week’s teaser was “A New Phase.”
It’s the other side that is flipping the palm.
>>30Are you just living on momentary gusts…?
>>33I’ve heard that the beach episode with Tsujita and the three girls in the early stages wasn’t originally planned, which shows how they’re living in that moment.
>>42The former classmate setting has also appeared…
>>44Hasn’t this been said since it came out?
>>33Jump serialized manga has that kind of aspect, doesn’t it?
>>30Sid saying it was the final stage in the main story was no good.
Well, the one who’s strange is me, though…
>>30Could it be that the editorial department also made the decision to cancel it…?
It’s more of a romantic comedy or perhaps a gag comedy; it’s returning to the route that was well-received at first.
Even without considering the order of publication, it made me realize that it’s possible to return to a daily life after experiencing that atmosphere.
The development of the story after the battle doesn’t really feel satisfying, so it makes me wonder.
When it comes to romantic comedies, the characters’ actions and words unexpectedly surprise you in a good way.
The battles, which have really started to flow smoothly as they revive, give me a strange feeling of wondering if we can keep going at this point…!?
Since we started the reinforcements, how should I put it…
I thought it became a manga where there’s no point in thinking too deeply about it.
I don’t think anyone is happy about internal squabbles, so I wonder why they happen.
As expected, the manga is dying, and I truly believe I will never do it again.
>>39The Fujino family was an element that had to be settled someday, but it wasn’t something that should have been handled there…
The vice-captain’s two consecutive battles are long.
That battle was really not fun at all…
The battle with the phantom youkai was probably best around the wheel monk.
The story of the officer and the scholar standing up for the ones they love, and how cool the spiritual shells are, makes me sad because it’s not very popular.
Seriously, don’t draw a serial battle anymore…
>>45Breakfast or something?
Right now, the Jump series line-up is really weak, so if there’s a possibility of growth, we have to keep an eye on it for now.
I really love fighting by lurking in the shadows with feints and tricks in Xenodark, but I can’t deny that people say the visuals are hard to understand.
I feel like the strength of the butcher has been really nerfed, but I guess it can’t be helped.
The balance was a bit off.
>>49Since there are no contract holders, Gakuro is ridiculously strengthened, so isn’t that about it…?
I hope you do your best.
I used to think, back in the day, how could such a sudden introduction of Veiju, with no foreshadowing, suddenly come in and be such a choro-in? Is this kind of adjustment really allowed?
I feel like recently it’s starting to blend in, almost giving off a vibe like it has been here since a long time ago…
It’s a rare phoenix that is ice, even though a phoenix is usually associated with the fire attribute.
>>53I think the character designer changed the original concept to the opposite attribute because the original was also fire-based, and it would be too similar as it was.
>>69Wouldn’t it have been better to change the original character?
>>77Then I won’t be motivated!!
The protagonist’s weapon itself is a parody!
But it was during the time when the nameless was excessively praising the battle route, right?
>>54The picture is cool because…
I’m quite saved by the unreliability of other series…
The only thing left for those who kept saying to cut it off is just that it was boring back then.
>>59No.
I just think that I don’t want things to go back to the way they were.
That said, I can’t just throw away everything I’ve done up until now, and I have a feeling that I’ll eventually return to seriousness.
The battle is fine, but I feel uneasy because the enemies don’t go down easily!
Some people say the battle was long, but since the romantic comedy part this time was also lengthy, could it be that they’re just not very good at summarizing things briefly?
>>61I was wondering when the story of the early days of Yorha-chan would come to a close…
It’s not that I want you to not battle at all.
I just want a romantic comedy set in a world with battles and the danger of death.
It’s a question of which is the main dish and which is the side dish.
The part where the survey clearly declined was around the village arc and the vice captain battle – the retrieval section.
Isn’t it just that people criticize the long development of a simple, unfunny romantic comedy without any catharsis?
I really like battles like the Ring Entrance.
If it were a different era, it would have been understandable to be canceled.
With the current lineup of serialized works, I feel like there are other titles that might be prioritized for cancellation.
I want the fighting heroine to be more heroic.
But I think the battle against the Wheel Demon was good.
Suzaku may be specialized in ice, but characters of this type sometimes have temperature manipulation and can transform into a fire form…
Could it be that if I keep doing harem romantic comedies, I’ll be safe?
Now I’ve gone above average.
I’ve been seeing it from time to time, but is the battle really that hard to understand?
>>74Aren’t you reading it on paper? I don’t know, though.
>>74It’s hard to understand, or rather, the intricate details of the art during combat clash with the understated movement in battle, making it difficult to grasp…?
>>93This explanation is way harder to understand than the battle!
>>97It’s not about logic; it’s about feeling…
>>97It seems you responded well, but don’t compare a Jump serialized manga to something like “Nameless”.
I think the fact that it ranked first in the “works I want to be turned into an anime” seriously had a life-extending effect.
Rather, this time has made it clear that what came before was really boring.
There are still plenty of them around, and I think they’ll last for about another three years.
I’m reading it as a romantic comedy with battle elements, not a battle manga with a romantic comedy.
Until a little while ago, I felt like I was watching a disappointing serious erotic game because the battle scenes were too long and exhausting.
The protagonist’s battle scenes are so dark that as they go on, I sometimes think, “This manga is really dark…”
I want it to be animated, but I hope they cut down on the battles nicely.
In the romantic comedy part, it needs to be stretched just enough not to feel like it’s being dragged out, but if it goes on too long, it might end up being too sweet and give you indigestion.
It was clever in that sense that my mother-in-law barged in.
The battle scenes are dark, so if they go on for too long, it might feel difficult to understand.
Well, it might be physically difficult to look at.
Right now, the pillars of Jump are Akane Banashi and Ao no Hako, and since the latter seems to be ending, I think it’s better to keep the ones that have potential for growth on hold for now.
Unfortunately, what replaces it continues to grow.
>>88Why Akane…?
Honestly, I think there are quite a few readers who are only interested in the character when they are being deliberately cute and charming.
That’s how I am.
What’s the original source?
Take responsibility and go to the summer festival with Iju-chan.
Being a loner is the worst, Gakuryo.
>>92But it’s a phantom…
The battle is cool, but it’s hard to understand what’s happening in the manga…
I like it when a romantic comedy is mixed in while fighting, it’s amusing.
I mean, Nue is no longer in a position to worry about being canceled.
Suzaku is also going to have Gakuro’s wedding in five days.
It seems like my senior has some thoughts about that.
It has an atmosphere that makes it feel like it’s going to be a battle, but isn’t it actually a romantic comedy?
I don’t think it’ll go back to being all serious again…
I feel like Iku-chan is always in a comedy space.
Battles become interesting after acquiring Xenodark.
In other words, the battles in the village arc against level 3 opponents were the most boring.
>>99It seems like I might break down just by touching level 3 now.
Well, I’ve become strong enough, so I think I can manage somehow, like in a romantic comedy battle.
It’s impossible to predict the future developments regarding the nue because all the elements are intertwined.
In the first place, if the battle depiction focuses on action, it has to be really well done to spark interest.
It would be helpful for both the author and the editor that the strengths and weaknesses have become clear.
It’s fine to add the original sun to the phantom demon…
It’s a Jump manga that Nisio Isin is supporting.
The battle is somewhat hard to see…
I don’t even know what else I’m doing, and I don’t really understand my abilities either.
Surely, there won’t be any more congested schedule interruptions or unexpected additions before the Suzaku battle, and I think that since all of Gakurou’s forces can be fully committed, it won’t turn into a long fight.
If it weren’t for Gakuro (the Nure-onna) making a mess, trust wouldn’t have plummeted.
>>110“Because it’s just deciding on a partner.”
It’s not that there’s no sense of naming, but it gives the impression that there are many difficult-to-read technique names and ability names.
I think all the other male characters besides Yoshino-kun were completely unpopular.
>>114I liked the crazy bones that my big brother used to have… I didn’t want him to return to the Fujino family.
Honestly, I still didn’t really understand what was going on this time either.
Rather, what they’re doing is just “fighting to prevent harm to those around them.”
The description for writing that is unnecessarily complicated…
>>116Why don’t you read it for now?
>>116It’s just analyzing and nullifying techniques that have been done multiple times, so if you’ve been paying attention, you should understand.
Regarding the battle, the process is hard to understand, and the resolution feels a bit lacking too…
I don’t have that much free time, but I want to see Zenno-kun once in a while.
The vice captain’s presence has disappeared.
Well, it’s fine if it disappears…
>>121That guy was supposed to have the most important role in that…!
One of the main reasons the battle is hard to see is that both the enemies and allies have similar weapon and ability designs, and everyone is mostly colored black.
Particularly, internal conflicts become more evident, and with entities of the monster type, this tends to diminish.
Watching the vice captain’s battle…
I thought that the reason it was hard to read was because the movements between the frames weren’t connected.
Since the action of drawing the sword and slashing is not continuous, it feels like something is flying!?
The logic of combat is quite well-constructed.
>>123If you read it properly, you can understand, but if you skim through it, the battle may end up being disappointing.
Isn’t the way Gaku is treating Iju this time a bit harsh? I’ve heard voices directing hate towards his responses and actions.
In the first place, if we don’t defeat Suzaku and the others, humanity will perish, and even with Iji, they are the ones who imprisoned us and set up a reverse attack.
The very Nue who led the current flow is absent this week, so it’s unclear where the responsibility lies, making it difficult to make a decision overall.
>>124Gakuro has made up his mind to thoroughly utilize Iju in his first battle, so it feels like he is rather in a special position.
>>137I acknowledge that I am a bad person for using others for my own purposes.
That said, even though they have been made to betray us and are no longer our comrades, we will not abandon them.
For Suzaku, who has an absolute value system regarding family, it must be incomprehensible thinking that Gakuro is having now.
On the contrary, it means that even the fans who are currently voting in the survey for the Fujino family, which was wandering at the bottom, are not casting any votes at all.
>>126There should naturally be a group, including myself, that has consistently submitted surveys regardless of the circumstances.
Given the current situation, I have to admit that it was not a number sufficient to raise the ranking in absolute terms.
I love the cute gag face in the thread image.
Mom’s crazy bones…
The village and the deputy captain can be interpreted as being at the bottom even among fans.
I still wonder if the vice captain and Kyokotsu could have been dealt with somehow.
I would like you to restore the image if it’s possible even now.
Only the upgraded form of the Daiba hasn’t arrived, and in these five days, we’ll probably go to pick up the remaining stories of the Fujino family arc anyway.
>>133In the battle against Shirasawa, I showed a new form and the ability of the Mad Bones, so there isn’t an impression of being weaker, but without the spirit shell, it seems like there would clearly be a lack of power based on the setting.
If we’re going to have a power-up event, I want them to bring Kyoko back quickly.
It seems like it will become the type of anime that garners attention until the middle of the story, but no one will watch it once it starts getting serious in the second half.
I thought that just making the screen white would make the battle illustrations so much easier to see.
It’s better to stop making the background darker.
Isn’t the Fujino family being heavily allied with the enemy something that should be condemned by the other captains?
>>136It’s fallen… The movements of Raisei and the others are probably a priority for the Onmyō-ryō.
>>145By the way, what happened to the Fujino family?
Did everyone, from the big shots to the test subjects, die?
Due to the ongoing developments like the current boost, I wonder what happened to Kyokotsu in the end? I think it’s a bit unresolved.
>>138There are quite a few times I leave things thrown aside other than just the crazy bones…
>>138It’s still under investigation, and in the meantime, there’s a summer festival, so I’ll probably go after this is over anyway.
>>138But isn’t that something that doesn’t need to be collected right away?
If we’re going to do a romantic comedy, it would be better to focus on the romantic comedy to boost it.
>>138It’s either the mad bone (man) or the next contractor…
When you read the works of a manga artist who is bad at battles, you sometimes think, “The author actually put some thought into it, surprisingly…”
It was hard to understand when moving around or gathering shadows, but now that I have this ability, everything feels much clearer all at once.
Fundamentally, Reiju is not a good kid; she’s just convenient for Gakurou and is a phantom.
But I feel like it’s kind of silly to think about those things, and I think it has become a manga that conveys that.
That said, the problem of there being too many women is getting tiresome; I want a reliable and interesting guy.
>>143It’s often said that when men are present, it almost always becomes boring, so I’ve started to think that it’s better to just have cute girls around.
Make use of your strengths.
>>157I think it’s just boring to showcase masculinity in battles rather than as a man.
If it’s student life, there are definitely only interesting people around.
>>157I can tell that you are horribly bad at handling male characters.
Well, the vice-captain was a pretty interesting character, but it’s probably not a matter of the guys or anything since the development just wipes that away in an instant.
Did the anonymous poster who cheerfully started the thread “It’s discontinued!” die?
>>147I’m battling here right now, though?
>>148There was indeed a time when the publication sequence was dying and the reputation was bad, but ignoring that and simply calling it anti without any basis makes me wonder if that’s really okay…
>>163The battle developments didn’t have uniformly bad reception in the surveys; parts like the battles with Rinyudo and Shirakawa to the fire cart were at least in a position of mid-tier or higher.
While it tends to have a long and stressful lead-up like in “Murahan” or “Yamato – Yo Shichi” for Gakuro’s awakening, which often results in a bad habit of dropping the ball there, it is at least not true that the battles are completely unappealing.
I was really affected by the thread image, but I think the character design is too much like Mika Seien.
>>150Is the design based on Mika?
Well, if I could perfectly understand my strengths as a writer and develop a series right from my first serialization, I wouldn’t have such a hard time…
The last strike of the vice captain’s battle.
At the same time, he swings his sword → the vice captain reads the move and deflects Gakuto’s sword with his right hand → the vice captain thrusts with his left hand → due to the damage, the sword goes off course and Gakuto dodges it →
Gakuro releases the sword from his left hand and switches it to his right hand before striking.
I drew it properly, but I momentarily couldn’t understand how the vice-captain raised the sword when they were lowering their left hand first.
Since Gakuro’s actions are condensed into a single frame, you won’t understand what he’s doing unless you break it down and read it properly.
What I like about Nue is not the battles, but the dense mob characters around.
Since it’s called “Ishu,” it must be a red-based coloring, right?
I think it’s better not to go with pink, after all.
The author is not particularly good at drawing interesting men.
I’m good at drawing interesting mobs.
But to move the story forward, we have no choice but to battle.
As a professional writer, I feel that I should do it properly, but at the same time, I think I might be expecting too much from a first-time novice writer.
Did you recover in a J-shaped manner?
In that case, I think the achievements of the thread image are incredible.
>>164The episode where the ranking suddenly jumped was the one where they shone, but this week’s episode was exactly the one where they transferred in eight weeks ago.
No, I want you to bring 100% sacredness after each event as an advisor whenever something happens.
The battle development was somewhat lacking, but even so, the way they were hitting was unusual, right?
>>168It has become as if it never happened.
>>173All Fiction
>>168Even now, there are people in this thread saying things like they accidentally hit something but are still feeling like they’re about to die, so they need to be careful…
The battle never seems to get any easier, or rather, it’s a Bleach-type combat that showcases this person’s strengths on screen.
I think it would be better to stop trying to add unnecessarily detailed reasoning and movements.
>>169In battle manga, it’s fine if you just push through with momentum and win based on the atmosphere, really.
I feel like it’s a bad habit to try to rationalize things only when it comes to serious and battle scenes, while being able to write absurdly interesting developments in romantic comedy.
Well, it can’t be helped because it was really boring when I was down.
Mika Seien is amazing!
>>171The character design is so obviously driven by personal hobbies…
I really like the design sense of Nue and the fire wheel.
However, I think the action still has room for improvement, while the still-image style direction is visually appealing.
If you take a good look at it, you can understand exactly what’s going on and see that it’s being written thoughtfully, but conversely, I think there are people who find it hard to understand what’s happening in the battle if they’re just skimming through.
It would be good to date everyone quickly.
I will get scolded for saying this, but…
The match between Gakuro and Yaha-chan is because Yaha-chan’s clothes are white and her thighs are also white.
Because Gakuro and design are being contrasted.
It was easy to understand what each other was doing.
From here on, it’s difficult to tell what Gakuro and the enemies are doing because everything is black.
Actually, when a girl participates in a battle, it turns white, making it easier to see.
I realized that fans thought the previous stories were boring because of this rise.
Why are you fighting and throwing away your strengths when you’re not even a manga that’s valued for battles?
It seems that frustrations and disappointments like that were reflected in the placement before any adjustments were made.
If we can maintain popularity in battle mode, then we haven’t been doing romantic comedies for these past two months.
I just recovered recently, so I understand, but even after a few months, I feel like we would still be having a reflection meeting about the vice-captain battle.
>>182So, was the vice-captain battle interesting?
To be honest, I still don’t think I’m very good at drawing male characters or battles.
The time when I’m doing a slightly naughty sweet love comedy is when I shine the brightest, for real.
It’s a manga that has no shortage of precedents like Xenoblade or the principle blood curse, so come on, put in a little more creativity…
It seems like someone who keeps complaining about Sir Night Eye in My Hero Academia.
Is it possible that everything is coming to an end? After I had fallen to that level of thinking.
Did we skip a few episodes? If switching the policy entirely and making adjustments brought it back to life, then that decision was correct!
Level 4 is completely out of consideration now.
Level 4, which has a connection with Gakuro, has gone to the monkey space.