That’s a good story.

The dialogue is a bit too much, and the name is not quite right.

The old man who gave me candy is too mysterious, and it’s becoming noise.

>>6

I didn’t really need the uncle.

I’m glad the drawing is good.

It feels more like a collection of episodes intended for serialization that has been compiled into a standalone one-shot.

It’s weird that someone keeps licking a candy even though its volume doesn’t decrease.

>>9

I wonder if only abnormal people can use psychic abilities…

Do you dislike a flirtatious gyaru more than an introvert?

>>18

Shut up, you nameless old man!

>>17

I see…

>>15

In other words, it’s a story about being embraced!

Why are you eating raw fish in bed…

Doing a handstand once is nice, isn’t it?

The conversation with this indescribable sense of distance is nice, isn’t it?

I want to see more.

The other two characters are too bizarre…

I’m being led by a smelly old man.

Very much to my liking.

The smelly uncle is probably a monster or something.

I find it hard to believe that I will become a man who eats goldfish in the future…

>>27

It might be the conditions for acquiring time leap ability.

I thought, “I’m unbeatable at pachinko and roulette,” which shows how dirty my heart is.

Kekekekekekeke

>>32

It also has a role in destroying Hachiya’s brain.

Did my uncle really have foresight?

I wonder if there really was a route for compensated dating…

There are panels that have the rough draft just as it is, but are they drawn in a rush?

After licking it continuously for five years, even when it got smaller, I still managed to lick it all without accidentally swallowing it, which already means I’m half-immersed in the realm of supernatural powers.

Just being a gal who is kind to introverts makes me want to read it.

I quite like it.

I’m really sorry, but this has nothing to do with the manga at all.

Licking candy given by strangers at school to gain abilities.

Together with the fishy old man, I can’t help but remember the main scary story from school.

I couldn’t concentrate at all…

I can’t tell if there are panels that seem to have leftover sketches or if that’s just part of the direction.

It’s not a serialization…

>>43

No way!?

I love it when an intelligent child excels through actions and also goes on a mental runaway!

If we’re going to make it a series, it might be about aiming for a big goal of one million views and having various events happen, which the two of us would then resolve together.

Too easy…

Is it okay to say that the smelly old man is just a pervy old man?

That’s good.

What’s next?

Did I forget to delete the draft…?

I feel a subtle page count that seems like it could become a series but hasn’t.

The mysterious old man is fine, but being too dirty is a bit…

I wanted to draw a panel from the thread image.

It’s no doubt that the uncle is a key person since his art style is different.

If it were a serialized version, the old man might have been explaining the battles and serious plot developments.

An uncle who looks and behaves strangely but gives really sound advice…

Continue your sweet and sour romance!

I don’t want to end up being a smelly old man who can’t apologize and just goes for the whole fish.

>>61

Even if the future changes, the smelly old man will probably wander the world as he is…

That’s a nice picture in the thread.

Hentai

The draft hasn’t been completely erased…

Eating smelly fish for five years is some kind of condition.

>>65

Is it the price for the ability to alter the past…?

Somehow, it feels like the heroine’s thought process is a direct projection of the author’s own.

This is a manga that someone with a heroine-like personality would likely create.

You made me read a good manga before going to bed…

Too easy…

I wonder if the more I lick, the more abilities I’ll gain.

The way the smelly old man eats fish is too much like a monster.

If it were my future self, wouldn’t the character design have a more futuristic feel?!

I want to become a greasy old man…

I want to suck on candy because I often get thirsty from the air conditioner.

This guy is a freak who can keep licking a candy for five years.

“If it means stopping myself from that day, I would eat live fish for a lifetime (time leap condition).”

Well, there are aspects that are specific to short stories, so…

I want to read the serialized work, but…

That old man seems like the type who would say “Embrace me!” in a fishy way!

It seems like that fishy old man has been observing for a long time.

I’m scared that this boy will end up becoming a smelly old man in the future.

It seems tough to blow it up since it’s a one-shot.

But I want to see the serialization.

It’s really nice that Hachiya-san is intelligent and thoughtful.

>>82

A woman who embodies both calculative maneuvering and candidness after a breakdown.

I like you.

My eyes are sliding off something.

In a serialized format, in a style where a fishy old man introduces a mysterious story like in Outer Zone.

I remembered the short film “Black.”

That’s not a teenage problem, but a middle-aged concern.

Hachiya-san is too easy.

>>86

Hey, the marriage OK has come out!

10 million… video… ton ton ton ton ton ton ton ton

If my uncle is my future self, then that means I’ve become a youkai that eats fish like that, which is really, really unpleasant…!

Please provide a series until the two start dating.

I don’t think it’s my future self or anything like that.

If the protagonist’s superpowers had gotten stronger, that might be possible, but for now, it’s just floating.

From an uncle’s perspective, it might be foresight.

The way the smelly old man eats is gross.

>>94

I feel a sense of respect for Saturn.

It’s too easy… does that apply to myself as well…

This is the double attraction…

>>95

Hey! Don’t quote from that place!!

It was interesting, but what is with that guy?

The scene in the thread image is easy and good…

Smelly old man!

Well, the true identity of the fishy old man doesn’t really matter, does it?

What matters is that a pleasant man appears.

It’s totally unrelated, but I wonder how many subscribers the uncle from Isekai Ojisan has on his YouTube account.

Anonymous

Too easy…

>>102

No, but of course the content and the image are both amazing; you can feel the full effort put into it.

Uncle is also one of the double attractions, isn’t he?

Why are you following a kid’s SNS videos who you only met about ten years ago, uncle?

It’s a closeness like that of a smelly uncle and relatives…

That candy is not cheap, is it being distributed with something in return, or is it demanding some kind of compensation?

If it becomes a series, it seems like I’ll be made to eat one strange thing after another to gain new abilities.

>>108

In the end, you eat fish…

I wanted to write about the flow of the thread image.

That aside, I see you also like to make girls gloomy, huh?

You can’t sleep until you wash the bed where that smelly old man who eats fish raw was sitting.

You replied thinking it was a marriage, right?

I want to bankrupt the pachinko parlor!!

I thought I could infinitely play UFO catchers, and it turns out I actually did.

>>115

Does using superpowers in a UFO catcher cause controversy?

I love girls who are deep in thought in crazy postures like in the thread image!

It’s an awesome manga, and what the heck is up with that energetic old man?

I want someone to overfish the keys that are being used as prizes for a Switch, which they have no intention of giving out.

https://shonenjumpplus.com/episode/316190246907573867

One-shot in 2022.

>>121

I must say, you’re becoming a pro smoothly.

I want to see a romantic comedy about a rare boy who meets the conditions to be granted superpowers.

>>122

No-fap esper?

Is it about a month until that fishy old man comes out from the pedestrian bridge?

>>126

It looks like the lines when apologizing are a bit off.

It’s scary when a fishy old man suddenly comes into the room.

It’s coming from a love-struck mind, but being wary of the presence of other abilities is Yeah…

I often think about what to do if it turns into a battle…

I kind of told a lie, and immediately said, “It’s a lie!” but I can’t believe it at all, and I also wonder what I’m doing. I like that part.

>>131

But even if it gets serialized, it seems like there’s only enough room to expand the story for about three volumes…

>>131

However, you see… sometimes these types of stories gain depth when they are standalone.

>>131

Mind reply succeeded.

I’ll introduce you to some crazy characters!

A convenient heroine!

A useless person who can use psychic powers!

Old man with a big attitude!

That’s all!

Which panel is the draft? I couldn’t find it.

>>137

The one on the far left in the top row, talking with a smartphone that has 41 points during the move.

Quite noticeable.

>>140

Really, this is not a performance or anything like that. Yeah… thank you.

Of course, you would end up falling in love with the heroine.

There are no elements for the readers to like the protagonist…

It’s not something that needs to be serialized! Just a “sequel” is fine!

The smelly old man is really just the original grumpy old man, isn’t he?

It seems impossible to reach ten million views without a hook that encourages repeated plays.

It’s a nice story that ends in a way that makes you want to continue reading because it’s a one-shot.

It’s too easy to say yes to marriage without being mentally prepared for it…

Nice!

I don’t want the cute boy to become such a greasy old man.

>>146

You were a shota back in the day too.

I like the way this sturdy lower body is used.

I can’t believe this protagonist could say something clever like an old man with a fishy smell.

The smelly old man is a nuisance, but having him around means I don’t have to think deeply about the superpowers themselves, which is a good thing.

I realized why I hate this manga; the protagonist doesn’t grow.

There aren’t scenes where the introverted characters muster up their courage, so it feels lacking!

The scene where I mustered up the courage to apologize was not voluntary; it was because the old man told me to, and it was a self-made problem!

>>151

I got the heroine who fell from the sky with the power of a shut-in, but right now it’s just that I lied and troubled her, then apologized.

There are nutrients that can only be obtained from a girl who, thinking she was asked to marry, wasn’t mentally prepared and, after impulsively saying yes, realizes it wasn’t actually a marriage and feels embarrassed to the point of wanting to die.

Isn’t it a match pump?

If the smelly old man is a vision of the future,

I wonder if it’s a world line where Hachiya-san was doing “papakatsu” if I hadn’t said it was a lie back then…

Once you do that, there’s no turning back…

That’s not the ending I was hoping for…

It hasn’t been clearly stated whether it’s a match pump or not!!

The protagonist is also humble, but he’s a generally good guy, and I think that’s what attracted the heroine to him.

The 8-year-old candy is too superhuman.

>>159

Most people will feel a strong sense of disgust when they hear this.

It feels like the ending is weak, or is this really the conclusion?

But I really like everything else.

I really like it.

I feel that the intelligent portrayal of the heroine is quite rare, as it is shown not just in her intellect but also in her high sociality.

>>163

The smart characters in manga often have big heads, and the social girls tend to be more intuitive, but I liked that this girl was thinking and taking actions with high sociality.

When I was in elementary school, I used to roll the quail eggs from the eight-treasure rice that was served for lunch around in my mouth until the next morning. Does that mean I have the potential to become a psychic?

>>164

Gross…

>>164

I’ve become a nameless one…

I like this kind of aftertaste in a one-shot.

Please provide a scenario where this girl becomes infatuated with the superpowers of a fishy-smelling uncle.

It wouldn’t be possible with just rolling quail eggs…

In five years, you’ll be able to lay eggs from your butt.

It’s nice to see the girl who used to make a drawn-out face and say, “Do you like me that much?” when asked to help with video shooting again, having fallen for someone…

>>171

The fact that we both like each other is at the stage of boyfriend-girlfriend discussions, and it’s a state of mutual assurance destruction.

Is the draft layer still displayed in the 41P3 panel?

>>172

Not only 41 pages, but there are rough drafts for all 40 pages.

>>176

It’s not about the spaces between the lines or making assumptions; such delusions and speculations are normal, right?

If it were my future self who had failed, I wouldn’t pass on such candy.

>>177

But you know, if I couldn’t use my superpowers, I wouldn’t have had any connection with Hachiya, right?

I think it’s good.

I’ve been reading nothing but gentle rom-coms, you know…

I only want to see things like this too.

What is the eye marker?

>>183

It might be a bruise or a scar from an injury or burn.

I’m usually covering it with tape, so there must be some setting for it.

Is it the reason for the design with the cross on the head?

I feel that the uncle and the superpowers are just MacGuffins, so there’s no point in thinking too deeply about them.

>>184

Superpowers are just a MacGuffin, and since there’s no necessity for the story in the old man, there’s only room for speculation.

It’s one thing that the uncle gives me candy, but when I think about why he’s being so meddlesome…

What is the metaphor behind things like candy or the smell of fish, and the saliva-covered surroundings of men?

>>187

“It’s a metaphor for eventually becoming a relationship where we kiss passionately.”

I want to talk about my belly button rather than the smelly old man.

>>188

I can talk about it, but I will run out of things to say soon.

Let’s get back to the topic of the mysterious, fishy old man, which is much more intriguing.

I think it’s simply amazing to be able to lick a candy for 8 years.

It feels like a commendable effort.

I wonder if the fishy old man is handing out candy in various places…

I want to meet you too…

I noticed it.

That’s a cockroach, uncle.

>>193

As expected, it’s looping…

>>193

“I feel like I’m watching while shouting ‘Hold on forever!!!'”

Isn’t the picture in the thread unusually good? I kept reading thinking it was a completely different manga that was posted.

>>194

There is no doubt that this cover and this is a full effort.

>>194

It must have been a scene created with all their heart.

Cute

Isn’t Arikawa-kun way too feminine when he’s apologizing on the phone?

The “ke ke ke ke” part is undeniably cute.

For the heroine, it’s more about active actions rather than…

I think it was impressive that they genuinely listened to my long theory on creation and remembered it properly.

An odorous old man is necessary as a leading presence over the heroine.

From the very beginning, the charming colored cover and the filthy old man on page 1 create a shocking contrast.

Some parts have unstable transitions in the scenes and illustrations, but the parts they want to show are well done.

It’s nice when two people with this kind of distance have their ups and downs and pass each other by.

I hope to pass by you until graduation, if possible.

It’s cute that you make decisions on your own and then give the okay for marriage, so anything is fine.

>>210

I don’t really understand what the “anything is fine” talk is referring to.

I think it didn’t have to be made this dirty, regardless of the grandfather’s existence.

>>212

It’s not right for a handsome young man to give you a candy that you’ve been teased with for 8 years.

You’re a good writer… become famous and draw more…

I trust anonymous opinions on lesser-known romantic comedies.

When there are rough sketch layers left behind, I realize that editors really don’t pay attention to those kinds of things…

I needed it because the panel of Arikawa-kun covered in uncle’s juice looks cool.

But there are scenes where I am shocked to be treated on the same level as a dirty old man.