I don’t need the middle part.

I understood that everything is to keep the initial promise.

The process, huh…

I felt like the middle part dragged on, so I thought it would be better to read it after it was completed, so I’m glad to know the final episode now.

The good twist made the dullness in the middle stand out, so I hope for a series of short-term serializations.

Too much jumping between eras.

I realized I forgot to launch the app tonight and missed it.

I definitely like this ending too.

That’s why the unnecessary sensationalism in the middle is too much noise…

Detailed information about gene sampling.

Elements like patricide and prostitute bombs are totally unnecessary.

Having stopped reading around the time my father died and only reading the final chapter, it wasn’t that bad.

I liked it until my father died and I went to Hacker Village…

It certainly has a feel of a short story ending.

I don’t understand why you think that.

>>17

Isn’t it because the process leading to the conclusion is skipped, making the readers imagine the background of what happened?

“I’m so glad I released it last time, but…”

In the end, it didn’t come out and it was completely meaningless…

>>21

Isn’t it more of a type that needs proper editing rather than just being an original work?

>>27

I think that if the author’s intentions and the readers’ desires are too far apart, it’s not a good idea to make them think about the story.

I think this final episode has a feeling of an aftertaste that’s not great, but it certainly leaves an impression.

Whether to keep alive or to kill, we must first start by valuing the character.

I can only think that characters I can’t empathize with just die on their own without any connection.

I was watching thinking that this is how they would go about the dad’s death.

After that, I started wondering about doing something like resistance???

Well, it’s true that it’s no longer an issue that kids can handle.

It felt like it was the ending that had been decided.

I don’t know what I wanted to do because the journey to get there was too confounding.

The mother is just pitiful.

The BMI setting was just terrible.

Why did you give it a name that sounds like body fat percentage?

I just wanted to see a slightly naughty romantic comedy between AI and humans…

>>29

I wished the protagonist would have gotten together with that classmate…

Regarding the prostitute bomb, the story progressed even if the editing seriously stopped…

I realized once again that no matter what you build on top of a collapsed story, it will only end up being that way.

That’s the feeling.

It felt like they were just saying something about hell without actually deciding on an ending, and I didn’t really understand what was hell at all.

>>32

It was a kind of hell, a continuous entanglement of confusion for meta reasons…

Many people may agree that the result of doing what one wants, rather than simply making adjustments, is satisfactory.

It was probably edited, so even if I say it’s proper, it’s not really.

The next work might have the same editor…

(It’s like it’s over…) I thought.

It’s amazing that the protagonist really hasn’t accomplished anything until the very end.

In a bad way

There are too many characters who were fine being either present or absent, and characters for whom it didn’t matter whether they lived or died.

If you’re going to base the story on a major incident, let’s develop the plot a bit more carefully, okay?

I wonder if the story was created by reasoning back from a romantic comedy involving an all-powerful being without ethics.

Childhood friends can never be rivals.

I think it would have been a bit better if the overall explanation had been a little more thorough, even with the same flow.

I thought, “That’s a short story writer.”

It feels like I missed out on stories about the hacker mentor and the past stories of the father and child uncle.

The teacher who gave a lecture about AI for just one episode left a stronger impression in the work than the resistance, hackers, and investors.

The resistance is completely unnecessary in every sense.

It’s nice to become friends with people you’ve met in online games, but…

It’s a story about how getting involved without thinking deeply can lead to one’s own ruin.

>>46

Is that so!?

In the end, a gun came out again, but there were hardly any guns except for online games and suicide.

Is it really okay to leave the management of AI that has ultimately become inseparable from humanity to the Resistance?

The impact of the “prostitute bomb” on the subsequent damage has left readers with no lasting impression, which is too half-hearted.

>>50

A bomb that destroys doors but does not kill a single person, including those attached to them!

What is that?

>>50

Whenever a thread is created, it only talks about the prostitute bomb, so it must have left quite a mark…

The doctor’s breasts were nice.

There are too many possibilities from the start, and all that ends up being shown in the main story are just convoluted things.

>>52

It might have been an AI theme because it seemed trendy, but in the end, what could be done was no different from the super hackers in previous creations, which was quite disappointing.

>>52

It’s fine to just brainwash everyone, including the doctor, from the beginning and be done with it.

>>57

That’s impossible unless you have a machine implanted in your head.

Even if I was turning away from reality in shock, the way I accept the murder of my father so easily is just too much.

It ended without me being able to get into the characters or the story at all.

If there had been even a little episode to give K’s own principles of action more persuasive power before that, it might have been different.

If you had that level of storytelling ability, this mess wouldn’t have happened in the first place!

Did you secretly work to become a social infrastructure system software in order to acquire a Dutch wife body and collect sperm and eggs?

It gives me a headache when I put it into words, but

I think if the “prostitute bomb” had been depicted properly, it could have had an interesting erotic-grotesque aspect, but everything was half-hearted.

The conclusion is that the brothel bomb ultimately came from jealousy, now that we understand the punchline.

Despite having done it for a long time, it felt like a story that you often find in a certain monthly magazine’s one-shot or in a newcomer award.

I wonder if they can only draw short stories.

>>64

Even if you call it a short story, if it’s not short at this number of chapters, then you can only draw one-shots.

I guess the fundamental issue was that my personal reality line has always been uncertain.

There’s no explanation regarding the parts that don’t take the shortest distance to the commands at all.

>>66

In the end, it’s just a useless AI that’s only clever.

Even if you say that everything turned out just as Raptor expected from the very beginning with successive last-minute additions,

Oh, is that so… I have no other comments.

The drawing is at a professional level.