Is that so…?

Wha-ha…

>>4

But the author had been anticipating it from the beginning.

I’m saying that I’ve finished doing what I wanted to do…

>>6

Don’t cut down the expectations for the author to the limit.

>>4

Huh, is it over?

I cut it with a honey trap firecracker, but it still seemed like it would drag on.

>>21

I’m sorry, it wasn’t worth reading, so it was the right choice not to read it…

>>5

There were no allies, Rapta!

Everything is according to the enemy’s plan.

I time-warped.

>>5

Do you think that paper books will sell…?

The number of PVs is low.

It wasn’t over yet.

Cancellation?

>>8

The author says they wrote it as planned from start to finish.

>>10

If I couldn’t successfully put together what I wanted to do and what I wanted to draw, I could have looked forward to the next time, but if it’s like this according to plan, then it’s impossible.

From now on, please draw with the original work included.

I don’t know if there will be another one.

>>9

Just because it’s based on an original work doesn’t mean it’s safe.

I felt strongly that it was a story from the doctor that he must have wanted to tell, so I think he was satisfied.

When only terrible things have happened so far, I can’t help but be curious about the final episode.

I cut off at the beginning where I killed Dad, but what happened after that?

>>13

Ten years later — Rapta had conquered the world.

>>13

It was all part of Dr. Dekapai and Raputa’s plan from the very beginning.

>>23

When I read it again, it’s indeed strange here… but if that’s the case.

Since it was canceled, let’s just say everything went according to plan.

It only looks like it was folded forcibly with a furoshiki.

If this goes as planned, there’s nothing more to say…!

Kei-kun… you really had no reason to be here…

>>22

As long as you have glasses and a laptop, that’s all you need.

The author’s favoritism is clearly evident.

I see, it was a way of folding that made sense.

I continued watching after the prostitute💣 for a while, but I stopped reading because the mastermind had such an uninteresting past…

We didn’t really need the backstory of the mastermind or the hacker village, right…?

Sayama’s design was unnecessarily good…

Well, it’s true that if you trace it back from the goal line, it was progressing quite straight, but it felt quite different from what the early readers were looking for.

I wanted to be an uncle who makes honey trap bombs.

It’s designed in such a way that everything is completely in the palm of Rapta’s hand, and it’s fine if everyone else is just a mob.

>>30

Rather than being a story, it felt like all the characters were merely devices for the author to portray the scenes they wanted to depict…

Doing what you want and entertaining the readers are different, right?

According to the author, it seems that everything went according to the planned scenario.

>>32

What are you going to do? I can’t even look forward to the next work.

>>32

Did you make plans while drinking?

The part where Dad is targeted had a really good balance between the cuteness of Laputa and the unsettling developments.

I really like the art style, so I’m glad to know a good author.

The story often tends to be a sordid AI narrative that you might find drawn in Jump Plus.

I don’t know if the editors are pushing this, but please seriously stop this direction.

>>35

The past one-shots also have a grotesque theme.

>>46

Isn’t that fine?

I’m getting tired of doing things with AI.

I burst out laughing at the dark wealthy person immediately falling.

Everyone is so eager to have chips installed in their heads…

Even if suddenly 10 years are skipped

In the end, what did the doctor want to do?

I tried hard not to be discarded, but my friend got disposed of, and now they’re starting to make something like a rapture, and I don’t really understand.

Whether the protagonist was just a mere mob used by others will be carried over to the next time.

According to Rapta’s plan, the sex worker bomb was apparently being used as a backup plan to promote AI as mental care for the victims affected.

The enjoyment of depravity is not utilized at all in the fun.

If you say in the afterword after it’s finished that you managed to run it as planned, that makes sense.

I feel like at this timing, they just want to insist that it’s not a cancellation but a smooth ending.

I want erotic images of the doctor.

Kiryuu Rou is recruiting new graduates…

>>55

It was one of the hidden military companies, but it has become a regular company in 10 years.

Have the sponsors been waiting for 10 years?!

>>60

After waiting for 10 years, I ended up with brainwashing.

Are you really an investor in a truly nefarious military company?

>>60

I’ve been excitedly waiting for the war to start! For 10 years!

>>67

It was fun playing the role of the mastermind.

>>67

Considering that the people around the same age as that old woman are the core members, it’s really impressive how patiently they waited.

Is it really okay for the ending to be that the world is governed by AI and has become peaceful, happily ever after?

Is Dr. Baba ≒ the author?

Well, I do think it’s going according to plan.

It’s just that it diminished the allies’ performance.

I guess the protagonist gets zapped and that’s the end.

I like one-shot works, but I find it difficult to defend this one.

I think it would have been better to refine the structure a bit more.

The boss of the doctor is too strong to be able to be strict.

I mean, is no one from the boss’s side taking measures against this pressure?

What happens when you embed Q.BMI?

A. You will no longer get lost on the street.

Why does everyone not have a customized appearance even though there is one Rapta per person?

It’s still continuing.

>>74

The next episode is the final one.

From the reader’s perspective, it’s like, what is this…? But I think the author was able to do what they wanted to do.

I realized that being next to the Onaho Bomb-chan is a crueler punishment than actually dying.

I think the difference in excitement from the first two episodes to what comes afterward is even greater than that of Kaiju No. 8.

>>78

Episodes 1 and 2 seemed really interesting…

>>78

Somehow, I bought volumes 1 and 2 of No. 8… but I stopped reading this before volume 1 came out.

I believe there will be a final volume with a newly drawn making-of video featuring a “prostitute bomb,” and many unnamed people will suddenly change their opinions.

Even if it’s the same story about everyone having their heads seen and trying to fight back… is there only idiots in this manga?

Everyone in this world is getting electrocuted, and it seems there are no people living philosophically anymore.

The first two episodes were good.

The way it was portrayed made it seem like the female characters other than the doctor had no attachment at all until the very end.

Even with erotic depictions, it’s too vulgar to be enjoyable.

>>85

I really like the depiction of Sayama, who was turned into a “sex bomb,” becoming sexually disturbed due to the aftereffects and probably still having relations with Kei-kun.

To be honest, even if you present something like this, well, you know…

The sponsors of the underworld are manipulating the masses through BMI.

Why do we have to embed it too…!

I was just hoping that a war wouldn’t break out for ten years, but the upper management didn’t take any measures against the situation.

If this goes as planned, all I can think is that everything was just ugly excess fat.

When Kei was in elementary school, he was so ignorant, innocent, and emotionless.

After ten years, I’m dating Sayama-chan out of guilt, thinking it’s a way to atone for my sins.

I wonder what these characters in this manga are like.

I feel like the guerrilla person was wearing an anti-brainwashing earring.

I feel like it wasn’t helpful at all.

However, I can’t quite imagine the ideal manga that could be expected from the first two episodes of Rapta…

>>92

For now, wouldn’t it be enough if we could just hit the doctor with some gender equality punches?

>>92

I was thinking about what to do since I don’t know what will happen.

However, the final boss rampaged without any problems, and no one could do anything about it!

What happened to the girl who had a crush on the protagonist?

>>95

I am in remission and doing well.

>>97

That’s thanks to Rapta.

Recently, wasn’t there something like “it’ll end in about ○ more chapters” in Jump Plus? Was there a pattern where the next one is the final chapter?

When I first saw it, I thought it was too overpowered, and in the end, it remained invincible without any nerfs or countermeasures.

How should I put it… What is this… It was a piece that made me feel that way, but I liked the date while following the initial guidepost.

Arapta, who obtained a human body, raped Kei-kun, and in the end, the two shared a happy kiss and it concluded?

I really had high hopes until about the time my dad died…

In contemporary manga set in modern times, the issue of hacker characters being too strong is often raised.

It really ends up like this when you do it just as it is too strong.

I can understand that the problem with this manga is not there.

When my dad died, I realized what I wanted to do and stopped reading seriously.

I still don’t understand the necessity of shotacon old men.

I wonder if we’ll find out in the final episode.

Looking back now, it felt like the original one-shots had a style that just wanted to create stories about boys and non-human boys.

Well, I guess it’s about sticking to one’s original intention…

>>112

Well, the relationship between Rapta and Kei-kun was somewhat thin towards the end, wasn’t it…

>>131

In the first place, if everything was going according to the professor’s plan, then there shouldn’t have been any special feelings at all.

Ignore the monologue of Raputa that appeared in the early part.

If AI takes control of everything, it would be the strongest! But even AI cannot do anything about humanity itself.

Normally, it would go like this, but with the invincible gadget, humans can do anything, so this story ends here.

>>113

There is too little dream and hope.

Monday’s performance, along with the siren’s flop, is amazing.

>>114

Well, there’s Spy Family, and there’s Centaur and Drama Queen too…

The Luridragon is, well… uhm.

>>120

It’s Ruri again…

>>129

It’s completely like how Mii-chan handles it.

I couldn’t stand what that anonymous person was saying.

>>132

If you lick it, everyone might forgive you.

>>114

The new release is so out there and really plain, and the views are so few that it seems like this amazing piece might actually survive because the competition is so thin, especially on a Monday.

>>127

Sugopi is interesting, right…!

I can understand that a direction like “ban-ō” is being sought after, but…

I was brain-controlled by Raputa and raped.

Sayama-chan will collapse mentally if she doesn’t have Raputa control her brain…

I was thinking, how am I supposed to make a story with an all-purpose military AI and a completely useless boy? And then it ended just like that.

Evil organization…

“We won’t hire unless you are a new graduate from university…!”

Even without the chip being implanted midway, you were able to brainwash, right?

It’s a dystopian end managed by Mother AI…

It seems like Kei-kun can’t do anything from here…

Is the drama “Queen” really not getting any more interesting? Is Monday going to be okay?

The Luridragon is making it seem like, “Here we go again…” and it makes you want to learn.

Ah-shi-chan

I like you…

Drama queen has a lot of PVs, it’s just not being talked about here.

I’m not expecting anything, so whatever comes is unexpected.

When I wrote that I was concerned it was going in a different direction than what many readers were expecting, I received criticism suggesting I didn’t understand what the author wanted to do or the manga itself, but I wonder if that anonymous person is still praising it.

It’s just declaring that it’s not a cancellation, saying “Too bad!” to the ones who are making a fuss about it.

>>133

Right…? What is the meaning of doing something like that…?

I’m reading Dramakuin and I think it’s interesting.

I think it might not be suitable for the bulletin board.

If we had talked while both being naked in bed with Sayama-chan, we could have picked up on various things, but you really lack that kind of sense.

Ruridora still has around 1 million views with that…

I look forward to Naked Hero the most on Mondays.

I was just wondering if the drama “Queen” and “Arata” are popular.

Drama Queen is probably really popular since it ranks first every time if there are no spies.

JS prostitute bomb is okay, but showing breasts is a no-go for Jump Plus editing…

I was honestly surprised that the point of the previous game’s battles being completely uninteresting hadn’t improved one bit.

There was no need to overturn even the well-received first part…

If there were foreshadowing that becomes clear upon rereading, that would be one thing, but insisting that it went as expected is impossible…

Since it’s ranked very high in Jump Plus, where almost everything is determined by the number of PVs, both Drama Queen and Ruri Dragon must be successful, right?

The fact that it’s going according to the original plan means that the elementary school girl prostitute bombarding wasn’t due to the editor’s bad taste adjustments…

Scary…

The inconsistent monologues of Raputa and the doctor are a performance meant to deceive the reader.

No good! When threads specific to canceled Jump manga start to grow, they veer off into general discussions about Jump and become a mess!

>>150

I think it’s not good that the rapta itself is a simple, bland, bad manga.

>>154

Right now, I don’t even feel any core that resembles a crappy manga…

It was a crappy manga, but I can tell they really wanted to write this part. I want to appreciate it, but I can’t.

>>172

A sordid development as well.

I don’t care about popularity! I’m drawing because I want to draw!

There’s no kind of heavy, sticky emotions like that…

It’s not a rom-com with AI, but rather just a prolonged exchange showing what happened before AI took over the world…

The clouding of shotas is not a common kink.

I don’t want a manga where the prostitute bomb is decided from the start.

I’m trying to imitate the brutality and grotesqueness of the works I mentioned as my favorite manga, but the essential content isn’t there, so it just turns out to be bad taste and not interesting.

You’re mistaken about which part to imitate in the first place.

There were times when I was excited wondering how to counterattack from here because Pirirri was just too invincible.

Well, if there is a twist, it would be that Raptor fell in love.

It’s likely a pattern where even the doctor was deceived in order to obtain the real thing.

>>158

If the yandere AI could cut off everything else the moment it obtained Kei, I would forgive everything until now.

>>158

But what remains after doing that is a grand dystopia created over the course of ten years, and a former shota who has lost everything and stands only out of a sense of responsibility, with their romantic feelings worn away.

>>171

If I were to deny the rapta, both my mother and my former classmates would return to a mentally broken state again.

Sayama-chan’s character design was great, so please definitely write the next work in LOE.

The comments are very popular, so well…

>>160

I wonder if bewildering comments have been ranking higher lately…

It’s not so much about stretching it out, but it’s fundamentally just a story about Laputa and the professor…

Did we really need the story leading up to that fall?

Embedding chips in all of humanity was also suggested around the middle of the story.

It felt like not embedding it was the minority opinion.

There was no need to stage it myself, right?

>>163

It feels like you don’t really need to go through the trouble of using guerrilla tactics for a tear-jerking gimmick stream when you could just use the organization’s money to place ads everywhere and make it known.

I thought the twist was going to be that the main character was an AI because he showed too little interest in others!

Waiter’s uniform…

The scene where the protagonist is special to Raputa was a lie, involving the father’s death and the prostitute bomb.

They exist in the author’s mind as scenes they want to portray at the beginning of the story.

I think it was a type of storytelling that fills in the gaps.

>>167

…Why didn’t you stop editing?

>>177

The author must have been irritated.

>>177

You won’t know until you try! Life is a challenge!

The comments are really lively, aren’t they?

Is there no salvation from malice or the worst of all misery?

>>169

We, the nameless, are first-rate manga readers, so we can evaluate manga calmly and critically without getting caught up in the rough excitement of mediocre works.

It’s like a sekai-kei but also not like a sekai-kei at all…

Ultimately, I was expecting to dress little boy Kei in a servant outfit, but it jumped to a different era.

To think the world was able to be moved with less than 40,000 viewers in a live stream.

>>181

Maybe the clips or short videos went viral.

I completely understand that feeling confused because you can’t sense the core of the theme or story.

The protagonist has no meaning, and the story itself has no meaning either.

As the title suggests, it can only be viewed as a story where Raputa is at the center and ultimately dominates the world.

I wonder what will happen in the final episode.

It was as interesting as the sea girlfriend.

>>184

It wasn’t particularly interesting, but I could faintly sense that the author probably wanted to draw something like this, so comparing it feels a bit rude.

Even if a character I have no particular attachment to ends up experiencing a tragic fate in a shocking twist…

I seriously don’t feel anything…

>>185

I want to be better at drawing characters.

If I had been more emotionally invested in my childhood friend when the prostitute bomb was dropped, I would have been mortally wounded, so it was actually a good thing.

The ambition to create a story that includes unnecessary elements like elementary school student rape training, while other erotic works in the same publication protect elementary school students as if they are in a sacred space, is something I want to commend.

>>186

There is some truth to it.

>>186

If you had drawn a more intense training scene, I would have had no complaints…

It’s simply boring, so throwing the table over is a failure too.

It seems like everything comes together at first glance, but it’s just disappointing that there was no context or good development.

Although there is still the final episode left

It all went exactly as the doctor wanted up to this point~

What’s so interesting about this?

>>191

But it’s going according to the author’s plan, so the author is satisfied.

>>191

Author

If everything goes according to plan, there would be no reason for the protagonist to fall in love, yet for some reason, the feeling of love is still considered to be real, which is the biggest mystery.

Is it okay to have elementary school students engage in sexual activities in other works as well?

I like all one-shot stories, so I feel that I’m not suited for long serialized works that require expanding on a theme.

I really want to read a short story collection.

I thought they went with that kind of development to gain popularity.

I was kind of disappointed, as it seemed like you intended to do that from the beginning…

Right now, I’m enjoying talking like this, but once it’s over, I feel like I’ll forget it in an instant.

>>198

It probably isn’t being talked about enjoyably…

Because they were allowed to do whatever they wanted for so long, I thought they would take revenge in the final chapter that was ten years ahead, but then it’s just the next final episode…

Kei is not acting as the protagonist at all, and not as the heroine either.

Always a toy of Laputa

Well, I didn’t quite understand, but if the author completed what they set out to do and finished it, then that’s good, isn’t it?

It’s a story about AI ruling the world.

There are many things on the way, but there are no particular obstacles to the AI’s progress.

If Kei had struggled in various ways and achieved nothing, it might have left a different impression.

It feels like the situation has become unmanageable before I can even make a resolve and struggle.

I was just there, after all.

I couldn’t believe it…!!

After enjoying and teasing the one I tormented, I gave full authority to the doctor who was regularly mocking me, and to think he would rebel…!!

If the super AI that can do anything successfully brainwashes humanity to create an ideal society, then everything that happened in the story becomes completely meaningless, so I wonder if there’s going to be some kind of twist next time.

Isn’t the part about AI’s romantic feelings, which seemed to be the core of the story, ultimately meaningless?

Things like the shota uncle and Okinawa hacker slam were just put out there without any particular meaning.

Not all manga necessarily provides catharsis, and it’s not always the case that the annoying enemies get beaten and everything feels refreshing…

It’s a story that really selects its readers; everything goes according to the enemy’s plans, and the heroine, who is supposed to have reformed, is actually just acting.