>>1

It seems like they’re talking a lot, but the main series crew that hasn’t been exiled is just genuinely interesting, so it’s only reasonable.

So that’s why there was no bonus.

I was thinking there would be an original drawing in volume 2, but is that what it is…

>>5

The current style of Yanmaga is to ruthlessly cut any underperforming works and move on to the next new series lottery…

>>5

That kind of thing usually doesn’t do well in terms of single volume sales, does it?

Well, I’ve been kind of down lately…

What they’re doing is basically the same, and it feels like a one-off joke… Volume 3 was more successful.

To die before the demon.

I quite liked the protagonist’s character or rather, their humanity.

There wasn’t really any part that was too exciting as a manga…

Should I have provided a bit more story or background about being a junk shop?

If it’s going to end, let’s finish beautifully with a marriage or something.

Yanmaga’s survival depends on the sales of its tankobon, so Akuma is in a guaranteed survival period until the first volume is released…

I like it, but I didn’t think it was worth buying the paperback, so I bought it for the new illustrations instead.

>>17

Well… the manga itself may have sold a bit because of that, but…

So, there are people who turn their attention to magazines, and there are also people who don’t look at magazines but end up buying volume two.

In the end, if it doesn’t engage the reader properly with the content, it becomes meaningless.

The frame that is unlike Akuma, or Ame to Kimi to, or Minami-ke, or Young Magazine.

It might actually be easier to remain as a healing space.

They were doing something really serious in volume 1… and the fact that there was no volume 2 is probably related to that.

It seems that we have to bring it back to eroticism in Itami…

Young Magazine isn’t easy enough to win just with erotic content.

It’s a bit late to say this, but it’s unrealistic for the heroine in the thread to be 36 years old with that appearance.

My female friend was the same, but she didn’t have any mature vibe at all.

I’m reading it, but I can only agree with a “Yeah…”

Well, then…

The final episode is a shotgun marriage.

Well, you did take a pregnancy test, didn’t you?

>>26

It seems like they were still having a threesome afterwards…

It would have been better to just make the junk truly junk and turn it into useless secret tools.

It seemed like there were some responses like that, where they just lured people in with something suggestive and didn’t provide any real content…

It had become somewhat of a topic because of erotic content, but that was all it was… and even that was going in a strange direction.

Next week I’m going to die, that kind of…

Well… it wasn’t that good for sure, but it wasn’t bad for just reading it casually…

It seems I’ve been caught up in the phenomenon where erotic manga artists end up dying after going mainstream…

This material feels like a one-shot… and it didn’t really expand much from the first chapter, so yeah…

There’s no need to pile on since it’s already been said a lot in the thread.

After all, it wouldn’t be interesting without the essence of the land.

So it is.

There wasn’t a bonus in volume 2, so I thought, well, that’s fine.

Isn’t it a bit too much to say that the second volume without any extras is already ending and I’m not feeling motivated?

It felt like a failure that the yandere-ish little sister character was better.

I wished you would have delved deeper into my sister.

My sister ended up becoming a lesbian.

Honestly, big glasses and big breasts are nice, but, well, that’s not really it; do you understand that I’ve got enough of those refreshing moments filled elsewhere? That’s what the manga was about.

Well, it felt like this wouldn’t develop much even at the planning stage.

The Mono-Boke episodes were especially nihilistic.

If there are unpleasant parts about the characters or the story, I think it would need to have enough eroticism or other appealing aspects to compensate.

It wasn’t particularly interesting.

Appropriate termination

Itami, please continue drawing futanari mother.

The way the male character’s expressions and shadows are depicted, not just his personality, was so unsettling that I couldn’t continue reading, but has there been any improvement regarding the male characters since it has been serialized?

>>57

No, not at all.

>>63

If you can’t get rid of that drawing style habit, I think many people will drop out as they read for a long time.

I also know that there are new erotic illustrations included, but I haven’t bought the book.

Well, I think it’s unfortunate, but it seems fair.

The character itself was good, so please reuse the character, make it futanari, and draw something where they are getting penetrated a lot in an erotic book.

I don’t know if I can call myself a Gintama follower, but…

I think it’s difficult to surpass predecessors for those who make people laugh with a laid-back style of comedy involving jokes and retorts…

The scammer woman who overcharges is a bit erotic, and it’s impossible to neutralize that…

>>64

It requires hard play up to scat.

>>65

It’s important to give consequences when you have a character with a bad personality doing malicious things, even as a joke, because without that, the story can become vague.

If it had started with erotic manga from the beginning, it would have sold well.

I feel like I heard that Volume 1 sold well thanks to the bonus.

Was the survey bad?

Well, it was a manga that I didn’t really understand what it wanted to do…

Is it not enough just to be erotic? Yanmaga has a high hurdle.

>>70

I wish they had promoted it more in the main story.

>>70

It’s said to be just erotic, but there isn’t any erotic content in the main story.

While other manga are struggling in print.

I felt that it was somewhat unsatisfactory and not decisive as I read it, but it seems that it just didn’t suit me, and the original book releases were well-received, so I thought it might continue to some extent…

It was quite a mysterious manga.

The yuri manga that originated from a doujinshi was quite interesting…

I see, this is based on the original work.

With this kind of thing

I should have just done erotic stuff.

I want them to create something like an erotic version of “Yoi Yami Gento Soshi” because the artwork was good.

The eroticism was like it was meant to be described directly in the volume.

It’s different from the Narou genre, but it feels like you have to include a lot of elements that appeal to readers! The overall quality or standard of demand is really high in today’s Young Magazine.

>>82

It feels like it’s not okay unless it fulfills extreme crimes, violence, and sex, even with the poor security.

It’s like that Scary something, but despite trying to lure with sex appeal, it’s lacking in erotic content.

>>84

That was clearly something I didn’t want to make erotic, but I added some erotic elements at the beginning just to attract people.

I feel like crying even though I posted the fan art on X.

It’s really tough.

When the thread was up, it was nice to be erotic… good… there was nothing else.

Is this going to end even though the yakuneko continues?

>>91

The difference in the quality of the story is so vast that it feels ridiculous to compare them…

It’s more like a waste of money in Itami.

Because of Itami, the expectations for erotic content have risen too much, and it feels like both sides are unhappy.

>>92

Wouldn’t it have been better to have a different person for the animation, completely remove the erotic elements, and move to a manga magazine where more complex human interactions take place, rather than staying with Young Magazine?

>>100

The content isn’t worth reading unless it’s this picture.

>>100

Well… I hate to say it, but the story itself was boring, wasn’t it?

The “Yani-neko” occasionally makes me chuckle, but it couldn’t become something like that, so there’s no helping it; it couldn’t even become a gag manga.

I was away for a while and recently started reading Young Magazine again, but even just flipping through it, there are several works that catch my attention, making me think whether I should read it again next week… Overall, the hooks are strong.

Honestly, I have the impression that interesting people are being exiled.

>>95

There is a limit to contrarianism, isn’t there?

Or maybe you’re saying that because your favorite manga has become like that.

I think the current Young Magazine has the most severe treatment of struggling works among weekly magazines.

Myo-chan-sensei and Karuma-sensei have surprisingly high hurdles in today’s Young Magazine.

It’s not that she’s such a good woman that you would want to see her just for the erotic aspect.

It’s the type of dullness that doesn’t make you want to support men, so well…

I hope the artist returns to doing erotic work with this.

I really liked the art, but the content was about a thirty-something getting scammed into buying expensive things and complaints about marriage hunting…

I wondered why Satanafani…?

>>106

To be honest, I’ve been in a slump and have been out of the rankings every time, but I briefly became a topic of conversation due to the Kazunari bubble.

It was unexpectedly popular for the author, and there were strange instances like, “I used the manuscript of the scene where Kazunari is being dug to hold my coffee saucer, lol.”

Since then, it seems that they can’t forget the bubble, and they’ve been producing second and third Kazunari-like attention-seeking anal homosexuals.

I don’t dislike it, but I think that kind of punishment is reasonable.

If we pair it with a more compatible original work, it can be resolved.

There are those who not only express disappointment about things like Satano Fani being sent online, but also start saying that it’s wrong or that Young Magazine is strange.

It’s because it’s not selling normally.

I liked it quite a bit, but it didn’t work out…

Perhaps it was just good that I could die without being exiled to an island.

Yanmar

Toilet

Simply put, the main trash-selling part is not interesting…

It would have been better to pile on more outrageous claims and bluffs.

That’s pointless.

SatanoFani is doing well because they are in the Young Magazine.

The place selling junk isn’t the main focus, it’s just a device to develop the story…

Do you want to torment YowaO, make them feel good, engage in something erotic, or tell a tear-jerking story?

It feels like it changes too much every single time.

>>123

I feel like I couldn’t shake it off.

I think it’s generous that they still allow it to continue on the web when other magazines would have already canceled it.

It’s not just that the work isn’t selling; there are also cases where the author can’t maintain the pace of the magazine serialization.

Golden Drop, which somehow survives despite selling less than the manga that gets cut.

I think the person behind “Satanophany” has had moments of going viral since the time of Eden, but the content itself has been cringeworthy.

It was cut off pretty quickly.

It seems that Kodansha is quite strict in judging based on the sales of their paperback books.

PEEP was exiled and immediately executed, so there’s a difference in whether they can die in this magazine.

>>130

Oh, it’s over, huh?

Honestly, I think I was able to keep fighting thanks to Itami’s artwork, even with this result.

In the end, that crazy big-boobed junior appeared and then it was canceled just like that.

I wanted to see something like a more erotic version of Kourindou.

“Wow, the burbling sound is amazing…”

>>134

It’s not like I’ve drawn a story with a well-known name for no reason…

>>134

They say it won’t come out because it’s stubbornly dirty here.

If I had encountered that manga during my middle and high school years, I probably would have been like a monkey doing it.

The artwork was good, but if the names themselves had been messed around with more to increase the bizarre story elements, it could have pulled me in like “Outer Zone” or “Laughing Salesman,” with that mysterious tool seller.

It’s sad that it’s coming to an end because the big-bust glasses hit my fetish…

>>137

It’s such a shame that the thirty-something big-breasted glasses lady was the best…

Can’t something be done about it?

In the case of Professor Yamada, it’s more of a “shoot many times and you’ll hit something” theory.

It’s the type that, amidst a barrage of cold jokes and gags, occasionally mixes in an ultra-hit joke or episode…

>>138

Ahh~ If there’s something like this once in a while, I’m satisfied with that.

I think 36 years old was a bit too aggressive.

“Master, please lower it by 10 years.”

>>140

A 26-year-old salaryman who is pessimistic about himself and actively seeking a partner? It’s not like there aren’t any, but…

What I’m doing is just a story about being forced to buy junk that was of no use at all, so it tends to become monotonous.

Holick is coming back, but honestly, I’m not really happy about it.

It felt like a waste.

The artwork is good, and the settings seem interesting, so there was something exciting about it.

The author introduced it as a yuri manga, but that audience might be a bit too much for it.

>>146

First of all, even if you reach that layer, they won’t spend any money, right?

It’s a group that’s known for being big-mouthed despite being stingy with their money.

>>151

Is that so?

I can’t tell if it’s dragging on or being stretched out, it’s just a blur.

It feels like we could end it at any moment, yet we haven’t.

On the contrary, if you push the erotic aspects in a strange way, it just becomes “put it in, you fool!” in Young Magazine.

It’s necessary to have a compromise where you can express your libido like a book bought with tax money, but there’s absolutely no eroticism.

Monday’s Tawawa is crap.

>>150

(Undisputed No. 1 in the polls)

It’s sad that Scary Campus was cut, as the story was fairly interesting, even though it lacked enough erotic elements.

>>153

It’s been quite a while, but isn’t there something like a new series from the author?

There are uninteresting comics in Yanmaga that only have pictures, but it’s difficult, isn’t it?

It’s reasonable that this is being discontinued, but there is a bit of a disconnect with the sensibilities of the Young Magazine readership.

Higanjima can also come up with bizarre plays like Tengu pushing and other incomprehensible things…

Yanmaga is a lowly magazine, but it seems difficult to output the exact level of vulgarity that the readers demand.

>>166

Even if you don’t aim precisely, it’s not too extreme! So if you’re in doubt, just go ahead and put out something extreme; after all, it’s Yanmaga.

At 36 years old, the character with black straight hair and big breasts is truly a shame.

If you read Satano Fani, you’ll pretty much understand.

That wasn’t banishment; it was a promotion.

>>171

As I read, I realize that there are nutrients to be gained from this, so please continue as is.

>>171

I don’t hate manga itself, but I’m not a fan of this kind of official announcement-like fans.

>>177

There’s no point in saying anything to someone like you who creates their own story and believes in it.

>>179

Are you saying that creating a story on your own is actually a promotion like being exiled?

I see… Tawa wa sells with that eroticism, so even without doing the real thing, it’s enough to satisfy and is very popular.

There are indeed people who want to go all in if it’s going to be erotic.

>>172

I can only think that kind of thing should be done in a boys’ magazine…

I didn’t particularly hate it, so I wonder if it deserves that much criticism just from reading the thread!?

>>173

What about it do you not dislike?

Rather, if you passionately talk about what you like, won’t you be able to gain some level of agreement?

However, most of the good parts have already been mentioned in the thread; is there anything else?

>>173

It’s quite provocative for a side dish.

It’s too weak to be a favorite.

I don’t dislike it, but it was a somewhat unsatisfying work.

But if I have sales from the volume, it could fund my next work, and I really wanted to include some erotic content…

Even though the part where I was made to buy something with a crappy lie was not interesting and I got bored and reached my limit early, the character was good… but I guess it didn’t work out…

>>181

The reason is explained in the first half!

I don’t really hate it or anything (I haven’t bought the tankobon), but well, the serialization is gonna end like that.

>>182

It’s not that it was canceled because it was disliked, but rather that it ended because it wasn’t liked, which is something I can understand…

Men just don’t have that charm, after all…

>>183

It’s not that it lacks charm, but rather that it doesn’t write in a way that brings out its charm…

It seems like every time I get into trouble somehow and end up getting tricked into a purchase.

I don’t generally dislike it, but compared to the others in Young Magazine… that’s how I feel.

I read the first few chapters and found it somewhat interesting, but for some reason, I stopped reading.

I can’t quite describe it well, but I think the reason is that I’ve been seeing similar characters a lot lately.

I feel that it’s a failure because many people think that the main focus is on making purchases.

>>190

Well, getting tricked by the older sister is the main focus, right?

It’s difficult to survive in Young Magazine without the axis of that and without the erotic elements.

>>195

What I remembered because I was tricked and toyed with by my older sister is xxxholic, but that one had a lot of elements that drew you in with strange youkai and mysterious beings, so it’s good, right?

It was a manga that I didn’t really understand what was going on, but I liked it because it was an erotic manga with relatively tall proportions.

I remember that the author of Satanophany said so.

If it’s at a level where single volumes aren’t selling even at the cutoff line, you can be approached for web serialization and if you wish, you can continue it on the web.

It seems that if you break a line on the web, it’s completely over.

It’s unclear whether the thread image was not approached for a web offer or if it declined the web offer.

Just because it’s been canceled, I won’t draw any extras.

The vibe is somewhat subtly amateurish, or overall weak.

The second volume isn’t an original work, but it has a lot of added nipple content.

That’s not necessarily definite.

At the first volume stage, there was just a sense of ease because there was a stock of conversations.

Since they were actually in love with each other from quite early on, I feel like it would have been better to explore that more.