https://magazine.yanmaga.jp/c/orinonaka/

It’s nice that I can properly convey the feeling that even I could do it.

The most important element for the heroine.

This is about normal for a gender-neutral restroom.

This is a bit…

I am curious about how it will continue in terms of how to proceed.

It seems like a short-term intensive series.

It feels like Young Magazine!

It’s about how far we can go.

If you’re going to do things like this, then just…

It’s over there, huh?

Is it really not a one-shot but a series?

What kind of audience would willingly watch this?

There is a possibility that they are pretending to be shocked but are actually overjoyed like a pervert…

It’s been a while since I’ve met someone who gets excited by menstrual blood, just like Chameleon Yazawa.

Isn’t it a slightly risqué slapstick romantic comedy with this girl’s character design…?

It’s been a while since I’ve been hit with the feeling of “that’s gross.”

That said, it looks like the votes from female readers might end up at zero; is that really okay?

>>42

It seems that there was a slight increase surprisingly due to Sushi Karma.

>>52

Sushi Karma… me… like a New Chaa?

Even if someone is framed at the last minute, it is too hasty for the heroine to lower her guard because of that.

There is also a possibility of a way to resign.

I feel like the protagonist will almost have no chance to get the heroine’s napkin, but I wonder how it will continue.

Well, if the protagonist takes a break, there’s going to be a commotion, and if they’re suspected, they can’t hide it, right?

It’s tough to read.

Hmm… isn’t that a bit too punchy?

>>32

Is it about a smell?

I wonder if the one who poured bodily fluids into a female employee’s water bottle is the model.

I wonder what they’ll do after episode 2.

Girl trying to find the culprit VS protagonist’s intellect battle?

Or will it lean towards depicting the psychology of weak men?

Hey, is this something I can jerk off to…?

It’s a waste because the drawing is good.

Huh… I thought it was just a regular manga, but it turned out to be a seriously messed up one that promotes sexual crimes.

>>39

Isn’t it just like Young Magazine?

Do readers of Young Magazine prefer this kind of maliciousness?

I think a more open and vulgar style is preferred.

>>40

A girl character who stands out.

Habit

The anticipation of what will happen from now on.

Huh! Is there a romantic comedy insurance that can be started from here!?

It’s like a super realistic version of Onamasu Kurosawa…

>>43

It’s nostalgic.

I definitely feel like the reading style is similar.

Gross!

The limitations were only in the explanation of the work.

As expected, this isn’t really a rom-com genre!

Is the author strong in heart…?

If it’s just the thread image, the author of Mem Mem-chan is doing a proper romantic comedy.

It was too gross and unacceptable.

It’s quite inappropriate to the level that it wouldn’t be surprising if feminists found out and it caused an uproar.

At least the protagonist is clearly portrayed as something gross, right?

I don’t understand the author’s intention, though.

Well, I think I’m good after episode 2…

Is it the end of the evil flowers?

>>62

It’s just like a regular criminal and victim.

I read it, but after just one chapter, I can’t say much.

I can’t really evaluate it until I see a clearer direction.

Well, still, it seems like the woman might throw in some strange element to spice up the story.

If it’s at the level of a virgin’s fantasies, it can still be somewhat cute.

This is just a sex offender, and it’s no laughing matter.

It’s stepping into a taboo on the same level as showing a skewered baby being eaten.

If you don’t go all out like PewDiePie, I can’t get into it.

If you think about a stalker woman dumpster diving but with the genders reversed, it would probably be more acceptable.

If you want that kind of secretion so badly, there are worlds constantly being featured in the same magazine, so let’s go there.

Is it because of menstruation? Um…

The guy who starts from the criminal’s perspective in Conan.

>>69

If it goes in a suspense direction, it seems a bit interesting.

In that case, just stick with the vampire setting.

>>70

The creepy Higanjima is starting…

Such things cannot be allowed without obtaining consent to play!

This is drawn by a woman, right? Call someone more suited for the bathroom!

Shimo and the closely related Guro really haven’t changed at all in Young Magazine.

I’m a weak otaku, so I like works where the heroine is already decided.

There is a sense of reassurance that in the end, they will come together.

There were quite a few people in middle school who would steal used sanitary napkins.

I can only express that I wish to be attacked by a colleague in a place I don’t know.

I don’t know if they’re aiming for empathy, but when they depict it like “I’m a weak guy, so…” it only feels like provocation to me.

It’s a bit much to defend even the napkin thief…

I have a mental brake that makes me not want to get involved with menstruation topics.

Even if the heroine was a pervert, it seems her disgust towards the protagonist would prevail.

I read it, but is this the kind of story that should be serialized…?

>>89

Is this going to be a story where the protagonist just feels sick and it actually gets serialized?

If it’s a serialization, it might end up incorporating some other crazy settings as well.

I hear that the books bought with the money from Yanmaga are relatively read by women as well.

It is clear that this is not a manga that affirms the protagonist, but then if we consider whether they are thinking about a conclusion for this story that can only lead to ruin, it seems that there are quite a few cases where they are not.

It’s like a perverted version of Yoshikage Kira.

It feels like this guy is going to end up being in charge of napkin collection…

If he’s a real weak guy, just talking for a bit and he’ll be easily won over.

From there, going for the napkin is the move of a conqueror.

I thought it was a pervert, but it was just a normal girl, so I feel sorry for her… I probably won’t watch after this…

At the point of being an erotic artist, several levels of common sense have completely flown out the window.

Ah, I thought this kid was actually a typical pattern of a more troublesome pervert, but they’re just a normal kid.

How do you spread this…?

>>101

I can’t even tell if they’re a normal kid since nothing about their inner self has come out yet.

I feel uneasy about a future that seems like everyone will be in an unbearable situation.

It would just turn into a story where the protagonist only suffers.

How many people want to read that?

Wasn’t the heroine intentionally throwing away the napkin at a timing that made it easy for the protagonist to pick it up…?

The story ends when you stop throwing things in the company’s trash can, so I think there must be some reason to keep throwing things away.

>>105

It’s not just a napkin comic, right!?

It becomes a psychological battle when you put poop on a napkin or disguise it like someone else’s napkin.

It’s true that the protagonist is gross, but is this it?

Just by making the heroine’s appearance look like a shoujo manga, it feels like a manga in the style of Shuuzou Oshimi.

In the end, will the detective with a child solve the case and the story come to an end…?

Help me, Tanjiro.

If he stops being discarded at work, this creepy guy will turn into a youkai that chases after places to be thrown away.

Froylan

Does that mean a lewd young lady!?

The creepy garbage-digging stalker’s monologue was in the first episode, but it needs to get erotic quickly in the second episode, or I won’t be able to read it.

When the resolution is high, you want to look away.

Is the resolution high?

>>119

I’ve never gone as far as being a garbage-digging stalker, but to be honest, I could empathize with the thought.

It’s already tough on pages 5 and 6.

If fantasy elements are included, I will laugh.

I want to read episode 2.

I don’t want you to hold back; give it your all, author!

>>122

Well, if we’re going to do it, we just have to get it done quickly and all at once.

Well, I’ve already jerked off to Dream Sora Kuroko-chan, so please spare me the weird character development in episode 2.

Kuroko-chan is a naive girl that even I can handle.

I am going to arrest you for theft!

Of course, you understand the reason!

Yanmar

Toilet…!

It’s unforgivable to go down while ignoring this big girls.

The girl is cute, but it was too hard to read, so I gave up.

It’s a rare setting, so I wonder if the story will revolve around that.

The heroine is a hidden otaku and a fan of the erotic drawings that the protagonist is creating.

No, there’s nothing like that erotic doujin setting…

So you’re a succubus…

I felt gross because something like a period came out.

I wonder how it is to throw away menstrual products in the shared restroom of a small company.

I wonder if it just feels ordinary?

The shared restroom has a small trash can, and they have taken care to consider the needs of women…

I can relate to the desire for impregnation fetish…

I can’t believe you went for this…

It’s uncertain whether I will be arrested after this or become a cross-dressing napkin hunter.

Since it’s Yanmaga, it’s likely to end up as a shared toilet.

>>144

I wonder what will happen from here for now?

If it continues to focus on napkins, I would certainly lose the desire to read it.

When the crime is revealed in episode 1, it reminds me of “Oni Shine.”

I was really disappointed in episode 2, but…

This kid definitely isn’t normal, based on their name.

It probably relates to the fact that a more familiar petty crime causes more disgust than murder.

If there are no erotic drawings, the spirit of drawing them myself is nice! But then the main story starts to become something amazing.

The sensational topic itself is good, but what’s more important is whether you can carry the story well afterwards, and usually, things like this tend to get lost.

>>150

There is a possibility that a notice will come saying to fold it up because complaints have come before getting lost.

>>151

If you’re going to break under pressure, then you shouldn’t even start.

>>153

Nowadays, there are quite a few instances where complaints that anyone can imagine come in as soon as the first episode is released, and that’s the end of it…

The editing isn’t working.

The company has a very Showa-era vibe, resembling a tough, assertive style, yet the introverted, geeky protagonist doesn’t seem out of place, isn’t bullied, and even has friends and colleagues, while the heroine is also treated kindly in a normal sense; it’s a good company.

>>152

If I hadn’t awakened, I would have lived a life as calm as the stillness.

Such repressed and stagnant, distorted dark desires.

Empathy that understands that it will be like that.

It feels like I might get weirded out reading it because of the simple disgust that mixes with it.

Given the subject matter, there are likely some complaints expected, but I wonder how many complaints will actually come.

If we get complaints at an unacceptable level and the serialization gets canceled, all I can do is laugh.

Until now, they were collected along with the garbage, but this time I went directly and got caught immediately, so I wonder if Yumesora has actually been checking the small trash cans every time.

>>157

It depends on how you noticed because I skipped some parts.

>>157

I thought the flow was that I was normally trying to throw away the second one of the day, but there’s nothing that I just threw away.

Used menstrual pads take away all that suppressed and stagnant sexual desire!

>>158

It seems like catching something like that is akin to elementary and middle school students still not having outgrown the emotional understanding of licking a recorder, but I wonder how that is, really.

Someone who takes joy in licking a recorder is probably just that kind of person at their core, but…

The most unpleasant thing in Yanmaga was the one about Sumi Nigori… At least this one is still readable because the artwork is relatively nice.

Well, the beauty of the drawing might be highlighting the grotesqueness of the material…

Was it covered with sediment and discharge?

I hope it’s not the case that in the end, it’s inside a cage.

A man with repressed and warped abnormal desires and the girl who became his target.

A girl holds someone’s weakness and becomes a mysterious BDSM.

Conveniently, the girl shows mysterious understanding and takes an interest in the man.

Depicting how a man is thoroughly excluded from society and becomes miserable.

I feel like there are only three options.

>>164

I really want them to avoid this development since it’s so realistic.

The way the depiction of a colleague’s sexual desire is belittled before allowing the protagonist to rise above it feels like a very calculated maneuver in the manga.

Your breasts are too big!

Drawing impregnation scenes without a deep understanding of menstruation is probably part of the protagonist’s inner portrayal.

There are many combinations of troubled men and girls in past works.

If this continues, won’t it go straight to the web soon?

I have a sense of rejection towards sexual harassment, but since I haven’t directly harmed the person involved, my mental brakes are broken.

It seems a bit possible to…

As expected of Yanmaga, it has gone even further down.

By the way, I realized that I know nothing about menstruation.

It has a nostalgic Showa vibe and some outdated parts, but it’s rare for this type of manga to not be a power harassment company.

Is there really such a thing nowadays!? Violence and such are rampant.

Used sanitary napkins smell really bad, don’t they?! If you put a jacket in there, you’ll get caught immediately, and even if you try to seal it, it’ll probably leak.

For now, I’m curious about the second episode.

I thought the address looked like a discharge and I was wondering if it was being attacked.

>>181

I think you can write normally.

I remembered an illustration of a heroine from a big-breasted girl manga, but it was anonymous.

I don’t share the fetishes in this manga, but the girl is cute, so I’d like her to draw regular erotic manga.

I don’t know how to enjoy it because it’s a pad, and it’s filled with a terrible-smelling mess…

>>185

This manga depicts people with an obsession for such abnormal things, so I don’t think it’s an erotic manga trying to excite readers with napkins, probably.

Menstrual topics = I realized that I hadn’t paid much attention to the fact that the pad is closely adhering to the vagina due to being distracted by menstrual blood.

Hmmm, if it turns into an erotic manga afterward, then it’s safe, but that won’t happen, right…?

Menstrual blood is as impossible as smegma.

With this level of artistry, it’s absolutely a lie that they’re not using Twitter or social media, so they must be using another name.

>>189

Sorry, I was just using Twitter normally.

>>189

About the author? About the protagonist?

As for the author, I’m not a newcomer and I also use social media.

It has a rather poor searchability name…

While the protagonist is getting off to sexual crimes, I think the person is being devoured by one man in the company multiple times.

It shouldn’t be that the conversation isn’t progressing from the atmosphere of that drinking party, and you seem poor at dodging.

I wonder if girls are also perverts.

I guess it’s a development where one must take responsibility for awakening something.

>>195

If you do that, it will quickly become very common.

>>196

It becomes 500 million times more inconvenient, so it’s not just common, it’s just plain annoying.

First of all, there are plenty of commercial writers who don’t use social media at all.

Even though it should be less criminal than rape, why does it feel several times more disgusting?

Once you realize it has been stolen

I feel like I’ll be suspected right away for the garbage duty, so I’ll get found out immediately.

>>201

No, rather if it’s the garbage duty, they should collect it during the garbage collection.

If someone is only stealing napkins, wouldn’t that conversely make the garbage collectors less suspicious?

I think I should have kept the panty liner instead of a napkin.

It’s a fantasy that menstrual products that have been expired for a long time don’t smell awful.

The author hasn’t practiced, so that can be considered reasonable.

>>205

In that regard, can’t we just say it’s because the protagonist is a pervert?

Usually, people don’t get excited by menstrual products, but you’re portraying a pervert who gets excited by them, right?

>>205

I just want to say, I’m the kind of person who knows the reality of menstrual products!

If this kid isn’t strange, then I’ll quit my job next week and end the series.

Collecting it as a whole was a bad move.

If this goes down the pure love route, I’ll laugh.

Normally, it’s strange to get excited about this, so if you start calling it fantasy, then BDSM or scat or anything would become a fantasy too…

Hmm, I thought it was relatively normal, but it was already at full throttle…

I don’t really want to say this, but…

Bad at drawing.

I thought it was a new serialization by the author of MemMem.

If you go a little further, you’ll start rummaging through your own trash and stealing discarded underwear.

>>216

It’s like going back to the 90s.

I can’t understand how to enjoy it because the focus is on the man’s creepiness.

I have become somewhat interested in the reality of used sanitary napkins, but I have no way to verify it.

I think it was good that they didn’t easily make Kuroko a perverted character.

>>219

There is still no inner description, so I can’t tell anything.

I don’t want it to become that easy.

>>219

I still don’t understand.

There’s almost no description, so I have no idea how it will turn out in the second episode.

I’m currently feeling really put off, but I might end up getting excited about the person who stole in episode 2.

The title is probably about discharge and menstrual blood fetishes because it’s in the context of sediment.

If it’s Yanmaga, they would include erotic scenes of the heroines…

I saw the author’s old Twitter and it seems they are publishing erotic doujin on Shibu, so I went to check it out, but I couldn’t get into it.

The heroine’s design is quite to my liking among the multiple female characters, but in this environment, it feels overwhelmingly intense and I find it difficult to be drawn to it.

I can relate to the uncomfortable feeling when a young girl enters a comfortable space that was only for men.

In episode 2, the heroine’s character will likely become clearer, so it depends on that.