Unmatched gag manga
The lack of a strong ending is fatal.
>>2
Oh no, I’m so done with this race!
There’s hardly any dark story at all…
>>4
If I gain weight after retiring, please let me enter the race!! It’s seriously a joke that a fat shuttle might actually participate.
The problem is that there are no rivals that feel like real rivals.
>>6
This can only be said to be because Taiki was too strong.
I can still understand losing a race after retiring and becoming fat.
3rd place in the S Stakes
Are you a monster or what…?
If it’s a mile, I’m unbeatable, so I keep winning, winning, and winning the mile races, which makes it difficult to come up with a story.
I missed the 100th regiment rate in the last run out of pity, but still, coming in third is strange for you…
Silence Suzuka, Awakening.
Run through autumn.
I’m the strongest even in the rain; it’s too late now to tell me to enter the race.
>>14
(I guess I couldn’t make it in time for the diet…)
The story lacks ups and downs and is not interesting.
Moreover, the ending is a joke.
It will become a gag-based heartwarming manga.
>>15
All this guy does is win barbecues and major races…
“A joke where I was sent off to achieve my first victory overseas, only to be beaten by Pearl first.”
It’s really a joke that I lost my perfect record in G1 because I got fat.
I can overcome the rain.
Can win on both dirt and turf.
Can win both in consecutive matches and on European expeditions.
You can’t win against fat people.
>>20
(S Stakes 3rd place)
Aside from racing and winning, what else is there besides playing with my trainer, classmates, and Doto…?
>>21
If we want to create a scenario unique to Uma Musume, it would be the sadness of Suzuka, who was competing for the title of Horse Girl of the Year, suffering a serious injury and having to win by default.
Depicting more seriously how Ms. Pearl stole the glory of winning her first overseas G1 victory…
>>27
It seems like World Level and Taiki might not be too concerned, so I wonder if they can take it seriously?
>>40
The thing is, Taiki is so striking that in both Uma Musume and the original work, everything is overshadowed by Taiki…
>>40
It seems that they wouldn’t care, or rather, if it’s according to historical facts, when Taiki runs next week after winning an overseas G1, they would say he is stronger.
The prepared footage shows that they won their final race as well.
Since I retired, I’ve been having BBQ parties every day, and it’s a joke that I get asked to participate in races with my head down.
>>24
If Supa-chan becomes a Gombuto, she’ll get all messed up, but it’s unfair that the shuttle comes in third…
Finally, the combination of Taiki and Mr. Dot is quite an exquisite pairing, isn’t it?
If it weren’t for the weight, my win rate would be 100%, winning all major races and 5 G1 victories.
Is my partner Doto and my junior Gran also going to participate?
It also has a slight element of flair.
After retirement, if I were to open a café in Doutou and Hidaka, it might feel a bit American.
>>31
Are you okay? Can you manage to work as a clerk safely?
If we treat the fact that foreign horses couldn’t enter the Tenno Sho as a discrimination issue, it could be taken seriously.
The first generation that was able to come out like that is my best friend Dotou, so it’s a nice feeling.
>>32
To be honest, is that really interesting?
A good example of something being too strong to become a story.
>>33
If I had a rival like my sister or Shion, it wouldn’t be so bad, but the absence of any rival is too fatal.
The 97 generation has such different conditions and preferred distances that they don’t really match up with each other.
>>34
If only there was a Kyoei March that was mostly aligned with something other than Fuku…
Meinerlove “Therefore”
First, it’s tough to have the determination to try to compete with Taiki Shuttle in miles.
https://db.netkeiba.com/horse/1994109686/
It’s too strong and there’s no drama!
In his later years, he lived happily with Doto and passed away peacefully in his sleep.
The one who is still in the position of being the strongest miler, partly due to winning on bad tracks.
Despite the individual’s performance being very stable, there is too much inconsistency in coming in second place, making it difficult to create rivals.
In the Sprinters Stakes, did it finish in third place because of circumstances that I don’t know about or was it not in good form?
The only weakness I have is that my mental state is a bit needy…
My skills are unmatched, I don’t have weak legs, I’m not sickly, and my relatives or acquaintances are not unfortunate.
I felt that since their battle histories are similar, Durandal might be somewhat saved by Vodka when I was contemplating Wodory.
>>48
If you think about it without vodka, it’s so strong that there’s no drama; rather, my brother has the more tumultuous life.
The strongest in the rain is too strong.
In the first place, it’s rare for someone to maintain stable performance over a long period at distances of a mile or less.
The shorter the distance, the less the element of bluffing becomes…
Moreover, Taiki Shuttle somehow doesn’t reduce its speed even in the rain, which is super scary.
The reason why Oguri and Teio have high dramatic appeal is that Taiki almost fails to meet those conditions.
>>54
Winning repeatedly and competing, if the lineup isn’t stable, drama won’t be created, huh…
A Uma Musume claiming to be the child of Taiki Shuttle, who won the NHK Mile, has been unable to win afterward and has become a hot topic on the electronic bulletin board…?
If I had continued for another year, I might have been able to become a rival in the same position as Black Hawk.
Well, that makes it feel like Air Jihad and Agnes World have stronger characters.
It’s okay.
It’s okay if the story is just about Taiki being lewd and cute.
>>60
Taiki and Dotou are running a café in Hidaka while playing with MET Cats, goats, sheep, and raccoons… This is definitely in the Kirara style.
It seems like there’s only an extension of the distance, but if Taiki wins the Autumn Tenno Sho, it can’t be helped…
If we’re going to do it, it would be something like the ultimate mile competition of all eras.
It could wrap up in just one episode.
>>62
I won every time except for once and in the last run, so it’s too flat…
>>51
In the first place, I think Suzuka’s greatest strength is her ability to speed through middle distances like a sprint or a mile, so there’s no point in running her in a mile race…
Excuse me, could you please stop super accelerating in the rain?
>>65
There are no enemies in Japan! It’s scary that it’s not overstated.
If it develops in a poorly serious or gloomy direction, it won’t be great, as the precedent was set with Kitasan in the third season…
If only JRA-kun hadn’t done unnecessary things.
Even on good ground, it’s a strong level of finishing kick, but in the rain, this is…
Winning the Mile Championship, they decided to retire and let loose…
Winning the Mile Championship by 5 lengths is truly monstrous.
Is it a locally bred horse or a famous horse like a triple crown winner, produced by a domestic stallion? No.
Is there a very strong senior? No.
Are there many rivals among your peers, juniors, or on the same path? No.
Have you experienced a long-term fracture or illness? No.
Do you have periods of a slump? No.
Did you experience repeated overwhelming victories and major defeats? No.
Is there a sad background like the death of a parent or trainer? No.
Was there a good economy or some kind of major disaster as part of the historical background? No.
Looking at the results, I think the only thing left to do is increase the distance, but I can’t participate in the Autumn Tenno Sho, the Osaka Cup isn’t a G1 yet, and the Arima and Japan Cups are just too long…
Your suitability is for gag manga.
I have no rivals, but I have an overwhelming number of friends.
There are only factors that will cause me to worry about when I’ll have to write the scenario, separate from the convenience of not having any participants.
Too strong.
Bakushin and Foo-chan are also strong like Taiki, but they were in a rivalry because they fought each other while fiercely defending their own territories…
In the anime original, I’m lending my chest to Supe-san, but it’s really too great…
>>80
If Taiki is going to hold a mock race, then the students will definitely gather to the point that Golshi can sell yakisoba, right?
When it comes to Umamusume and URA, please do it for me! Please come out!! With that, let’s wrap it up; in a fluffy state, Taiki wasn’t able to show up and lost, so I think the resentment from the trainer and the fans must be quite significant.
I wondered why Bodhi Tree S lost, and then I realized the winner was a mare that was 3 kilos lighter.
Both were ridden by one of the top jockeys of that era who was in his prime, and either way, they both won without any issues…
Looking at it this way, recently, Do DEUCE seems really suited to be the main character…
>>84
While competing fiercely with my peers, the drama naturally unfolds as we win and lose in major races.
The race description ends in an instant, and I gain specialized knowledge about barbecues and American cuisine every week.
It’s not funny that I lost a perfect record in major races and a 100% win rate, but when expressed in Uma Musume, it’s quite comical.
The person is incredibly strong.
The offspring are not bad either.
Even as the maternal grandfather, I’m leaving a name behind.
Hey, this guy is an amazing being more than you can imagine!
It’s crazy how well they control the short distances too.
Even though I was that fat in the last run, I still got third place, which is really scary.
Drama is born from winning and losing.
The summer Koshien is a good example.
When watching horse racing, I occasionally see the name Taiki Shuttle as a maternal grandfather.
Just looking at the body weight, isn’t the last run of MCS quite overweight?
Since it’s a descendant, it’s running strongly in the center even as the maternal grandfather.
He was fairly successful as a stud horse as well.
Moreover, the Heart’s Cry offspring will face off against the Deep Impact offspring in the Japan Cup, and just by holding the Arima Kinen, which bets on the dream of achieving the autumn old horse Triple Crown, it can end perfectly.
Well, if we don’t do the Arima Kinen properly, there’s a risk of a huge uproar…
If a strong Uma Musume capable of making a mark in history prepares perfectly at her best distance, she can usually win races easily without any trouble!
>>97
Don’t say it so casually.
>>97
Don’t say it so casually…
Sometimes I want to enjoy sports brightly and happily, with my breasts shaking…
It’s impossible to make the side that perpetrated the violence the protagonist without any particularly sad background or past.
Before debuting, I failed the gate test twice and had severe soreness, which delayed my debut several times.
>>99
Kitasan Black… well, there are things like the Takarazuka Kinen, so that’s good…
>>108
The third season of the anime forced in some ups and downs in the second half, didn’t it?
When you run out of things to do, you really have no choice but to go for a mid-range, as my junior has proven…
There’s no way this would have been possible back then.
>>100
Even so, Gran Alegría has two peers who shared the Triple Crown, as well as seniority with 🥒 and Shigetsuki Noda, so it’s quite a bit better.
If you try to take things seriously in Taiki, it might end up feeling wrong, right?
>>101
“Even though I’ve retired, telling me to lose weight now… it’s a serious scene where I break down in tears.”
>>103
Taiki Shuttle in despair over the BBQ ban.
>>110
My worries… my worries are lighter…!
>>115
Are you underestimating BBQ…?
>>120
It’s already light if it’s only a problem like that!
>>101
There are no weaknesses mentally, but I have to take it seriously due to external factors…
I think that trying to do something original poorly will only result in a big failure.
As a setup, I gave her a weakness to loneliness, just in case.
In individual scenarios, there is a dedicated trainer, so there is no particular weakness that functions.
I think it’s quite a joke.
I think it’s much better to keep Taiki more like a slice-of-life with a gag to wrap it up, rather than making it strangely serious…
That’s… saying we should have a barbecue three days a week…
>>109
You need to eat vegetables, considering nutrition.
Let’s make it all vegetables for the barbecue.
The pearl scenario is too much after Taiki…
The junior not only participated properly in the 1.0-mile race while increasing the distance, but also took on both the champion and challenger roles.
After completing it, I was only stopped once by a combo of a demon at 1.0 miles and a super strong opponent at 1.125 miles, but other than that, it was a complete victory.
What?! Are hugs limited to 5 times a day?!
If we’re going to do it, it seems like it would go better as a serious one-episode conclusion.
The barbecue is not Japanese-style, but Texas brisket…
No matter how hard you struggle, you can only stand on the side of the strong, Taiki…
Among anime protagonists, Spero feels more like this, but the impression of their blunders is too big.
>>122
That said, my mother passed away soon after I was born, and I was raised by New Zealanders.
The first Derby is presented to Yoshitaka Akiyama.
There are many rivals.
Arch-enemy Grass Wonder
The autumn sky that Suzuka-san could not achieve.
A gratitude visit to Montjuïc.
It’s easier to draw when there’s a big defeat in a strange place…
Taiki is in despair because he can’t find a piece of meat for BBQ in Japan.
When I thought that Dou Deuce had finally awakened on a different path from his rivals and could finally fight,
Since the situation suddenly changed and we lost, it has certainly become a topic of interest.
(A roughly flowing, unmatched racing scene)
>>125
It was still good because there was rainy Yasuda.
Other than that, it’s all about winning by sticking with Rudolf and pulling through at the end!
I wonder if they would write things like the rain at the Yasuda Kinen or the dialogue during the race if they keep making the scenario like this.
The BBQ is rumored to have more enthusiasm than the race.
>>128
Rather, it seems like I would mainly make BBQ.
>>130
The BBQ after winning the race is exceptional!
In the first 20 minutes of the anime, they play with friends, have a barbecue, and hug their trainer.
With the leftover 3 minutes, finish by getting first place in the race and playing the ED.
>>129
It’s not like we’re Donbrothers…
>>129
Indeed, if you do this 13 times, you can have one episode per race…
>>136
The greatest crisis is approaching in the final episode…
“This is a Uma Musume anime, but what’s the difference from BBQPitBoys? I feel like someone will say that.”
When suggested with Taiki Shuttle
If it’s only showing how strong or too strong it is, please understand.
Viewers don’t think they’ll lose the race just for the sake of BBQ.
The rain-soaked Yasuda simply showcased an overwhelmingly different level of power and won decisively, so there’s no drama or anything like that…
Wow, the rocket start of Kyouei March is amazing!
Taiki won normally…
If someone is unleashed with that kind of finishing kick in a bad rain, no one can win!
The collaborating stores will all end up being steakhouses.
The race is introduced with a monologue of about 5 seconds, after which the detailed depiction of the BBQ, which is a matter of pride, is shown.
Using salad oil for vegetable enthusiasts.
The despair of not being allowed to win by running away from the rain is terrible…
The strong character international student finished their training while remaining a strong character after various events.
The end.
It’s not like that, Taiki!!
I tried researching the historical facts about the image in the thread, and it turned out to be a crazy guy.
A human drama where the person in charge persuades the trainer, who is trying to resign due to pressure and bullying, to stay?
I will win the race.
Woohoo~ Taiki is amazing~
This is already reaching Rudolf’s level, isn’t it?
>>150
Hmm, but doesn’t it lack a bit of madness?
Just an ordinary older sister you find around.
It appeared in the scenario of Gran Alegria as well.
Taiki, Gran, and Kazuo (like the trainer) all have the luxurious troubles of being on the winning side…
It felt like victory was taken for granted, and on top of that, I wanted to unlock achievements.
I want an episode where I can just enjoy Metocats with Doto.
>>152
It was just a recap of winning the race in the last minute, and then it went to the ending.
It’s just that I can only say that the surroundings are to blame for not being able to become rivals…
To be honest, I feel that even if they were to rewrite the story now, the content wouldn’t change that much…
>>156
I guess I should wrap it around the pearl a little more…?
>>156
I think the aspect of earning achievements to become the representative Uma Musume for the year could be emphasized more.
>>156
If I bring out Mile-chan and do a boss rush in the second half, maybe it will work…
There are really few horses without rivals up to this point…
It’s probably not a good idea to create an original story about playing with colleagues or other friends, as it would make things less exciting.
Invincible in the rain ×
Even without rain, invincible ◯
If it stays like this, it will turn into a discontinued manga without mountains or valleys, what will we do?
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