
It’s completely wrapped up now…
>>1Already from before
The hypnosis is too strong, and the countermeasures are too forceful, but oh well!
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Are you… going to die…?
I still have a tutor…
The assistant has completely become a supporting character.
Well, it’s true that I would be troubled if you came for a business trip.
I wonder if I’ve done anything since the Phantom Thief fully joined the love race…
I’m glad for those who like it since my little sister has made a quiet return.
Honestly, I feel that with this setup, it could have been a one-on-one story between the inspector from the beginning.
>>9The girl is cute, and it’s probably her charm; they wanted to have multiple heroines.
Even the perpetrator was cute.
>>9Even if I say so, the atmosphere of the conversation was different from the beginning between the inspector and everyone else, so I think it was essentially a one-on-one situation.
Are you saying the assistant was a hindrance?
The character design is super cute, but there’s something regrettable about it.
What is this…
Because you exposed that my parents were dealing drugs, they got caught.
Moreover, because of that, the drug addict who couldn’t buy drugs killed the parents of the girl he had a crush on.
I can’t forgive you, Sid Craft…!
>>16It’s too crappy to pretend it’s a tragedy…!
At least kill my parents in prison!
It may be cowardly to say this now, but…
Wasn’t a one-on-one type of romance better?
>>17In the previous work, secondary characters became the most popular, and there was a disparity in the double heroine setup, so it’s like that.
>>17If we had tried to go with a one-on-one type last time, there’s a possibility that the lethargy wouldn’t have appeared and it would have ended early…
The genre is supposed to be a romantic comedy.
The cases we’re dealing with are so bloody and grotesque that they can’t be covered up by comedy, and maybe that’s why they didn’t fit together.
>>20When comedy involves murder, it usually becomes hard to gloss over, creating a strange reading flavor.
The heroine doesn’t really seem like someone who could handle a one-on-one fight, does she, Inspector?
>>21I think it’s enough in terms of potential because they are physically strong and somewhat useless.
Is physicality related, I wonder…
>>23The above is likely a response from Roboko.
First of all, I don’t really know which heroine is the most popular in this manga.
The absolute number is small, and everyone looks flat.
>>24I think it’s a matter of whether things like who is popular can be visualized if this continues for a bit longer.
Putting that aside, it seems that the inspector is the most popular.
Well, I thought there was no way for Elio, damn it!
Is it the end?
The only murder love comedy that comes to mind is Conan…
>>31Conan is just a main mystery with a side of romantic comedy, so that’s different!
>>31It’s not receiving that much attention primarily as a romantic comedy.
There was potential for the fog cat to become stronger, but…
Well, if we’re folding, it’s definitely the inspector…
It’s about the popularity itself, to begin with.
It feels like it’s the last appearance of the inventor sister who suddenly joins in at the end.
If it had been a bit more popular, they probably could have properly developed the other character arcs too.
I’m sorry, but it gave the impression that you were writing it out of habit.
I’ll aim for a comeback by drawing erotic manga on Jump Plus again.
It’s hard to believe that Sid has such amazing insight but didn’t realize Elio is a woman or that the inspector didn’t notice they were childhood friends; also, the fact that the incident was extremely serious was a major reason I couldn’t really get into it personally…
I can’t help but think it would have been better to have a more lighthearted slice-of-life detective story.
>>40For now, even if it was forced to accept the reason that was revealed later, it wouldn’t be able to get through it until that point was mentioned.
What I think when the end is in sight is that the character creation of the cute heroine is truly impressive.
It’s fine since it’s not about the mystery itself.
When hypnosis is used at that level, it stops being a matter of reasoning, doesn’t it?
>>44I remembered Danganronpa.
It’s the kind of thing where the hypnosis is so strong that anything goes.
I feel like not all female characters had to be considered as romantic interests.
Putting aside the charm of the character for now,
I don’t think it was necessary for the fog cat and the scientist to establish their characters as heroines.
I can’t help but think it’s another romance race story.
I couldn’t feel any affection for the protagonist until the end.
You don’t need to strictly follow Knox’s Ten Commandments.
That is fundamentally a warning not to suddenly introduce elements that the readers cannot infer.
I think hypnosis is the epitome of that.
I think the character development of the heroines is impressive.
But there are so many heroines pretending to be someone else that I haven’t been able to accumulate events with Sid aside from the inspector…
When I seriously think about which heroine I like or which is popular, my honest impression is that it doesn’t really matter.
I hate to say this, but I think the fundamental issue is that readers don’t have enough attachment to choose a heroine.
It might be a comment that won’t get much sympathy, but
It felt like I was watching a play within a play.
It’s like there’s no sense of everyday life for the character, or rather, no domestic feeling.
>>52The coexistence of romantic comedies and unsettling events makes any sense of reality that one would want to have completely vanish.
I can’t depict how to live properly in such a world.
>>53There is a successful example called Conan that has 100 volumes of manga.
There was a feeling that they were intentionally shifting away from that.
At this point, it’s at a level where the heroine’s name is specifically mentioned in the title.
I feel like it would have been better to fix the main.
Comparing it to Conan, which is a different genre, is just ridiculous.
>>56Well then, you ordinary person who couldn’t become Conan.
Both are murder romantic comedies, you know!
It’s a light-hearted work, but for some reason, the culprit is just kind of unlikable…
The incident was more casual, so that was good, huh…
Personally, I prefer works like this one that have a bit of seriousness mixed in.
I think it might have been better not to do the deformed style like in the previous work.
I kind of liked the feeling that the incident was heavy and not quite fitting together.
It wasn’t enough that I just liked you.
I feel it would be a waste, so I thought maybe there could be a plus send or something.
It definitely feels like it’s going to be firmly cut off no matter how you look at it.
The picture is super cute!
The thread image is cute.
Since I didn’t originally spread it out wide, it seems like it might end quite neatly as if it were a short story.