This is exactly it.
It was really good, but maybe it would have been better if they at least stopped wearing the topknot.
>>1But without a topknot, I’m just a bald fat guy…
The story is smart and good, but the visuals are too distracting.
It’s really great, but the overload of elements consumes a lot of energy in selecting and filtering information.
Interesting…
It was incredibly good.
Cried
I wouldn’t have read it if it weren’t for this thumbnail, but now that I’ve read it, I’m wondering if this thumbnail is actually okay.
However, the title is straightforward and fits well, and when I think of any clever alternatives…
Additionally, the topknot subtly serves as a catalyst for breaking the ice with others, making it difficult to outright dismiss it as an unnecessary element.
I kind of like the nickname “Shogun.”
Your heart is too strong.
Just living with a topknot makes one’s heart incredibly strong.
If it weren’t for someone saying it’s a good manga, I would have overlooked it just by the thumbnail.
But it matches the content, so I can’t say anything.
It wasn’t that ghost imaginary friend…
The way the foreshadowing is sprinkled and picked up is good.
There’s a scene at the end where I completely lose it, but it’s not like that at all!
It was interesting.
It was really an amazing story.
The general is probably popular because he’s being photographed a lot with a selfie stick.
It was a good story…
Kyubou is a good guy.
Why did you choose a thumbnail with such a kabuki actor-like complexion?
Is there a cover that makes you want to tap it this much?
Today was another good one-shot, quite a lucky day.
The content of the story is really good, but the thumbnail and title are such a waste…
What the heck is this thumbnail?
The only scar left from the ripped nose piercing remains as physical damage, and that was no good.
It’s quite a heavy theme, and I feel that this hairstyle for the protagonist and the thumbnail image might actually be better like this.
A manga that is different from what I expected based on the impression of the thumbnail, in a good way.
I felt something kind of voyeuristic about it and almost skipped over it just because of the thumbnail.
I think it’s not good to paint a person’s face red.
>>30Kyaaaa!!
In the end, why are you wearing a topknot?
>>32Due to the influence of the large-scale historical drama
It must be tough to maintain the monthly allowance.
It’s heartwarming that the two people around my senior are just nice kids.
It’s the most trendy hairstyle that a restless spirit knows.
The author’s icon was Zangi.
That child of my mother is special to me.
Right now, it’s sad to be on a little break.
The content is completely unexpected from the title, but if you ask me what kind of title and cover would be good, I don’t know.
The ending was good.
It was a really great one-shot, but the discomfort that comes from the synergistic effect of the thumbnail and title at first glance is quite strong…
The red general on the cover has a terrible impact, but upon closer inspection, the four blue Shiina are just what is this?
The yokai are just too good…
I feel a sense of art university vibe.
A cover with a title like this featuring a red-faced, furious fat person will definitely lead to a reclusive fat person continuing to have a terrible time.
You might think it’s a disgusting story like “Bully Japan” where a fat person goes on a rampage…
Huh? It’s really properly interesting.
I felt something in poor taste in the thumbnail, so I ignored it.
The cow is a bit too much of a monster, isn’t it…?
>>47You must be possessed.
So I’m going to take out my piercings…
I wonder if the youkai, who were the end result of bound spirits, have found peace.
I thought Shiina-san’s eyes were bloodshot.
The disappearance of the apparitions and being united with Lord Shiina will serve as the big climax.
It seems to have a level of completeness that could easily be serialized if you explore the back-and-forth of love with Shiina and the deepening of the relationships with the colleagues.
I want the senior to exit in one episode.
I’ve seen a plot where a yokai is nesting in a house and causing a fuss somewhere…
It was an incredibly good story…
Thank you, Anonymous.
I thought, what is this Chonmage about, but it turned out to be a proper setup…
I wasn’t sure if the last yokai had disappeared.
>>56It’s not that it disappeared; it just faded away normally.
The unfolding of the crying red ogre is unfair.
It’s too funny.
On the first page of the opening, show a glimpse of a dismal recluse, and on the second page, include a depiction of being despised even by relatives.
On pages 3 and 4, the protagonist’s unique constitution; on pages 5, 6, and 7, the revival event and a tragic past—up to that point.
The author’s ability to incorporate all necessary descriptions with just the right speed is impressive.
Let’s eat!
The girl with twin tails is cute.
>>62Holding a fork with my left hand and eating like a dog, it’s just so unrefined…
So cute…
In reality, I’m unable to make a move just because my uncle made a sarcastic comment.
Who was it that took care of us, the failed spirits bound to the land, while the youkai were saying such disturbing things? It’s that shout that brings us together in unity…
It seems that many people might have a bad feeling on the first page and decide to turn back.
Remembering how I used to get angry as a child makes me cry; you’re such a kind earthbound spirit.
Since even evil spirits become earthbound spirits, there must have been various things that happened.
“I’m completely purified through my association with the general…”
It seems like that crab-like yokai completely forgot the promise we made that day!
>>70Let’s eat that guy!
Compensate for the visual disadvantage with sincere and serious work and attitude.
It has somehow elevated to a level where individuality is naturally accepted in the workplace.
The protagonist is originally strong in social skills.
>>72Because I was taking care of that group of earthbound spirits…
>>72“The phrase ‘the atmosphere at the workplace has changed’ from my senior…”
I feel like, even though the workplace is probably becoming a nice atmosphere, I’m still feeling uncomfortable.
Crab is… paella!
I’m a shut-in, but I’ve properly cultivated my interpersonal (spiritual) relationships.
The strong impact of the mysterious visuals gives it a monthly magazine feel.
Later, with that appearance and behavior, your specialty dish is paella?
I’m glad the twin-tailed girl returned to her senses… I thought for a moment she crossed the line.
I’m just taking a break too…
So it was the yokai that was the shut-in?
>>78So that’s what you meant…
It’s got that 90s afternoon vibe, doesn’t it…
It’s a personal opinion, so I’m not sure if it will resonate.
I think the thumbnail was good with that wonderful photo…
Good interpersonal relationships
I can cook.
Quick to learn work.
I’m a shut-in of the super type.
The protagonist leaving the house of a recluse has a dual structure with a yokai… that’s skillful…
It was a better story than I imagined, but the cover and title are such a huge loss.
>>84But if I’m asked what kind of title and cover would be good, I would be at a loss…
Probably a famous specialty shop clerk.
It makes me feel like I was raised by a good mom.
It makes you think that even the earthbound spirits lived in a nice house.
The cow is being properly punished.
It was a good story that also blended well with those around.
The title has a double meaning, so it can’t be easily messed with…
I thought it was absolutely a story about a reclusive person indulging in evil.
It was really a good story.
I remembered about a bro in a similar situation.
If Bro and the general were classmates, Bro would definitely say, “Pfft! What a weird guy!” and tease the general while arguing with ChanMio, causing him to not go to school.
It was such a great story that it was surprising.
Amount to make paella
Too much!
I realized it when it was pointed out by an anonymous person.
I really can’t edit the title!
I’m weak to mother characters who realize that the end is near, prepare themselves, and entrust the future to others.
You might think it’s a story about a hikikomori leaving home and facing society!
Well, that element is also present!
It turns out that everyone except the cow-piercing guy was actually quite friendly among the part-time workers.
Isn’t it amazing that a recluse can make paella that’s unbelievably delicious?
>>97Amazing
And with that appearance, they are strong in sumo.
>>101That size looks physically strong, doesn’t it?
I didn’t understand why I became a topknot.
>>99Read carefully.
>>99It’s not because one of the earthbound spirits enjoys it or anything.
I thought, “Isn’t it okay for the general to leave the house since the hikikomori element isn’t that strong?” but I can’t become a manga artist or an editor…
Getting my piercings ripped out is something anyone could think about, but it really hurt.
Why do you really want to put a ring there?
Is the title “Hikikomori” also related to a bound spirit?
>>105Rather, the phrase “hikikomori leaving the house” is more accurate from the perspective of the earthbound spirit.
The general has gone out to work but has not left the house.
Selling artwork is really difficult, huh… If I hadn’t seen this thread, I definitely would have passed it by.
>>107No, that’s definitely an example of a terrible cover!!!!
There are a lot of people in this thread who haven’t noticed this either.
It might have been better to have the spirits say something like “We’re leaving the house too” in an easy-to-understand way.
>>108As soon as you explain the elements of double meaning clearly, it becomes unsophisticated.
Why do two one-shots have the same hairstyle?
>>111Due to the influence of the historical drama…
It was refreshingly pleasant, far beyond what one could imagine from the cover.
Isn’t it a good story…?
>>114Cow response
I have actually seen someone working part-time with a chonmage online.
I think it was Okinawa.
I like how the cow piercings are quietly taking physical damage from the earthbound spirit.
What kind of spirit encourages us to rise from our mess…?
That crab thing has a pretty high level of evil spirit.
It worked out because the people around me were good folks.
>>119Just because you’re anonymous doesn’t mean you need to have hostility towards that crab…
The crab and the performance are just an act, aren’t they?
>>121Were you reading? That guy is even trying to eat Uncle.
>>121Since it became in the form of a crab, it’s an act, but the other times it’s true feelings when Uncle and Shiina-san are devoured.
>>119It might be basically like that with youkai.
I remembered a manga about a battling gymnastics big brother with a thumbnail like a violent death game.
I ended up reading it to the end because it was so well-drawn.
Can I only comment on one-shots on Hatena Bookmarks?
I seriously feel a perverse part of it too.
I don’t want to praise this.
There are two crabs, so it’s confusing!
I cannot use Hatena Bookmark for religious reasons, so commenting is impossible.
To be honest, there were parts I was prejudiced against just based on the thumbnail and title.
I boldly read it.
It was interesting.
>>131The face on the cover looks painful and gives off a feeling that it’s something not meant to be read in the morning…
It was completely different.
I haven’t cried like this from a one-shot in a long time…
I never imagined I could empathize with a character with such a derpy thumbnail…
It’s been a while since they ate someone, and those earthbound spirits definitely have a criminal record.
Well, it probably wasn’t an era with such a rigid sense of ethics.
It was really a good story.
It’s not good to judge solely based on the thumbnail…
Could it be that the story of the weeping red ogre is actually really well-crafted?
Fool! Fool!
You understand when you become a working adult.
The mental space found in this type of withdrawal becomes a resource for working.
>>141This protagonist has a surprising strength of character and kindness, considering they have been a recluse until now.
It was a more refreshing story than I expected.
But somehow… it became a strange impression of being easy to read yet hard to read.
Why is the thumbnail being taken?
>>149You fool!
Fool!
Fool!
>>149You idiot! You idiot! You’re just being noisy!
It’s the most emotional scene.
I’ve been doing housework and cooking before leaving home, so of course I can also handle work…
Easy to read and interesting.
Even though he is a shogun from a samurai residence, the variety of dishes is too Western.
The scene where the girl goes blind was honestly scary.
I’m so jealous of you taking pictures sandwiched between gals with your topknot. I should do a topknot too!
>>158Bald people can’t wear a topknot.
It’s a crab that is treated like a psychopath, but…
Let’s keep the promise with Mom! When it comes to that, I’m really motivated!
I was put off by the thumbnail of the red-faced samurai, but when I actually read it, it was interesting.
It was a story that made me cry a little.
It was a pleasantly surprising one-shot with a twist of betrayal.
In a subculture shop, the shogun hairstyle would fit right in…
The paella is delicious, and the general being fat is somewhat amusing.
I was sad that the yokai disappeared.
I wonder if they tied their hair up because the yokai would be happy…
I didn’t think they would make a cover like a manga for the Sakura Ichi bargain with this content.
I think Kani was probably deliberately playing the heel role, right?
It’s a story like the red ogre that cried, right!?
I had been ignoring it, but thanks to this thread, I ended up reading it.
Thank you.
>>173The other topknot is interesting too.
I felt refreshingly good.
Is the cover red because it’s the red ogre that cried?!
…No, why is Shiina-san blue…?
I feel the anger of the bitches regarding the difference in handling the nose piercings of the other two people.
Well, getting a nose piercing is a natural consequence.
A cow with its gouged eyeball left untouched, despite being able to be restored unharmed.
>>179Those eyeballs might just be an effect of the cursed state.
The people at my part-time job are actually pretty nice, huh…
You might think it’s a story about a hikikomori who becomes violent towards their parents… with this cover.
The clicking power is too low, so I have no choice but to expand it with contents, but I’ll drop out with a tank top and a topknot right from the start.
A proper story born from an unusual visual.
The image of a topknot making paella is already hilarious.