
I knew it would end.
I was just surprised, but was there anyone who could predict this last week?
>>2It’s half a joke, but there were some predictions that Inspector Soufflé would be the one to bring in the Zero Craft incident.
Huh, is it ending!?
>>3Since they are revealing quite a bit of the mysterious parts, it seems like it won’t be over yet, but the road ahead might not be very long…
I thought they were wrapping it up, but will it really end?
As expected, it was unexpected, so I was a bit surprised to see it spread across two pages.
>>6Ah, are you going to reveal the secret here, Inspector, and skip the heroine route…?
Wait a minute!?
The only remaining foreshadowing is the tutor killer.
I thought you started to summarize.
Faster than I imagined.
It seems like the wedding dress is also part of the plan to have Sid save the day.
Well, I guess it’s okay to win if it’s a lieutenant.
It seems like B and Enba are also ending, but will all three be finished…?
If it ends beautifully, then that’s fine…
Well, personally, it’s a manga I really like, so I hope it miraculously survives.
If we somehow handle Zero Craft, we should be able to shift to a romantic comedy.
This is completely over…
Rather, win.
If the ambiguous love battle continues like this and ends, I won’t be able to look forward to the next work…
In terms of rom-com, there were some imbalances because there were quite a few deaths.
I guess it’s difficult to have a romantic comedy unless it’s set in a modern Japanese school.
>>17It’s unreasonable once you incorporate detective elements.
>>17If you’re going to do it on a stage that isn’t like that, you’ll need to build the world quite thoroughly; otherwise, it will be difficult.
It’s the same for all genres, not just romantic comedies.
If you’re a Japanese reader, you can probably understand it without needing an explanation, which is why contemporary Japanese works are strong.
It feels like it’s flowing too much towards the end, and instead, I feel like it won’t end.
Even though we know the true identities of Long Hair and Zero, it hasn’t been revealed why Master Sid forgot about that.
What would it take for something to be forgotten until now?
I don’t want to…
If it’s going to end, then at least let it end with a childhood friend melodrama here, with Inspector Soufflé achieving a great victory and reaching the finish line!
Is Sidcraft coming to an end?
The detective elements and setting aren’t the problem; it seems that the lack of tension arises from the rotation of assigned episodes, for better or worse.
>>24Honestly, I feel like if we had made it a one-shot romantic comedy, we could have won.
>>30Whether I can win against him in a serious match… well, I feel like I might be able to manage somehow…
I should have turned Zero Craft into an erotic craft…
>>25It’s just a bit too much of a serious criminal for a romantic comedy, Zero.
It had been said for a while that my chubby childhood friend was suspicious.
>>26All that’s left is for the serial killer’s tutor to show up, and then all the foreshadowing will be resolved.
I thought it might be summarized in a short series since it’s not really suited for a long-running series from a world-building perspective, but I want to see more of the inspector…
Making the assistant change their image or having the inspector quickly undress them to make them more feminine.
I feel like the initial visual was already a failure.
>>28As for the inspector, I didn’t think much of it since he looked good in his coat.
I wonder if Elio will win.
We teamed up, but did the thief’s identity get exposed?
The ship incident was a bit unnatural, wasn’t it?
Is it a detective story where the detective goes on adventures while doing comedy with a police chief?
Is it a detective story where the assistant flirts while solving cases?
A detective story where a thief and a detective engage in a flirtatious confrontation.
It would be better to narrow it down to just one…
I think there were times when I didn’t need the mystery elements at all because it was noise every time.
That said, it wasn’t like I could normally let them do a romantic comedy while there was a vacant spot.
As expected, there won’t be a multi-end.
I have no memory of where my chubby childhood friend came from.
What story…?
>>40Episode 1
>>44Not there, but the place that appeared in this recollection.
>>48When I talked about going back to my parents’ house.
The inventor just came out.
It looks like I was planning to wrap it up in a shorter time than I thought…
Well, if it’s the inspector, I have no complaints…
It’s really too pitiful that their parents were killed and then they were subjected to hypnotic brainwashing.
>>43Moreover, considering the motives of the mastermind, if Sid hadn’t come, it would have been a full NTR hand.
Seeing that Nue has quickly recovered by steering towards a romantic comedy.
I guess there was no need to be considerate of other manga…
Was this not popular at all?
It was interesting.
It seems like Sidcraft, Super巡, B, and Embers are all coming to an end, but is it really going to be cut this much…?
>>49It’s impossible for B and Embers now…
Well, since soccer and piano are within the lethal zone, there’s still a chance I won’t die for now…
Once this story is over, the ero-comedy will begin with everyone standing on the starting line, right?
To be frank, I think it’s fatal that even when Zero Craft is revealed, there’s no excitement at all.
When a manga is canceled, it’s more about the feeling that it won’t continue to grow rather than it being boring.
It’s unavoidable since it’s folded, but it was also an emergency.
Isn’t it a bit frivolous to kiss someone right after confiding in your assistant and then rush to tell your first love childhood friend how you feel?
>>56The reason I went looking this time is because I thought I would be targeted since they know I’m a childhood friend…
So far, all I know about being fat is that my parents were drug dealers, so I just have a feeling of pointless resentment.
Since you’re making excuses like “for the sake of love,” I wonder if it’s something like having the inspector help show true love.
I think it’s just right to be cliché and predictable.
Isn’t it that you can only get caught if it’s a zero craft?
>>61The part about “the brainwashing is real, but you did it all yourself!” isn’t that a lie?
>>64If you have no memory of being brainwashed by the inspector, then it would be easy to pin all the blame on you.
>>61It seems strange, so this week’s twist is that the inspector isn’t at fault, right? As expected…
It was probably a more proper form of brainwashing originally.
It’s amazing how a former fat person can hypnotize someone with the same ease as a hypnotist. It feels like a plot convenience.
I want it to continue, and I will keep submitting surveys, but I wonder if we can go back to the daily romantic comedy in this state!?
Well, since he’s killed someone, there’s no happy ending for the inspector.
I won, Kirineko.
Is the author into that kind of thing?
Compared to works that are done as just a bonus to the rom-com, the mystery part was surprisingly well-developed.
Well, the bite isn’t really that great to begin with, is it…
>>66If you’re going to put effort into the mystery, I think it would have been better for the heroine to be fixed.
I thought the detective elements were just a stage set, but they were quite solid.
The detective elements are getting in the way of the romantic comedy.
The romantic comedy is hindering the detective elements.
People say that things like Conan are also doing it, but that’s not a love comedy; it’s a proper romance…
>>70When I think about it, most mystery stories have a main heroine.
>>70I don’t really understand the difference between a romantic comedy and romance, but…
In Conan, the pairings that appear are basically all fixed to a specific partner, and there isn’t a heroine race or anything like that.
I need to turn Zero Craft into Lovecraft…
>>71Fungus…
On the contrary, it feels like being a bit too solid has unnecessarily turned it into noise in the romantic comedy.
The inspector was surprised, but the former fat person was depicted too faintly to have any impact…
Perhaps the type of incident that normally results in deaths affected the romantic comedy negatively.
Once this episode ends and relationships are shattered, it seems like it would be quite interesting to return to everyday life, but is that really possible…?
From a position of optimism, there are still several others that seem likely to be cut first.
It may continue normally if it ends up being just a lengthy piece divided into sections.
The story of the detective is interesting, you know…
I don’t want it to end.
If we take Conan as an example, it’s a fixed couple where it’s almost never about which heroine wins…
>>81It’s not a love comedy or anything like that, that’s the point.
>>83No, that’s officially treated as a romantic comedy.
So fast, too fast.
It will continue a little longer, right?
Next month, volume 2 of the comic will be released, and it seems like volume 3 will be the last one.
I bought it as an e-book, but it’s disappointing.
There are many works, including novels, where a mystery comes with a bonus of romantic comedy or romance.
It’s a romantic comedy with a bonus of mystery, so there might have been a bit of a noisy feeling.
It’s not uncommon for a mystery to include a romance as a bonus, which seems to attract customers for that very reason.
Those kinds of things usually involve fixed heroines getting cozy with each other.
In this case, the inspector fulfilled the fate of “the person I’ve fallen in love with becomes the culprit,” so if they are proven innocent, it seems like the end flag will have been raised.
The fact that they’re doing a harem heroine race feels quite outdated.
>>90No…
That’s something you can find plenty of in other magazines.
Even in Jump, even the nue has a certain resonance.
It’s not that the harem itself is bad.
It seems there might still be some grace period before it’s canceled, but is it really going to end?
There are too many manga that seem to be coming to an end this time…
I realized that if everyone is treated equally in the heroine race, it actually becomes harder to create excitement.
>>93As expected, what was needed was the Uruka-chan slot…
Is it a family-run smuggler?
>>86There are no such rules in the secondary arena.
Reprinting is free.
The fact that it’s a harem is already gross…
I hope they don’t portray the protagonist as honest or a good person at least.
If this continues, it would be interesting, and even if it ends, if they wrap it up with the inspector as the main focus, I might submit a survey.
“The story progresses slowly because the protagonist does not know the heroine’s secret.”
I think it was a mistake to frame it that way.
Heroine races tend to be seen as ridiculous, but readers follow them with a serious perspective.
Unless it’s a stage that is somewhat grounded, I can’t cheer for it or predict the outcome.
In a world with the worst security, while we’re having a chaotic comedy vibe, it’s hard not to get distracted while trying to support the girls.
People are dying around, but what will happen to the relationship with the heroine?! It becomes something that is already unclear in genre.
The gimmick at the end is nice.
The part about how having a connection in the past hasn’t turned out well.
Are you going to die even though you’re at the soccer piano and directly below it?
It might be that they’re cutting four at once.
>>104It’s obvious that Chojun isn’t going to die next…
I think there’s no problem with detective + romantic comedy.
The incidents happening here are all serious murders, and this is a bad mix.
It looks like soccer is definitely going to end during this match, and I was thinking it might end with the piano for a total of two, but it seems like three will finish at the same time.
Having played the previous work for quite a long time, I can feel that it manages to wrap things up properly even if it’s short.
It’s crossed the line where the readers might think, is it really time to be doing something as trivial as a rom-com?
>>109Even though there are dead people, when the protagonist starts saying “Wah-wah!” and the assistant goes “Hau~!”, it really makes the emotional tone go missing.
>>109I think it also depends on how you write it.
Even though there are countless gloomy settings where people die, like with the nue, readers are still looking for romantic comedies.
If soccer continues like this, it seems like it will end around episode 20, but I feel like it’s quite rare for a story to end in this number of episodes in the current Jump.
They probably intended to create a dramatic moment by revealing various secrets and then wrap it all up.
Whether good or bad, it felt like it was calculated and written differently from the previous work.
I felt that may have been a bad idea, though.
Even if we continue from here, it would be a mystery comedy with the inspector being in a state of getting married, right?
The mist cat aside, the assistant will die.
>>112I want to see it relatively.
Peeping or underwear theft and other lewd crimes could still be treated as a joke.
If it ends at three positions, it seems like a super tour.
It feels like Sid has given up as the author in terms of the story.
I didn’t really need an assistant in the first place.
>>116I think it would have been better to only have either the inspector or the other one.
Surprised by the detective’s reasoning, I’m wearing a mask.
>>116Being tightly constrained at the configuration level is way too much.
Of course, it can be overwhelming…
The more the romantic comedy where the protagonist is pretending to be someone else continues, the harder it is for me to imagine what happens next, so I stopped reading around the ship part.
The assistant was also weak as a heroine, so it was in a state of how did it even give birth.
Even the Nue suddenly surged up from a situation where they thought this would end, so you can’t tell just from the current ranking.
The thread will almost certainly come to an end, but…
The thief was probably also feeling a bit overwhelmed!
>>122It’s fine to have a heroine who plays a supporting role… but whether a phantom thief could take on that position is a no.
Honestly, increasing the number of characters without any prospect is just a numbers game, so at that point, the author’s skills don’t seem very good.
>>124The lazy teacher who came out from here was too much of a sudden mutation.
But this time, I feel like I saved and drew in a way that prevents this mutation from occurring in the first place.
The last few episodes have been interesting, and if they can continue from here, it should get quite fascinating, but it feels like they would use up all their remaining bullets and end.
It seems like characters like Misery and the sister, which were introduced as new additions, have completely stopped appearing…
I don’t want Elio to lose!
Thinking back, the previous work also had character missteps with the two main characters, which I covered up while slacking off or taking Uroka’s clothes off to fix it.
Following Elio, I also completely unlocked the stored parts of Soufflé and took the true route of Zero Craft, so there’s no way to think this isn’t the end…
It became clear this week that the chief inspector is overstuffed with main gimmicks.
>>132I guess they were writing as if they were the main heroine after all.
The assistant has no heroine power, so there’s no possibility…
I feel like it suddenly became subtle after unfolding it.
I liked the usual laid-back vibe.
That said, I built up enough episodes to at least avoid a complete collapse of the story…
Is it really the time for a romantic comedy?!
It seems like there are quite a few manga with a setup like that, but it was probably tough in the first place because the premise makes it difficult for a romantic comedy to progress.
Compared to the assistant, the inspector is just too strong, no matter how you look at it…
I wonder if the reason I stuffed the inspector with the material was because I was trying to get back at the udon I had the most trouble with…
I think it depends on the audience, including the setting and the early story, but if you want to do a romantic comedy, it’s generally best to set it in a school.
I understand that students can easily fall in love over small things, but for working adults, there are always things that take priority over romance.
It’s been said a lot, but I wonder if it was about narrowing it down to just one inspector or adopting a more relaxed style.
“Among the five of the quintuplets, who was the one I once had feelings for?”
It seems to be the limit of mystery elements that can be incorporated in a romantic comedy.
I can only think that the assistant had no intention of making it a proper romantic comedy.
If you made the character by thinking about it, that is.
Given that there were well-developed tricks for a weekly publication, I hope you’ll try drawing a solid mystery story next time.
“The Quintessential Quintuplets was being read like a romantic mystery while it was still serialized.”
In a romantic comedy, a mystery element is probably necessary.
I still can’t tell if it’s definitely been canceled.
I pray that they steer us in a good direction.
If you stuff a character with good looks, personality, specs, and position as important settings in the story, they can only end up being the main heroine.
If this information was prepared in advance, then the race itself is a sham, and it’s only natural to choose the criminal investigation option.
It’s difficult to aim for something like laziness, but there wasn’t enough of a child that felt like a long shot.
When the heroine is in such a close position as the assistant, she can’t really change the situation much.
It’s unrealistic to just leisurely settle down right next to someone when the relationship has changed significantly.
Also, as for the phantom thief, they would just be caught in the first place, so that’s out of the question.
The more I think about it, this genre often has trouble moving the story forward because of the heroine.
“Who will win? That’s a mystery for the readers in the first place.”
No matter how you think about it, it’s a big plot that was set up from the beginning…
I will be ready for the end.
If we’re going to focus on just one detective, it would have to be a deeper story than the current style of romantic comedies.
Right now, it’s kind of bland…
The heroine race is exciting because of predictions about who will win, but if the reasoning is unconvincing, it can lead to chaos. So when you attach convincing reasons to the heroine expected to win, it can feel like a fixed race, making it hard to say anything definitively.
What about the younger sister route?
Well, to begin with, the previous work ended that way.
Are you going to run the heroine race again this time? Isn’t it another no-game situation?
I think I was also suspected.