
As expected, abortion in a shoujo manga was a no-go.
“Have you stopped being a pimp?”
“I’m glad I didn’t turn on the light” is also a point of modification.
She’s almost just as she is, being an escort girl.
The face of “I’m going to kill you” after smiling is nice, isn’t it?
Because she’s a high school girl, it’s more settled than in the original.
It’s a bit rushed, but I guess it’s okay since it’s a manga.
I wonder if there’s some significance to the various unnatural changes.
It’s okay to have sex, but is abortion not allowed?
I don’t really care, but I was surprised that I couldn’t post.
>>10The two characters have been set to not be able to be written here for a long time.
I’m doing it by myself~
It seems like the last Jasmine phone call has been cut, and it feels like they’re trying to keep Jasmine’s true identity a secret.
I wonder if there would be a problem if I write “papa katsu”… Could someone who is doing papa katsu complain that it’s not compensated dating?
The outfit of the center director during the live stream has definitely changed to one that hides their physique a lot.
The first chapter ends in episode 2.
Papa-katsu is formally not considered prostitution, but there seems to be a difference that援助交際 (enjo kosai) is like prostitution?
It seems that the Ueno Tenchū Incident is also hinted at, and it doesn’t look like the basics have changed from the main game.
>>17But I don’t have an Illumina card, and I don’t have Kisaragi Tsutomu’s glasses either.
There’s nothing about everything Mio said or the part where Azami hands over the letter.
Ayumi’s presence has almost vanished, hasn’t it?
The baby doll with a ribbon was impossible, huh…
“Residents of this channel”
Using【slang】.
You might be “buying women”!
In the scene with the center director and Azami, the Azami flowers are dancing, so it seems like the setting of them being the same person might still be intact.
It’s too suspicious to be talking via telepathy.
I didn’t know if she got pregnant from doing “papakatsu” or if her ex-boyfriend got her pregnant, but the pregnancy was gone and prostitution was confirmed.
It’s not even taking the form of a phone and is just talking to itself through telepathy, so isn’t it more blatant than the original?
This is also the power of clairvoyance.
I want Mio-chan’s voyeuristic photos.
There are parts towards the end where Jasmine’s lines from the original have become the center director’s lines, but it feels like the center director’s wording conveys a sense of anger.
It seems that the center director hasn’t changed, or rather, in the manga version, the portrayal is so explicitly awkward that it’s easy to understand when the truth is revealed.
The pace is surprisingly fast, and it seems like it will be finished before the expiration date…
“I can see through everything about you” is also blatant.
It’s good that it’s been arranged and made a bit milder for easier reading.
She’s really in my head, but forcefully pushing it through telepathy is too much…
Eiko is no longer a procurer, but instead does incredibly elaborate things just to earn impressions from people…
>>34It has been overly exaggerated for the sake of the pimp from the beginning.
It’s strange that “enjoying compensated dating” is okay, but “pimping” and “daddy activities” are not.
It was difficult to express the center director’s conversation to everyone over the phone in a manga.
That being said, the telepathy setting was bold, wasn’t it!?
>>36If clairvoyance is possible, then telepathy would probably be too…
>>36Some people might have reacted with “Huh!? What did I do during the calls?!” during the game, so it might have been made clearer.
Well, telepathy might make it easier to accept the developments later on.
>>38When using a smartphone, you have to put it in speaker mode…
In the game, there are foreshadowing elements like talking to the center director in the underground where there is no signal, or taking a call from senior Jasmine during the conversation with the center director, but well, telepathy works too.
If by any chance the center director had a girl who was his first love, my brain would explode.
>>42It’s good to have a business aimed at children because girls like that will eventually talk about it 10 years later and it leads to a revival.
It might actually be better to push through with that ability, as it adds a more manga-like quality.
I thought things were progressing smoothly, but maybe it’s because I’m skipping the exhausting SNS survey in a good way.
There are many people in that world who are convoluted.
I think it’s amazing that it’s wrapped up properly in episode 2.
That said, I would like to see more emphasis on the shitty depiction of social media.
I have to make people think that social media is terrible, but there’s a dilemma in expressing that through a manga that just follows text-based social media research.
Are you being parasitized by the center director again? It’s so straightforward that it’s laughable for those who have already played it.
This work has a good compatibility with the style of shoujo manga…
This is exactly the area I played today.
>>53Close the thread quickly!
>>53I strongly recommend closing the thread…
>>53I almost wrote a spoiler!
Close the thread and clear it out!!
I accidentally deleted my own spoiler-free response.
Please just close the thread…
Why did you choose telepathy instead of a phone…?
>>58Is it because it was bothersome to write to the center director through Azami, or because I was criticized for wanting the center director to explain it from the start using the smartphone speaker?
Since I was playing a game where I was stuck with an imaginary center chief in my mind, it seems like telepathy would actually have more convincing power.
Well, I feel like if you’re looking at a place like this and get spoiled, it’s your own responsibility.
Ayumi – As a high school student with prerequisites, Azami’s schedule is quite strict.
Even though we were supposed to be from the same high school, why is Sato from Class 2 wearing a different uniform? I thought it was some kind of foreshadowing, but there was nothing at all!
You are skilled at the selection and modification required for serialization in Ribon.
It’s just being ignored because it’s in the format of an ADV game, but in a manga, the disassembly scene would definitely become ridiculously unnatural.
The imaginary center director is a kind-hearted guy straight out of a shoujo manga…
>>66It’s a girl’s manga.
I feel that the persuasive power might diminish with nude images.
Well, maybe it’s about the same.
I feel that this one is simpler as a story.
I want you to supply the light bruises.
The center director is depicted somewhere between a handsome man and a beautiful woman.
It was surprisingly shocking that I wasn’t wearing glasses.
No way… There’s no goddess!
Are they trying to make the mechanism easier to understand with the direct expression of not having glasses and telepathy?
If it’s just about making an impression, it might not feel as much of a great evil as the original work.
I realized that in shoujo manga, the distance between the main male and female characters becomes noticeably close…
The term “5S” didn’t come up, huh?
Is the demolition of the building a predetermined course of action?
The police chief said, “There’s nothing we can do but leave it to the police,” and that was no good.
That being said, Azami is cute.
Is the ribbon’s story parallel or is it different in content?
>>82The ribbon looks very much like a high school girl.
That’s why Mio’s papa activity had also changed.
Isn’t the hole a bit too rough?
Mio-chan doesn’t make silly faces like in a game, she’s really mild.
I’m worried that Mio-chan doesn’t show any signs of depending on me.
Ribon, which will stop abortions, will still provide proper post-photos, right…
I wonder if Jasmine’s age is also reduced by the same amount as Azami’s.
For the age group of Ribbon readers, Jasmine being 25 years old might be just right.
If we reduce Jasmine’s age any further, it will feel very strange.
>>89It’ll turn into some urban legend that I was born in a police special training facility or something.
>>113Ms. Jasmine
“Created by a special agency of public security.”
It might be a “cyborg”!
Thanks to the art style, Jasmine also looks fluffy.
You’re really winding it up.
I thought you would take your time over it.
Jasmin’s rank might also be nerfed…
But why did you choose telepathy instead of a phone?
The discomfort of not switching to speaker mode…
Well, they probably intend to finish it in a few volumes.
The shelf life of topics on the internet is short.
The dismantling part of the game has some brilliant effects, but I don’t really understand what kind of exchanges happen on-site in reality…
Why not just go all in on supernatural powers, right?
It seems like the parts that are difficult to adapt into manga are altered, and we’re just tracing the general outline of the story…
If that’s the case, I would have preferred it if they had boldly changed the story even more.
>>98It’s parallel, so you don’t get it yet!
[Glasses] are
[Because it’s unnecessary]
Maybe it’s better to take it off!
>>99Please think carefully about it once more.
Thistle was completely right! I won’t do it.
>>101It seems that there was no friendship at all in the manga version.
It seems that Ayumi and Masami might have changed even in the current situation.
There is a possibility that it simply ends with the center director as the mastermind.
>>104The SAMEJIMA manager is still around!
At this pace, will the serialization end in about a year?
If it’s structured in two parts, the incident and resolution, it could be wrapped up in about 12 episodes.
They probably want to heighten the excitement in the end, so they’ll likely add a few more episodes or something like that.
Could it be that our disassembly is just beginning! Will we be able to reach the ending together as three?
>>109(Ueno Tenchuu Incident Summary)
There might be a world line where Kimura’s younger sister becomes better.
It might be a world where Mushroom-san has become a handsome man.
I feel like there’s not enough hate on social media to bring it to the same ending.
Respond with a peace sign in the aftermath photos from the escort.
What will my future be like? I can’t help but think it’s your own fault.
>>116So the girls reading this might not want to become like this woman!
It might be a world where Kimura’s younger sister worked hard to become the mastermind.
Isn’t it as if I’m a foolish woman who sold my body thoughtlessly for money?
By the way, even in magazines like Chao and Nakayoshi, they don’t explicitly depict sexual content during the act, but they definitely include strong sexual depictions and violence in these kinds of shoujo manga…
>>120Even when I was a child, there were stimulating works with heroines having children through cuckolding or having relationships with multiple partners at school…
If you’re 23 years old, that’s one thing, but since he’s a high school student, I think he’s a victim who has been taken advantage of due to his lack of depth in thinking.
So it’s natural for my parents to come and worry about me.
Well, if they are a minor, then it’s normally the guy’s fault.
>>119Isn’t it judged that a shining influencer is more relatable to children than a career-focused consultant?
Mio-chan’s humidity is lacking!
The high-speed moving Mio is just like that, huh…
I wonder how Mio-chan’s bed ambush works.
Ayumi might have been disregarded, and the twist could be that Azami-chan is acting while remaining sober.
I wonder why I wasn’t friends with Mio.
I wonder if it’s related to the ending of the ribbon version.
Azami and Mio are both 23-year-old college students in the original story, so there was a reason related to their age.
In high school time, it might not be a connection because it’s not a special circumstance.
A mysterious power has emerged! It’s a bit disappointing not to have a song.
The conversation is progressing at a faster pace than I expected…
I think they would say something like “I think I’m popular because of the manga version of Eiko.”
If it’s at this pace monthly, I wonder if they plan to end it in about a year and a half.
Considering it’s a comic adaptation of a game that has already been completed, I think putting in a year and a half is quite an effort.
>>138In fact, it’s possible that this kind of comic adaptation will have the typical unresolved truth, so you might want to check for yourself if it ends abruptly.