It was about half Tsukihime.

But I liked the nipple piercings.

>>1

Since this clothing is something generated, it’s basically like being completely naked.

Bow down! Do you understand who this person is!?

I think it’s good that there’s a sense of being a slave, even though you’re acting cool.

I laughed at the bold black paint.

>>14

Reading it on Days makes it much better.

I have a piercing in my left nipple.

A title that seems impossible to remember for a lifetime.

>>9

From the comments, it seems that neither the author nor the editor noticed the typo in the names right from the first episode, which is quite amusing.

It’s not a Moon Princess, though…

Why did the protagonist suddenly start killing?

What else is there besides Type-Moon and Chainsaw Man?

>>12

I thought it looked like Mankin.

The protagonist and the readers both have big breasts, so it’s a manga that’s okay…

You said you wanted a fantasy story, so this is just right.

I was surprised to find out that the author has built quite a career, despite it seeming like their debut work.

What the heck?

>>21

He is the heir of one of Japan’s leading zaibatsu, top of his class at a prestigious high school, becoming number one in basketball in Japan while maintaining a cool demeanor, and is now a job-seeker after graduation!

It’s too mismatched…

I feel that it would be tough if the original part isn’t very good and the series continues, relying on the underlying strength.

https://pocket.shonenmagazine.com/episode/2550912965529785685

>>24

It’s been a while since I’ve seen the protagonist suddenly become fast-talking while talking about themselves.

If it were Tsukihime, it probably wouldn’t have such a stimulating chest.

>>25

The manga version is chubby, right?

The nipples were a bit too ahead of their time by about 10 years, being extremely lewd nipples.

>>25

Guh…!

>https://pocket.shonenmagazine.com/episode/2550912965529785685

The synopsis feels a bit like Tsukihime…

I genuinely want to know what kind of editorial meetings approve manga with such a strong influence from the original material.

>>27

Even if I point it out, it won’t get fixed, and on the other hand, there’s nothing else to fill the page with.

~~~! OK!

>>33

I thought the remake had just come out, but it was already four years ago.

Without trying to battle, let’s focus on just one naughty story! No explanation needed, that could lead to a chance.

If you only read the web version, you won’t understand the nipple piercings…

In other words, a sexy Tsukihime?

>>35

Well then, is the manga version okay?

I wonder if it’s really okay that this has passed through the series meeting, even if it’s just a one-shot…

It’s fine since those things come up regularly…

Tsukihime is an erotic game, but…

Despite having strong Tsukihime elements, it still feels somewhat like a typical shonen manga with original elements.

>>42

It’s already easy to be disliked for hinting at a sad past from the start, and on top of that, there’s the boasting about how great things used to be.

Let’s play Tsukihime with Skasaha!

Okay.

(If it’s Nasu Kinoko, he’ll probably let it slide even if I borrow a bit…)

The main character being neither a young boy nor an old man is the worst.

It’s transparent that the author is using it as a tool for writing erotic stories.

Please abandon that seemingly not very interesting template battle setting and just make it a story about a beautiful non-human girl living together!

>>49

Since I showed strength and various things in Episode 1, it might be fine to continue down that path from Episode 2.

I’m a nameless person from the future, but this has been animated and has become a huge hit.

>>50

Nipple piercings are being broadcast nationwide during prime time!!!!?? Well, I guess it’s fine.

>>56

Since Magi is already showing off her blue-skinned giantess nipple chain piercings in the evening…

I can’t get enough of the feeling of presenting my favorite things just as they are, without filtering them through my own lens.

Should I think about it after I give it a shot…?

I wonder why I don’t feel as much disgust as I say I do.

>>55

The estimated original source was about 30 years ago.

“Erotic breasts can hide a hundred difficulties.”

Completely blacked out, it really brings down the mood…

>>63

If you start talking about that, most of the elements trace back to the Bible and it ends up being a copy.

If you establish a flavor and elevate it as a form of entertainment, then that is that person’s flavor.

>>70

That guy.

>>63

I wonder if those original sources were also said to be a copy of XX from the previous generation.

Please make the protagonist’s seasoning a bit lighter…

If it feels like a story that would get banned from Kindle, I would buy the paperback.

Since it’s not a youth magazine, I guess we can’t really expect it to be erotic.

There is a common point that all the women I meet are trying to kill me.

It is believed that Tsukihime and Chainsaw Man mix well together.

It’s tough that it feels so templated that it ends up having zero individuality.

Yet they emphasize it excessively.

Morgan from FGO is mixed in too, right?

>>72

Mix it from a farther place.

I think I should hide the fact that it’s more related to Tsukihime.

The level of trying to ride on the coattails of Type-Moon from the title alone.

I saw someone actually practicing “Draw it just like that!!!” for the first time.

>>76

If you try to practice it, won’t you get caught?!

>>81

It seems that being good at drawing might actually be a bad thing.

>>76

I don’t think it’s as much as a grass teacher.

I mixed together popular female characters from Type-Moon! It’s done!

“The running theme of ‘the protagonist dies and is saved by a supernatural entity, extending their life’ started with Ultraman.”

Everyone else is hiding it better, so there’s no such criticism.

The image in the thread is a bit too explicit.

Where can I read uncensored?

>>82

Magazine

>>94

The boy’s magazine allows nipples, huh…

Rather, this seemingly added nipple piercing is annoying, isn’t it?

I wonder if the magazine will be blacked out as well.

Could it be that this is just a cheap hair clip that looks like a head accessory, but with a cross stabbed into it?

I think mushrooms are usually used as a topic.

Tsukihime and Fairy Land are both games from four years ago, so they are forgiven!

>>87

I don’t think Type-Moon would mind, but…

>>96

Even Higurashi-sensei gave permission after all.

Why are you doing chiku pi?

The feminization of Kuga Shigeaki.

But I think the reason this work is still readable is because the source it plagiarized from is excellent.

The derivative works of Tsukihime are regularly published in the GanGan series.

The fact that it’s this explicit in a magazine is quite impactful.

Even if it’s a romantic comedy that consists of two episodes.

As an introduction, the protagonist is filled with terrible noise.

I wonder what era of romantic comedy I am trying to write.

I’m glad I added it because it probably wouldn’t have been a topic at all without the Type-Moon elements.

>>95

Author (It’s basically Tsukihime, but is that okay…?)

Editing (It’s directly related to Tsukihime, but it should be fine…)

Reader (It’s just like Tsukihime…)

>>105

Edit, do your job!

>>112

In these cases, the author tends to be attacked, but the one who gave the go-ahead is definitely the worst.

>>126

I don’t know if the editor is studying an old work like Tsukihime, and they might simply think it’s an original.

>>135

It’s a recently released game for the Switch in the Reiwa era.

A magazine, huh…

It didn’t really have a Denji vibe, but with just one line of dialogue, it can still look like it, which is impressive.

>>98

I don’t know why, but my teeth feel jagged…

Well, since Type-Moon will be on your side, I’ll just ignore it.

If all the drawers were from Type-Moon, I think it would be tough for the reader.

>>99

Isn’t the design of this protagonist a bit too tight regardless of the drawers?

That’s the reasoning behind it; if you write it as is, it won’t be understood.

Understanding is not allowed.

If you defeat a supernatural being, you’ll have a demanding wife, and the protagonist is lewd.

In other words, it’s a rip-off of Urusei Yatsura.

Is the nipple showing in the paper magazine?

I don’t think there has ever been a protagonist with such poorly matched traits in a bad way.

I preferred the straightforward, typical Heisei character.

I guess the protagonist was the kind I didn’t really like…

>>107

It’s not just that the character is unappealing, but also that despite being set up as the heir to a former zaibatsu, excelling in both sports and academics, why does he have such a gross, virgin-like thought process?

I used to enjoy some works from Type-Moon, but Type-Moon has its fair share of issues too…

It seems like they are also giving a glimpse of things like Dead Apostles and Burial Agency.

>>110

It says “God’s agent,” but this…

I wonder if that sudden sense of invincibility is necessary…

The enemies that will appear later are also something I don’t really understand.

The main focus seems to be on the agents, but isn’t it just a parade of characters reminiscent of those from about 20 years ago?

So, are you saying that Type-Moon is still doing parodies that are quite controversial even now?

>>113

It’s been many years, but Christmas is now in a monkey space where the episodes parodying Kinnikuman are listed and have not been revived at all.

The protagonist is not necessarily a Denji model.

I think the heroine is from FGO.

Is the image in the thread an elaborate collage?

Or was there no black paint at the beginning?

It’s a character design that combines Aruk, Morgan, and Scathach and divides by three.

>>117

The setting combines Aruku and his wife.

It looks like a mix of Aoko and Master Skasaha.

I have enough reason to not use sharp objects…

Since it has become a topic of conversation, it wouldn’t be reasonable to just keep copying everything going forward, right?

But it seems like I won’t be able to create such interesting stories or captivating settings…

>>120

Even if you say that, I already have the names ready for up to episode 3 at this point.

To speak as if the future is certain is something a fool would do.

I’ll forgive everything because it’s naughty.

You can’t see the nipples with digital, damn it.

What do you think I’m subscribing to the magazine for?

I failed with a familiar jump.

(This will reveal that I’m a moon fan if I point this out…)

If you’re going to do a flashy performance, don’t waver!

Simply put, the dialogue is poorly done, isn’t it?

I wrote it down just as it is because I like it so much, which is still better.

Those who lack the ability to create their own stories will face an even more tragic future.

I think it’s impressive that the description of the manga can be summed up in the phrase “a manga that resembles Tsukihime with a heroine wearing nipple piercings.”

If there weren’t a sentence that resembles a manga similar to Tsukihime

Seriously, it’s my version of Tsukihime… and I haven’t really diluted it much.

I can’t see the nipple piercings because of the huge black censoring?

If I hadn’t played Tsukihime, there are some parts that can’t be helped.

>>138

This author was rather someone who frequently created fan works for Type-Moon.

>>147

This kind of innocent type is the scariest.

I think the number of works that copy TYPE-MOON has increased significantly.

A work where heroic spirits fight each other or where you often see famous figures appearing, just like in FGO.

>>140

It seems like the moon chef has recovered and become energetic again after going full circle.

>>140

It certainly feels like that kind of “Record of Ragnarok” has even been adapted into an anime.

Aside from the claim that Fate is a copy of Demon World Reincarnation.

I don’t know Melty Blood, but since they talk about it outside a lot, is it that similar?

>>141

The heroine you killed comes back weakened…

>>141

If the heroine is turned into a vampire wearing white hair and Shimamura clothes, it reaches a level that feels like a comic adaptation?

>>141

After reading this first chapter, you can say you’ve completed Tsukihime.

I’m looking forward to the Ciel-senpai role!

I think it would have been better if it was just either a boy who can do anything or a timid person with low self-esteem…

Before the dialogue and the setting, the heavy blacking out is so extravagant that it somehow… takes away the excitement even without the erotic elements.

>>145

You should read that in a magazine.

>>170

I’m subscribed to the digital version!!!!!!!

But I like it, it has that strong vibe from the early 2000s.

Speaking of which, Shiki was also technically a child from a very wealthy family…

There are regularly rising manga that copy Tsukihime.

Everything has been declining since episode 2, so this will definitely lose momentum as well…

To be honest, I would be a bit disappointed if the second episode strays from Tsukihime.

The fact that Tsukihime doujinshi is no longer young is really hitting home…

If you keep showing your breasts, I’ll read it.

What do you mean by “the latest of Reiwa”? The Olympics are over, and it’s about time for the Switch 2 to come out, isn’t it? I’m going to lose it!

>https://pocket.shonenmagazine.com/episode/2550912965529785685

Um… the seaweed is… terrible.

The only part of the head that was completely black was the chest area, so I wondered why it was exposing the breasts in this situation, but then I realized it was painted black to hide the piercings…

Please don’t do unnecessary things because it gives rise to confusing questions.

A Morgan with the appearance of Aoko in the position of Arcueid from Tsukihime.

What is this Morse code page?

Does the protagonist need to be a former wealthy person?

>>171

It seems that my rich sister will come out from my parents’ house.

>>171

I had no choice but to send my little sister, who is a brocon, to take over my position as the head of the family.

I don’t want to write about various aspects of student life, so I probably put in that I dropped out of Nada High School, but the discrepancy between my background specs, thought process, and current environment is a hurdle.

Since I’m a job-seeking student and not a regular student, there’s no room for my classmate Sacchan to get involved.

If it’s a debut one-shot, I can just barely close my eyes…

>>180

The ones who will be troubled by the developments that come later in this setting.

It’s probably one of those guys who had an accident and almost died, and now they can see strange things, and that’s why they dropped out.

I wonder if the topic of dropping out can be explored more deeply…

It seems that even digital magazines have strict regulations.

It’s an introduction considering future matters.

I think there could have been a better way to handle it.

Isn’t Fate the one from Ryuki? I forgot which came first.

>>186

That doesn’t count.

Despite being socially fulfilled, I feel that those who can’t fit in are actually very much like the protagonists of occult and fantastical stories.

You’re suited for the world of darkness with a rating of S+.

>>187

I was great before, but now I’m unemployed after failing job hunting, so I’m not fulfilled socially.

>>199

It’s the result of feeling a sense of emptiness even though I should have been fulfilled.

It’s so much the same that I don’t know if it will continue like this or if there will be any uniqueness.

>>188

Eventually, I’ll probably be able to see the enemy’s weaknesses.

I want the heroine to stay as she is, but I want the protagonist to be changed to a silent macho.

It’s one thing to have a supernatural immortal heroine.

If I were to wander around in a position like an executor and get killed once by the protagonist, only to revive and become slightly weaker while starting to take a liking to the protagonist, that’s quite clearly a move that’s too easy to understand.

And for some reason, the protagonist can see strange things, has remarkably high physical abilities, and can fight against monsters.

I think it’s not particularly rare to have a genre where great people crossover and battle each other…

If we’re going to do it anyway, just make me a magical fusion of the protagonist who was good at archery.

So the heroine makes arrows and hunts youkai by shooting them.

Then it would lose its original form, right?

If it’s a story where a rich, self-important character gets involved with Tsukihime, I feel it could have quite a unique aspect.

The attempt to keep odd introverted elements is causing a severe distortion.

Is it not the type of guy who is very good at drawing?

>>196

The previous work was a harem-type romantic comedy, so they probably don’t want to depict many male characters.

The protagonist’s personality aside, I feel that the child who keeps saying “is there really a need for this setting?” is unable to deny it no matter how hard they try.

The merit or demerit of that will come later; it’s a serialized work.

Even though they should have been living a life like the upper class, the protagonist just reeks of being at the bottom!

It’s a bit tough.

If there’s an erotic scene at least once in each episode, I might continue reading.

I read it on Days, but the blacked-out sections were too strong, and I didn’t notice the existence of the nipple piercings at all.

Don’t omit even the tricky erotic depictions that contribute to the individuality of the manga!

If a rich, arrogant guy gets tossed around by a non-human girl, it would be a different flavor from Tsukihime, wouldn’t it?

I thought Tsukihime was just borrowing elements from various other sources and was just following a template, but when I read it, it completely exceeded my expectations and surprised me.

Is there really no pride up to this point?

Why do I have to read something like U-1 in the Reiwa era?