I think the author stuffed in everything they liked.

I didn’t really understand the setting, but I like the art, so I’ll try reading it again next time.

I might like it if I just pick the attributes, but isn’t it just a little too… straightforward?

This is something that hits hard for those who like it.

Tsukihime is a game from the Reiwa era.

>>17

Boobs!!!

Tight inner wear!!! Nipples floating there!!!

>>24

App “■”

Nipple piercings, Tsukihime

It seems like something that would be featured in a magazine from the late 90s.

It’s quite a Tsukihime, but if you ask whether it’s at a level that violates the law, it’s not quite that much of a Tsukihime.

I like the art style and it’s erotic, so I’m going to read it!

But it seems like the story will have so many battle scenes that the erotic elements might disappear…

I feel a strong appeal towards nipple piercings.

It seems that this author is quite young, and they might be from the generation that experienced the remake.

>>27

But I drew a Skull-chan parody 10 years ago, you know?

Regardless of whether it’s Tsukihime or not, I think it’s quite influenced by Type-Moon…

You have a flat-chested younger sister who inherited a wealthy family, right?

>>30

There might be twin maids too.

More than anything, “Only I can see it” and “Only I can cut it” is so much like you, Shiki-kun! You were doing it, weren’t you!

I felt a strong sense of déjà vu.

At first, the Type-Moon packaging is too strong, but it is believed that this will gradually leak out.

https://pocket.shonenmagazine.com/episode/3269754496503498427

>>34

Isn’t this manga a bit too much like Heisei’s Shonen Ace over here?

I thought it was a GANTZ suit, but it was different.

I want to be loved by a busty non-human older sister and experience a tit job…

I want to play Tsukihime with Morgan from nipple piercings! I want to greatly praise the ambition and sexual desire, but everything else feels too much like a rehash of Tsukihime…

If Tsukihime were a magazine.

If I hadn’t known about Tsukihime, it might have been easier to accept.

When you know it, it inevitably becomes “Tsukihime.”

I thought it would become popular if it were made into an anime.

>>42

The anime of Tsukihime isn’t particularly popular.

>>50

There is no anime for Tsukihime…

>>43

I heard that the web version of Comic Do is less, but I haven’t tried it.

>>43

If you wait a little while, Piccoma will basically become a paperback version without any seaweed.

Right now, if you want to see a much smaller version than the Magapoke version, you can check it out by subscribing to Comic DAYS or buying the paper magazine.

Please erase that feeling of déjà vu a little more.

Did you just say that Aruku isn’t sexy?

Let’s look forward to the kids who read this first saying that Tsukihime is a copy.

I like big breasts!

I hate it because it had seaweed on it!

>>52

If you go see the author X, there are unedited versions without seaweed.

Well, if it’s a standalone book, it will probably be without the binding.

It feels so nostalgic.

I don’t hate it.

I don’t like you, but…

I like you.

Tsukihime and Chainsaw Man?

I laughed a little at the fact that there were six enemy leaders, and their names were all different.

I don’t think I’m as bad at drawing as I might seem.

I think it might be a bit hard to see because there is a lot of information or because there are many lines.

The protagonist’s monologue is crammed and painful!

You’re quite remarkable, but are you unemployed?

But this cool beauty spreading her pussy and showing it off is really so erotic…

Long time

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Hmm.

It is.

Page 70 is tough to read…

The amount of information in the illustrations and dialogue, as well as the page count, should stabilize from the next time onward, right?

I was surprised to hear that you are the creator of “Eru no Wa.”

I feel that recently the trend has come full circle and modern fantasy battle stories are starting to gain popularity again.

>>71

So, will something like Vedgonia also appear?

A remake is fine too.

I like girls like this.

But the protagonist man doesn’t quite grab me…

A protagonist with excessively high physical abilities has emerged…

>>73

It’s not a mystery; I was in the basketball club.

What’s going on with the paper mosaic?

>>74

The areola is slightly exposed.

>>74

Only around the nipples.

The moon princess who saw the appearance of Morgan in the character of Alku.

It’s unrelated to the thread image, but does the protagonist from Tsukihime have any physical abilities other than the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception that are his own?

>>80

It contains spoilers, but I was born into a family that does assassination work, and I received training in martial arts as a child, so I have my own skills.

>>80

Well, they are originally a family with crazy physical abilities.

Compared to Dad, it’s still pretty normal.

If I just draw Tsukihime as it is, it would become something completely different.

The seaweed is fine, but it’s way too big.

I can’t help but smile because the first person that comes to mind is Kuga-san.

>>85

Perhaps──the nipple too.

>>89

As expected.

Speech bubble too

It was black…

Why do you have a piercing on your nipple…?

>>86

Even the characters from Type-Moon are doing it.

>>86

You’ll understand if you buy the paperback.

>>91

Got it! So I just need to buy this “Tsukihime” thing, right?

It’s strange… The fact that the heroine resembles Aoko is being ignored because of her seductive older sister attributes…

>>87

It seems like Type-Moon is trending, so let’s totally copy it!

>>87

I think there’s a part where it’s bad that the attribute of a naughty older sister and Aoko-san don’t connect with each other.

It’s not “onee-san,” it’s “kaisan.”

Well, there are quite a few manga drawn for younger people who don’t know the original source…

◯◯ is a copy of Tsukihime.

Well, I think anyone who wants to read this story will be satisfied if they buy the paperback of “Shingetsutan Tsukihime.”

>>97

I’ll buy this one instead of going out of my way to buy such an old book, Grandpa.

>>104

I liked this so much that I ended up buying it…

>>97

It’s not that erotic over there, and it’s not even a harem!

>>119

It’s as if Arcueid isn’t sexy at all.

>>122

Please provide the Japanese text you would like me to translate.

>>122

It’s somewhat erotic, but the image in the thread is even more erotic.

The structure is similar to Tsukihime, but the setting has a gel-like feel typical of 2000s mystery-themed erotic games and light novels.

>>98

The atmosphere of modern supernatural abilities.

Especially if the protagonist is a student.

Mr. Kawahara also turned Yumemakura Baku’s martial arts novel directly into a manga…

From here on, it’s up to the individual’s efforts.

Is something like a nue trending?

Hey! This is───what it means to kill something───say it!!

I haven’t seen someone say “copying Type-Moon” in a long time.

It’s only natural that the first episode of the new series is somewhat similar to other works.

>>106

Please don’t worry, as it was mentioned a lot in the thread that was created yesterday.

If the nipples are large, you need an auxiliary nipple when giving the baby breast milk.

Having big breasts makes it hard to hold a rugby ball, so being average is best.

The right hand of death from the heroine is way too much like Tsukihime, isn’t it?

Draw it just like that!

I think it’s better to give them a knife or something because chopsticks are too uncool and don’t look good at all.

>>114

If you get that close, well… isn’t that a bit much?

>>114

It probably became a chop because a knife was too straightforward.

In the end, it still doesn’t look good, and it doesn’t really stand out, so I feel like it would be better to really go for a more dramatic shift.

If it were a parody, the Type-Moon fans who love parodies would be very happy.

I will make sure that you take full responsibility for killing me.

It’s funny how this is just too much of a direct copy of past works, assuming that imitating them is common.

It seems like a combination of Aruk and Skasaha.

>>124

And the contents are almost Morgan.

Even the name of the great saint Azaka starts to look like that.

It’s fairly common to get a head start with a sense of déjà vu.

When it comes to bringing out originality for differentiation, the author’s true ability is revealed.

>>126

To be honest, the parts aimed at differentiating from Tsukihime are less noticeable than the parts that tried to differentiate the protagonist from Denji.

Could it be that the strength of the chop is influenced by 007…?

The beginning is too straightforward, but I guess it will change a bit from here on… surely…

The agents of God are quite a few in the mundane world.

As expected, this can’t just be passed off as a little similarity!

I wonder if this protagonist will take them down in one swift move.

Do you need battle elements?

If you don’t know Tsukihime, you can enjoy it with fresh feelings…!?

Is it possible to create a situation where, for some reason, the right hand cannot tremble, resulting in a crisis where damage cannot be dealt?

>>138

I feel like I’m awakening and about to awaken to the legs of direct death.

Even the name Yekunahat is starting to look like Arcueid to me.

I wonder if this is from the time when it was said that the submissions for Jump were only coming in that resembled Chainsaw Man.

>>141

Since the art style was exactly the same, there were also people who were responsible for the artwork based on Tatsuki’s original work.

>>141

I think the author is quite experienced, so I don’t think it’s that kind of thing; I believe it’s a natural talent.

The art style is quite old-fashioned.

It might be a case where the editor isn’t familiar with Tsukihime, so it got approved without any issues.

Is the night coming?

While Tsukihime has a high level of power, Arcueid’s breasts are not this big.

>>146

That’s where we can differentiate ourselves.

Make the most of your strengths.

>>146

I feel like the remake emphasized the big breasts a lot.

I felt like the character was talking too much with the settings, so can we tone that down a bit?

You’re going to dye your hair red anyway.

Well, to have a seamless experience of bare-handed fighting in a modern supernatural action drama…

I have no choice but to use my fists, a knife, or something supernatural to produce a weapon.

People who know Tsukihime are not the target audience for this manga.

It’s not a setting that can be crammed into one episode…

Alc is also quite big, right?

By just combining my favorite works, I can’t see the originality of this author or what they want to express.

The author is quite a fan of Type-Moon, so they are probably influenced by it.

Let’s steal from Mahoyoru!

>>161

The heroine’s appearance has a resemblance to Aoko.

Aren’t you drawing what you want to draw…?

A title with a nice-sounding German word!

As long as you include the credit for the original work by Nasu Kinoko, it should be fine.

I think it’s good for the character to be lewd.

Maybe seeing that the inuyasha of the yokai exorcists is relatively popular made me think it’s okay to be more straightforward? The result of that is this.

If you draw it as it is, won’t it just end up looking like it is?

Isn’t Morgan almost entirely about marriage hunting?!

I love older heroines too, this author.

I think I’m being loved by the girl I helped on the way to the interview venue.

That girl looks like she might get attacked by the enemy and die.

>>173

It seems like I could open the gym storage room lock with a chop.

>>176

If that’s the kind of character they are, then that’s fine, but I think it feels too out of place when the character’s personality ends up being like a failed version of Denji within that setting.

Introducing a group of people like that suddenly changes the worldview too much…

>>179

That theory won’t work unless you’re a newcomer!

>>179

The problem is that I’m not bad enough to not get caught!

The title is “Arcueid of Type-Moon.”

This magazine only has one installment, and I’m not even a veteran!

The master says whatever they want, like that everyone can’t get off alone or that they are erotic but not really, so let’s combine the heroine traits of Arcueid and the shameless elements of Morgan!

>>182

If it had just been this much, it would have been fine!

Even so, as long as it’s interesting, it doesn’t matter!! The first episode is a bit overstuffed and can be hard to follow, though!

>>184

The protagonist has no redeeming qualities as he’s weak despite having a sexual desire.

The fact that the combat method is a hand blade doesn’t have much potential for looking cool visually…

Alright, everyone, let’s do more of the fantastical things we usually hold back on!

Because I’m good at drawing, I get caught.

If you’re not good at it, you won’t be found out.

The girl might have conveyed enough of a monster-like atmosphere that if we provided more details in episode 2, we could have reduced some of the information.

I have a strong feeling that fantasy will become an addition to eroticism.

There are precedents of plagiarists being revered as gods, so I hope you can make an effort.

>>193

Mushrooms are like that in the first place!

If it weren’t for Chikupi, I would have supported it.

>>198

Since it’s a harem story, it’s fine to support other heroines.

>>203

Is this protagonist really in a harem story?!

What part is Morrigan?

Stop making baseless accusations.

It’s not that it’s difficult to understand, but it’s fine to copy a mainstream template that has already become commonplace and is truly in vogue.

I don’t think the introduction of Tsukihime has become that universal of a template.

There aren’t many stories that start with the protagonist killing the heroine.

>>200

It’s not common, but you can see it here and there.

>>205

It’s not common, so it really stands out and makes you think, “This is it!”

If you go all the way to a more classic genre, it’s safe.

It feels like a hand blade that has precisely stripped away the charm from the original source.

The names all sound like they were thought up by a middle school student, making it even harder to focus.

Even if the development is the same, if you added Cthulhu elements to this and made the thread image Nyarlathotep, it would have been forgiven.

The seasoning was not enough.

It’s all blacked out, and I thought, where’s the nipple piercings? But there they were…

It is written in big letters on the cover.