
84: Japan Otaku Reviews
Last week, since Sumire-chan was a complete mess, I dropped the sushi car to regain balance…
Stop with the raw things.
Falling asleep is bad.
When I simplify the drawing, it instantly becomes cute and that’s not good.
The previous outfit is the cutest.
Are you the type to draft it out with libido first and then finalize it?
You shouldn’t draw 18+ live creatures in an environment where your roommate and work colleague can find out right away!
Eek!
Sure! Here are the extracted characters from the image:
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Kira! Huh! It’s embarrassing!! This kind of outfit··· You’re looking at others, right? Don’t look away from me. Snap! Ahn (blush) Tonight, it’s bothering me. I know you see it!! Hiccup. Twitch twitch. Cool. Kya···!! Pukaa! When I see this eye, I can’t think of anything else··· uh… Your face is so cool~~~~~! …amazing, so cool, hot! Hoo! Why? Why does it feel this good? Cool. Kya!! I’m going to die! O, ra, o ra!! Mochitto!! N, n, Ponpoko!! Squad
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The art style is old and harsh…
The delusion of the boy involved with the teacher feels pure.
I’m so cool when I’m with Sumire-chan.
If I write it normally, it’ll end up having the same touch as this manga.
It’s funny, but at the same time, I can’t help but feel embarrassed too, and that sense of shame is intense.
>>12
Professor Satomi is really skilled around there, isn’t he?
I guess I won’t be able to see that lady again, Susikaru…
Bringing a tablet is a bit of a hassle, but instead of getting angry,
From the outside, it might seem like she’s getting too close, so it’s impressive how Sumire-chan is thinking about changing her behavior.
Even though the situation in the erotic dream is arousing, why does it feel so strange when Sushi Cal turns it into a manga?
The style is still old-fashioned…
Sumire, you really shouldn’t take the tablet without permission and show it to others…
Isn’t YuuP just fapping to Sumire-chan?
>>19
Even the scene of cuddling in this story is like that, you know.
No matter how you think about it, you either have no sex drive or you’re broken, Yu-P.
>>20
Because I diligently followed Sumire-chan’s idol era until the disbandment, my brain has been thoroughly wrecked…
Is there anyone who draws raw material doujinshi with someone they’re living with?
I haven’t produced any breast milk either.
No matter how many times I see it, it makes me think of a smile like Kakuhō’s.
It’s impressive how this manga has gained a loyal fan base…
>>24
The style has a consistent demand throughout all eras.
>>24
Because of the loyal fans, you know…
I’m reading a bit with the free portion of Magapoke, and it’s interesting.
>>25
The direction of what’s interesting keeps shifting… interesting…
>>32
At first, it had a somewhat emo vibe, but now it’s a magnificent exhibition of rare creatures.
The impact of beautiful sushi is amazing.
Urokuki-sensei’s thin book was overflowing with libido to the point of being creepy.
The art style had its quirks, but I was well taken care of.
Sushi karma is a bit…
Otter
You capture the characteristics well, it’s skillful.
You’ve properly transformed it into a work, well done!
Sumire-chan’s actions are terrible, but she is also quite a victim… yeah.
Anyway, I’m only looking at Yu-P’s face…
The developments are too similar…
>>39
(As a fan) I’m grateful…
Poor Mika-san, being shown erotic manga by her niece and son…
Wow, you have a cool face!
Since Sumire-chan and Sushi Karma have started to get along well.
You need to properly drop the stock… you’re repeating that, aren’t you…?
How can I say this?
The absolute defeat soldier will never be portrayed as “actually a good guy.”
I feel a strong will.
My body is like that, so my face quickly becomes like a manga, and it’s so vivid.
Crispy crispy crispy crispy crispy crispy crispy crispy…
So, will YuP end up with Sumire-chan in the end…?
>>47
I want Yu-P to get together with his classmate Megane-chan.
>>47
Even if I’m hugged while wearing underwear, it feels like there’s no longer any chance for anything…
I can’t help it because I saw it in a dream.
It seemed like they were slightly reluctant, but they can draw NTR now.
I thought you liked being pursued by young DKs, but now it’s just that you purely like their faces, isn’t it, Sushi Kalu-sensei?
Well, I was thinking it’s the time they usually sleep… but then they just bring it to work normally.
If I could create this just from a dream, I think I would gain fans.
I’m laughing out loud at a standing pee scene for free on the web right now.
Isn’t this author just too good at lifting you up and then bringing you down?
But to be honest, that dream has faded.
The artistic style seems to go beyond the Heisei era and is more like the Showa era, doesn’t it?
>>56
There wasn’t anything like this even in the Showa era…
Since the publication is in Young Magazine, I feel a strong will that the heroine must adjust to that level.
Publishing the erotic drawings that I secretly created without permission is a deed that can definitely serve as a motive for murder.
The real YuuP definitely won’t interfere.
I think Sumire-chan will accept it just as it feels in the dream of sushi car.
While the embezzlement arc with Sumire-chan was criticized here, it was well-received in the reader survey.
>>65
As expected, the readers of Young Magazine are above the nameless stage.
I wonder if this sushi character design is when it’s crumbling or not crumbling…
In other words, the existence of the previous work is just too much of a noise.
Why are you adjusting to this Young Magazine…?
“Is that all you’ve got, ‘cool face’?!”
I like both embezzlement episodes and pachislot episodes.
I gave up on the dream of becoming a bride.
>>73
I’ve completely become NTR-inclined due to the developments so far…
Sharing a bed in our underwear, even Sushi Kalu-sensei can’t help but imagine that.
Isn’t Sushi-Karu-sensei a former idol, but hasn’t been revealed?
I was reminded that the appearance is good during the event chapter.
I will continue to appeal my helplessness!
Is Sushi Cal Yu P a strong fire force, but does it have a break?
Or have you awakened to NTR and are enjoying it with a fried brain?