On the contrary, I’m intrigued by a novel that gets criticized so harshly.

Hey, uncle…

It was really painful, like a comment from the opponent, stop it.

Do we really need that information about how painful it was…?

>>12

Absolutely necessary.

Mr. Nitoku was a grappling expert…

I thought they were hardcore brawling fighters.

>>15

Like a zombie that keeps getting back up after being knocked down by Riu-kun multiple times.

Well, if it’s supposed to have erotic and grotesque elements but the content is thin and the language is difficult and hard to read, then of course…

It was really painful.

It will probably move in the second half.

>>18

The uncle is starting to look only like a strong Junji Takada…

Novels that are painful to read…

>>19

Even just looking at the current fragmented information, it’s extremely difficult to read and it’s also completely lacking in entertainment value…

As I thought, it turned out like this…

That’s the kind of person he/she is.

>>24

As I thought, it turned out like this.

As expected, it turned out like this.

That guy missed all his predictions, right?

I only understood that reading Nitoku’s novel is painful.

>>29

There were also uncle’s highly accurate predictions.

Well, being hit while doing a Russian hook leaves an impression, but my main profession is in Sambo.

As expected, this is how it turned out──

>>32

It was really painful.

>>37

This doesn’t relate to the current topic, does it?

It’s been like this since the days of seeking the way, hasn’t it, uncle?

By the way, if you’re in the realm connected to horses, you can certainly launch attacks from outside of consciousness.

I killed three people in an instant with that connected thing.

Bluff…?

In the early days of seeking the way, he was an ordinary karateka, but after one unexpected incident, he gradually became an eccentric old man…

I can’t help but feel sorry for the critics who were made to read it.

That tough 〇〇 gets knocked out in one hit!? It’s a thankless role, but it’s easy to understand as an embellishment, so it can’t be helped.

There is no problem with Mr. Nitoku, as he has shown a rather unorthodox toughness.

Compared to that, uncle!!!!

>>44

It will be from next time, uncle…

As expected, it turned out this way.

Is it reading torment or reading imprisonment… I have to do it, after all.

Since he is the original liar, that uncle.

During the time your uncle was seeking the truth, wasn’t he analyzing more seriously?

Well, the predictions this time are serious, but…

That guy missed all his predictions, right?

Didn’t you gain something from your battle with Liu-kun, and also grow as a novelist?

But if it’s Uncle Tori, I guess he’ll do it reasonably well.

>>52

Uncle’s fighting style is plain, but his skill is genuine…

>>52

In this situation, I would probably be the strongest.

Actually, the teacher is extremely tough, isn’t he?

Considering the description of the grave stone, it seems like my uncle would really put up a good fight.

Rather, it has reached a point where critics are willing to read it.

>>58

It’s common for critics to read books they don’t want to read for work…

>>58

It’s the job of critics to read.

It was really hard.

>>58

It seems there are no technical issues as long as there is a renowned novelist as a mentor…

>>65

I wonder why I can only write such crap?

The character depiction has been said to be terrible, but

Well, since he’s a close friend of my uncle, he must be quite capable.

It must have been really painful…

Isn’t what uncles generally do similar to what Nicola does?

>>66

Is it that the accuracy and power are different, perhaps?

I’m definitely stronger than that wild, bone-breaking monster from last week, old man.

Could it be that the “unexpected prediction uncle” is a Wakatsuki type?

Mandrake is that kind of…

The uncle is somehow genuinely strong in his pursuit of the way…

Critics need to face not only terrible manga and horrible novels that are hard to read, but also the even more broken entities below that.

Well, we are in the same school as Wakatsuki-san.

>>72

The Rokushinkai was a training facility for blind spots, wasn’t it?

It ended in the blink of an eye after a long time without the two virtues.

I wonder why they are publishing it…

It’s a bit sad that Nitoku was actually in the mood to fight for once.

With a little addition, you can read a bit of Mandragora, can’t you?

>>77

Seriously!? I’m really curious, so I’ll go call them!

Well, I thought it was strange that Nitoku took the vice-general position instead of Kuraki, who was making his debut, but he got taken out quickly anyway.

Even fragments that can be glimpsed seem like they could cause indigestion, but it’s impressive that such writing continues for an entire book.

My uncle’s strength was probably a few levels above mine about 10 years ago.

The relationship between the two people’s abilities is also likely to change over time.

Well, this time the main focus is likely to create a showcase for the guys from the Seekers, so it seems I’ll be giving way to the three of them.

Since I haven’t shown any uncle-like qualities yet, I’m still on the path of seeking the way.

I think Ryu-kun has shown quite a bit of talent.

>>86

I might have still been unfamiliar with Japan back then.

>>86

I feel a similar sense because Lolon has increased his appearances and is talking a lot more now.

>>86

Speaking of which, the people in the Underworld get along pretty well, don’t they?

>>101

It’s just because there was a lone loser…

>>101

I’m playing mahjong…

Mr. Wakatuki is just seriously making predictions and getting thrown off each time…

Toa seems too much like a real human, and I feel like he doesn’t belong in this world.

The uncle is more like the original of a liar when it comes to predictions.

But didn’t Toa-san punch their siblings when they ran away from home?

>>91

I think they just got countered, didn’t they…?

Recently, Nittoku’s face hasn’t been stable, but when focused, it returns to the usual face.

I should have shown it to Ryuki-kun before releasing it to the world.

Right from the start, betting 1 point on a counterpunch shows how terrible the old man is at this.

──As I thought, it turned out this way.

>>100

This guy…!

So these guys were gathered for just three minutes, huh…?

>>105

Maybe this is the first round, and we will go through it several times.

Well, compared to Kurushi who is exhausted, Ouma-san seems energetic, so I can feel some difference.

>>108

Age… is that what it means!?

>>115

If it’s with you, Ouma, it shouldn’t be that different!

>>122

Isn’t the horse still quite young even now…?

>>128

I think I’m around 30 years old.

>>147

Mr. Ouma, please take Kaede.

>>154

An old man loses his temper in hell.

>>128

It seems that Mr. Ouma was 28 years old at the time of Ashura, so he should be 32 now.

It seems that Kurushi was 34 years old at the start of Omega, so now they are 36 years old.

Since Nitoku is someone who fights for money, I’m not quite sure where he stands…

Even Nicola is part of a group of foreigners playing Mahjong together.

Hikaru-kun is extremely disliked.

Hated to an unbelievable extent.

I have only read works by Haruki Murakami, but I feel like “The Residents of Mandragora” is quite lame even as pure literature.

It feels a bit excessive to spend a whole page repeatedly describing the withering houseplant and him, but it’s still a normal sentence.

What kind of development would make me feel pain from here?

>>112

Without any development, the portrayal of the pot and the man’s inner thoughts will continue…

It’s not that I can’t read Mandragora, but given the pace of the unfolding, this just keeps going on and on…

During the rivalry, the Rengoku side was quite tense with the Kengan side…

Since it was also meant to bring out the hidden motives of those involved, even without the annoying Hikaru-kun, the atmosphere probably wouldn’t have been pleasant.

>>114

A completely unknown masked person suddenly intrudes, and it’s a torn cheese.

It’s only natural to say, but while the Kengan Tournament is a proxy war between companies where they kill each other, Purgatory is a rule-governed underground fighting arena, so it’s understandable that there’s a difference in attitude among the participants…

Um… I can write it now…

>>118

You can’t improve your writing skills through mixed martial arts.

There’s probably no one who likes Hikaru-kun except for old men.

>>119

Maybe my sister likes Hikaru-kun.

>>121

Because I’m hiding the fact that I’m paying for treatment…

>>119

That old man is just as eccentric as the dark rich of the junket bank, so it can’t be helped.

>>119

You probably don’t like Hikaru-kun anymore, who has lost the challenging spirit to face things head-on, just like an old man…

>>119

By the time I became a loser in the competition, I lost all interest completely.

The mention of the “Three Powers of Rokushinkai” means that the bald old man has fallen in rank.

It’s amusing that Loron hated it to the point of not talking at all.

I wonder if they’re calling in specialists from different genres to spar by virtually connecting with each other.

>>130

No matter how much you do it, it probably won’t feel enough.

In any case, it makes sense to engage in battles with someone who has different skills that you lack.

Mandragora is complicated, and the content is thin, so this is tough.

I could have written back then, but I chose struggle instead of a pen.

“The self-proclaimed masterpiece is too melancholic.”

Mr. Oma’s sparring is interesting, but…

Will you draw a similar amount for the training of Hikari, Wataru, and Ryuki as well…?

>>136

In terms of settings, they are supposed to be strong, but I don’t feel like the people of Kure are very strong on their own…

But the teacher has properly completed and published a novel, so they’re better than someone anonymous who has left a half-finished novel abandoned.

>>137

Even if compared to a professional, an amateur…

The person who avoided the situation had a terrible attitude, but died before being disliked.

I think around 100 copies of the novel have been sold, right?

>>141

If the members of the Kengan Association are buying it out of obligation, then it is a natural piece of junk…

It’s sad that Liu-kun is getting attached just because we had a good fight, so stop it.

It seems that Mr. Nitoku’s terrible novel has somehow gained a somewhat enthusiastic fanbase…

>>146

Like a fan of bad movies.

I remembered the Sasuke vs. Nezu battle.

A review that shows the critic really read to the end.

I thought it would be pretty impossible for Nito since it wouldn’t be a contest unless it was at the level of Kureishi.

The characters in Kengan are often older than I expected.

>>153

Omega has quite a few years on it.

>>153

As I’ve accumulated a certain amount of age and experience, as an Omega, I progress on a monthly or yearly basis…

I might like the teacher’s novel a little.

Is there anyone who could write the whole text?

>>174

It wouldn’t be strange to spend a month just for a little extra addition…

I wonder if Hikaru-kun fell into the common pattern where everything comes to a halt once he gains a title.

Isn’t the teacher being made a professional fighter in the narrative?

>>160

I think I’m making money as a fighter…

>>160

Regardless of the person’s feelings, since the main source of income is from boxing matches, isn’t the main occupation clearly that?

>>160

In terms of income, that is undoubtedly the case…

I wonder if showing you the video of Mr. Oma saying “Are you going to do it too?” would make you go crazy…

Mr. Watakuki will be wrong with his next story, but since the uncle will be wrong within that story, the rank of liar is different.

>>163

I think I was off by about two pages during Kubo’s first match…

Uncle, even the injury to your eye is a lie!!

The only thing I can show respect for is strength…

>>169

It’s similar around there too…

Stop it, uncle!!!

>>171

I don’t have any two virtues, so I’m earning money through underground fighting and using the money I’ve saved to write novels…

>>172

The earnings from the Kengan matches are enormous, so if you just focus on writing normally, you can avoid getting involved with underground fights for the most part.

Why are you living in the style of a literary master from the past, teacher?

>>178

The old literary master style is exactly what Professor Nito admires, isn’t it?

>>178

I think I’m doing this because, rather than the other way around, I want to live in the style of a literary master from the past.

Even though we’ve only shown you a few suitable places since we gathered, why are you starting to get a little swayed, Toa? Are you being honest?

If it dragged on, the suffering would come, so I had no choice but to finish it quickly.

It’s impressive that even in the style of a literary master, you don’t go into debt, teacher.

It’s fine to read just one page, but if you read it all the way through, it’s dramatically slow in pace.

It’s subtly interesting to wonder if the author is writing something like this within the story.

I like the current development and it’s interesting, but how come there’s absolutely no sign of connecting to the very first match between Koga-kun and Ryuuki-kun?

>>183

It couldn’t be helped.

>>183

They might just be people who only look similar…

>>203

After that, the first generation of a bug that resembles Kouga-kun was beaten up by something that resembles Ryuki-kun…

During the quest for the way, my uncle’s predictions have never been correct even once…

There was a literary master who supposedly jumped into a river, claiming he couldn’t become a great writer without getting tuberculosis.

Professor Nitoku seems like he would still be just fine even if he did that.

My uncle tends to say things casually, but he holds onto them quite a bit, which is a hassle.

>>188

Did you just say it’s bothersome? Hey, right now?

>>191

I really think so.

If it ends up being difficult, then the content is thin and uninteresting, and there are probably unnecessarily complicated and excessive expressions.

It’s okay, but have you already thrown away the one who fights on the opponent’s turf, like a stone?

>>195

I struggled more than I expected and got tired, so I thought I’d quickly head to Narushima.

>>195

When it comes to Nitoku, it’s that power-driven straight punch he showed in the Ryu fight, right?

>>195

Isn’t it correct to say that overcoming a counter tackle with a counter means fighting on the opponent’s turf?

I often use expressions I like multiple times, so I feel like the conversation doesn’t progress much in relation to the word count, which is quite familiar to me.

Aren’t you losing at the stage of seeking the path? Aren’t you losing? That’s what an old man would say.

Is it the blood of Narushima that holds on to things strangely?

Did the current Ouma manage to maintain his status just by not letting his opponent use the same condescending style?

If you can play a light-hearted match against a first-time opponent like Kureshi, then…

I think I’ve finally reached a level where I can compete to some extent with those who appropriately go out drinking.

>>204

Is Shokken good at combination techniques?

You can’t counter against the opponent’s ultimate.

It’s annoying that there’s an atmosphere of just pretending to be an idiot…

There are times when I’m thinking quite deeply about things…

Stop the traffic jam of jokes.

Do you have something like a fist eye, uncle?

It’s amazing that not only martial arts but also literature is given attention, resulting in this strength.

Hey… isn’t that someone who can read Mandragora normally?