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[BanG Dream!] I tried writing a strange document with a challenging spirit, but the amount of text keeps expanding and becoming redundant, and my vocabulary is at a middle school level, which frustrates me.

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Perhaps those who can write significantly revise a large amount of what they’ve written and compress it drastically.

I have become skilled at studying the structure by reworking and adapting existing creepy texts.

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I need to read a lot and take in various things.

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It’s a straightforward method, but copying long works by authors like Yukio Mishima by hand into a notebook can improve your skills.

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I’m picking up the brush after a really long time, but I’m starting to feel like I won’t make it in time for the next broadcast.

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I thought that being a writer is tough.

I used to be so desperate to increase the word count in my essays as a student, but I never expected that making them shorter would be more difficult…

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Is the number of mysterious document authors secretly increasing…?

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I only have the situation I want to write about.

I can’t write sentences.

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So I just get by every night with my fantasies…

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I’m worried if my writing is correct or if my tone is right even if the thread grows quite a bit.

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It’s okay if you don’t have a vocabulary level of commercial literature!

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It’s become too much to stick here, so I’ll probably put it in a storage or something.

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If it’s really not good, it’s okay to delete the thread, so let’s just toss it out there for now.

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I really want to explain everything, but I truly feel that the room for interpretation and the margins are important.

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>>13

The work itself has a style that makes you read between the lines quite a lot.

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If you think something is strange, ask AI.

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You don’t need to have a high vocabulary, but those who are good at writing weird documents tend to have a high resolution of perception towards the world and a strong ability to think.

People like that tend to have a high vocabulary.

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I haven’t seen them lately, but it’s amazing and scary how the person from the customer service center can pick up replies and post them in about 10 minutes.

I thought it was probably a self-reply… so I was surprised when my own reply was picked up and written about.

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The fear of a bizarre document with an unusually high vocabulary.

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If you think it’s too annoying, you don’t have to worry about it because you can just close it and not read it.

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I can clearly understand that writing engaging text requires a sense of style.

The way of saying it might be off, but you can feel that the ideology is visibly present and off-putting in some short texts, while others are easy to read.

It’s usually too much writing and getting lost when it doesn’t fit in one post.

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If you steadily continue to operate a blog and share your thoughts and short stories, it will grow.

If I lack input, I will also read books.

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Recently, that person’s bad ending was pretty high level…

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It’s coming… the era of the great girls’ band mysterious texts…

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Vocabulary and stuff like that will come later.

Let’s write every day.

I’ve achieved four weeks of consecutive posting on my Shibu account, and confetti is flying everywhere!

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Just because it’s easier to enter than painting, it doesn’t mean anyone can write it…

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Maybe it’s strange to fit everything into one response after all.

I can’t do it like Nanashiko!

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Since it’s 15 lines and 1000 bytes, it’s fine to base it on the lines or situations I want to write.

If necessary, we can even omit the explanation of the place and time.

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It can become a repetition of the same phrases.

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>>28

There are ways to make use of that as well.

The way of tying is often generally the same.

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When summarizing briefly, it is difficult to determine how much to trust whether the reader can grasp the intention.

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Did you finish writing it?

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How to write well.

Let’s ask Hoshika-chan! (Prompt)

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I want to do something about my vocabulary fluctuating with each sentence.

I can write the introduction and setting in great detail, but when it comes to emotional descriptions, they end up being all vague and fluffy… ugh…

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I tried counting it and ended up with over 1000 characters!

That’s ridiculous!!!

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>>34

In such cases, it’s time to divide!

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It’s okay to rely on the strong words from the main story for your feelings…

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If it gets too long, one strategy is to extract just the parts you want the most to read.

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I was thinking of wrapping it up at 100 works for now, but I’m definitely going to go for it in February…

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>>38

Unknown names for the daytime Mana-chan and nighttime Hatsuka?

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>>41

No, that’s not it.

Those two are amazing, aren’t they?

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>>38

For now, throw everything into Shibu.

Because I read.

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It’s a good idea to refer to those who post every day.

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Creating works, not just writing, makes subtraction difficult.

The ultimate form would probably be something like haiku.

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I’m happy to see that what I’ve often seen here on Shibu is being mentioned.

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First of all, you want to read the character interactions, right?

So it’s okay to omit the date, time, and place.

The character’s actions can be rough.

It’s fine to hint at feelings without writing them in detail, using dialogue instead.

The strange document is completed!

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I think it’s fine to start in script format.

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There’s a character and a situation, right?

Are you going to prepare an introduction?

After that, the characters will probably dance on their own, right?

Alright!

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First-person recommendation

Even if your vocabulary is poor, you can get by with expressions that sound like that character.

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Vocabulary skills will improve as you read a variety of things.

Dialects, huh…

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At this moment, this child thinks like this… and once I start to fantasize, I just can’t stop.

Just… surrender!

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Just imagining the inner thoughts of Aine-chan, who is watched over by the spring sunlight, makes words overflow.

Messy

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100 is amazing, I can’t even reach 20.

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This isn’t a story about a strange document, but rather about my writing. When my opinion gets targeted unexpectedly and turns into a confrontation, I want to respond like this, but I can’t articulate it well, and my mind goes blank…

Let’s stop… Let’s talk calmly…

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Just say what you want to say.

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I’ll do my best to revise and edit for now.

Thank you, Nanashiko.

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I want to become a literary master!

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“Are you going to the battlefield after becoming a master of swordsmanship?” That line hits hard.

Anyway, I’ll write it down.

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“I wrote only two works after my mind was burned by ‘Eh…'”

Both have grown by three digits, and everyone feels the same way.

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As expected, it sank around 2 AM after about 10 replies.

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I thought about giving up since I wasn’t making any progress at all, but when I see it mentioned in the thread, I feel happy and end up writing anyway.

I’m the type that grows when praised~

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Serious strange documents do not grow…

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I am impressed by people who suddenly create a bizarre document that smells strongly of virginity from a decent bizarre document, as they clearly understand how to handle virgins.

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The fear of seeing “Yeah” increase even though there are no replies.

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>>65

Even Mutsuki-chan just looked at Akari’s notebook and said, “I read it.”

I’m sure you must have various thoughts about it.

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It’s fine to just stand casually~

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I like that mysterious document.

It feels like a silly couple.

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I usually write in script format, but when I tried to write emotional descriptions, it ended up sounding like a thesis.

What are you trying to say…?

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Mutsumi stands still in despair.

Like that

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I occasionally like those strange documents.

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Here, even the kind of writing you think is just the back of a flyer will be enjoyed.

The more supply there is, the better.

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Strange documents are great, aren’t they?

I feel like it is conveyed.

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Huh, um, is it okay if I write that!?

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>>74

Aine-chan is free material that can be paired with anyone…

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>>74

Just write it!

Rather, combinations that others haven’t explored much are valuable.

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I feel that getting replies here and increasing bookmarks on Shibu are not equivalent.

No matter how many bookmarks increase, it’s lonely that there are only 2 or 3 comments.

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>>75

Huh? There are no comments?

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>>75

Shibu’s comments are a high hurdle…

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What’s important might be the momentum.

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Because it’s a cry from the heart.

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I usually don’t write novels, but there’s a strange charm that makes me want to.

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I want to try writing something like “Mutsusaki,” but I wonder if it would be better in the main story.

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It seems that the unnamed creator is deeply affected by the argument between Nyamu and Shoko in episode 3.

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Virgin type

Coupling system

Horror genre

Various strange documents are circulating around the bulletin board.

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Mutsusaki is rather hot right now.

It’s okay to write what seems likely to happen in the main story.

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